A touching composition

"The weather is changeable, it was sunny just now. How can all of a sudden ... "I can't help complaining. There was another cold wind, and I couldn't help shivering. Sneezing one after another, my nose has been ignoring me. I had to bite my bullet and finally got to school. I rushed home without saying hello to my good classmates. ...

"Jingle bell ..." Why didn't anyone answer the phone? Oh, by the way, mom and dad are on duty in the hospital. I am in a daze. My head is dizzy and heavy. I looked at my watch vaguely. "Oh, no!" It's already half past eight. I picked up the receiver and heard a familiar voice: "XX? Why haven't you arrived at school yet? The first class is over. Is there anything wrong? " "I ... caught a cold yesterday and overslept." "So that's it. In the future, you should pay attention to the weather changes and add clothes in time, but don't worry, rest at home today, and I will find a way to make up for the missing classes. " "well! ..... "I nodded hard, eyes blurred again. ...

Second, summer.

The sun is high in the air, the trees beside the poplars are smoking, and the green leaves are like thirsty mouths. I was sweating like a pig after physical education class came down. The students went back to the classroom, huddled under the electric fan, blowing cool air and drinking delicious drinks. I sat alone in my seat, trying to quell the old protests, all because of my memory. My mother filled me with water last night and forgot when she went out in the morning. I can't remember how many times. Go to the grocery store to buy. The wallet has been in deficit for a long time. Alas, bear with it.

When I was upset, I suddenly got out a cup of coke that was spraying a chill, and I couldn't help but stare big eyes. "Drink!" "But what about you?" "Me, and." "Well, thank you!" "Don't worry! Friends should help each other! " I quickly inserted the straw and took a long drink. Ah, a chill goes straight to my heart, which is really cool!

Third, autumn.

Maple leaves are red all over the hillside, and leaves are everywhere. How can you miss such a beautiful scenery?

I walked alone on the path, enjoying the boundless scenery. In the distance, a man and a woman are kneeling. As a third party, I didn't want to worry about other people's happiness, so I turned and climbed up the hillside. After walking for a while, I couldn't help looking back at the close lovers. Only to find that two people are scrambling for something. It didn't take long for the man to leave angrily, leaving only the sad girl.

I can't help shaking my head regretfully and walking on. ...

Fourth, winter.

The cold enveloped the whole city, and my hands were red with cold and stiff. Mother gently rubbed my little hand with her warm big hand and then covered her chest. I looked at my loving mother, and a warm current welled up in my heart, and tears rolled down my cheeks.

I really hope it can freeze during this time.

Moved by the four seasons, I learned to cherish. Because I cherish it, I recorded all these feelings.

Moved by the aftertaste (official document from gw9080.com)

When turning over the book, a ginkgo leaf slipped quietly.

I bent down to pick it up. I was shocked to find that this was given to me by my deskmate when I graduated from junior high school. On the back, it says, "Take care, friend!" "I don't remember whether there was an impulse to cry at that time, but now there are tears on the yellow leaves. Come to think of it, there is still a kind of mood in this world called moving.

For a long time, I seem to have forgotten the feeling of being moved. Is my heart cold, or is it filled with something irrelevant?

A friend once wrote me this sentence: "The reason why we passed each other was not because we missed each other, but because there were two words missing in our lives-moving." Indeed, our hearts are no longer sensitive, and we no longer carefully collect the slightest touches around us. Only when I missed it and looked back, did I find that I really lost a lot.

There are always people who complain that there are fewer and fewer touching things in this world. However, as long as we calm down and think about it, you will find that touch is everywhere.

Tired of reading, my parents peeled an apple for us, which was touching; When you are thirsty, your friend will bring you a glass of water, which is touching; When you are depressed, it is touching to get a comforting word; When you are happy, it is touching to have friends to share your happiness with you; On an ordinary day, it is touching to receive a small blessing, even if it is only a petal or a leaf. ...

Man, how many ordinary things touch him every day! Perhaps, sometimes it is because of their triviality that we turn a blind eye. There is a saying: "People are moved because they live in love." There is love in the world of mortals, and love in the world. What reason do we have to let mediocrity blindfold us and not feel touched?

What is touching? A thousand people have a thousand answers. However, no matter who you are, you can't tell a person who has no feelings what is touched. Because moving is not spoken with the mouth, but with the heart.

Touched, such as refreshing spring. After drinking the spring, our hearts become clear and bright.

Touched, like an intoxicating sea breeze. Feel the sea breeze, our hearts become pure and spacious.

Touched, like heartbreaking snow. Appreciating the snow makes our hearts quiet and peaceful.

When the world has no moving footprints, it will become a frozen world. Ruthless.

Friend, please pull your heart out of the mud! Please make room to carry this enough to make us remember the touch of our life!

Touched, order all of my heart incense (from official documents of gw9080.com).

There are more and more tall buildings, and the space is getting smaller and smaller. More and more indifferent, less and less warm. And moving is to interpret the connotation of human nature in a light but moving way. -inscription

I still feel full with tears in my eyes.

I opened the window in the morning, watched the sunlight penetrate every leaf, and talked to life in a silent and simple way. I was moved.

Walking in the evening, watching the sunset, savoring the artistic conception of Li Shangyin's "to see the sun, for all his glory, buried by the coming night", I was deeply moved.

Touched, it ignited the fragrance of spiritual home and haunted people's lives.

While the times are developing and the economy is developing at a high level, has our spiritual home been deserted? Have we missed a corner of our hearts?

In a hurry, how many people stop to listen to their inner voices? Most people are too rough in life and gradually become indifferent.

The streets of Manhattan, new york are busy with traffic. A little girl stood under the tree and refused to leave. People were surprised to find that she was waiting for the last leaf to fall in autumn. The child is innocent, and she will be moved by an ordinary natural substitute.

People who lack emotion are not real people.

There is no real development in a society without emotion. It lacks humanistic nutrients and can only go desolate in the end.

How long has it been since we were touched by those beautiful words? Li Bai's chic, Du Fu's melancholy, Tolstoy's vastness and Hugo's grandeur.

How long has it been since we were moved by those noble people? Qu Yuan, who created a warmer sun in winter for the people; Wen Tianxiang, who sowed the lofty righteousness of "Life is short and no one dies, leaving a fresh heart to shine on history"; Su Wu, who is three thousand miles away from the big fellow. ...

Touching is not a simple tear, nor is it superficial sadness. Touching is a humanistic spirit and a spiritual voice between people.

In today's highly developed material, where does our spiritual road lead? Learn to move.

When one heart is no longer far away from another, our society will be warmer. When everyone can feel the vibration of others' heartstrings, our society will become harmonious.

"I came to this world to see the sunshine." Won't balmont's words touch us?

The faint fragrance comes to the nose, and our material home and spiritual home will be full of enduring flowers, towards the distant.

comment

If an author always follows the old path of himself or others, his articles will make people feel deja vu and nothing new. Therefore, the composition is original.

In fact, the originality of the composition is not mysterious. To sum up, it is nine words: write what you want to say in your heart. This perfect composition is like this. From the heart, expressing the true feelings, the short "inscription" is proof, and the fragrance between the lines of the full text is proof.

The fluency of the full-text language and the combination of narration, description, discussion and lyricism make the article not only beautiful in connotation, but also beautiful in form, especially in taking care of the topic and deepening the theme in the conclusion of the full-text sentence.

Feel it, move it (official document from gw9080.com)

Time is seamless. When we suddenly look back and see through our hearts, there are always some memories that leave deep traces in your life.

Whenever I think of it, there is always a long-lost impulse in my heart, which is touching.

No one will deliberately seek to be moved, because this is a simple truth and a tremor of the soul. When we see our companions fighting for this group, we can't help cheering for them, and we will cry when we fail and when we succeed. What rises from the tip of our nose is sour, but what gushes from our hearts is sweet. Many people always like to listen to some old songs, which may not sound so good, but those familiar melodies and simple notes can always remind people of the past and recall the mood when listening to this song. Similarly, whether you think of sadness or happiness, there is always a touch that haunts your mind.

In fact, in the long river of life, I am never moved.

Parents' concerned eyes and haggard back day by day are touched by life.

A friend's letter, a short message of blessing, is a comfort to you who are lonely in the distance.

Life is like this, we inadvertently say hello, a greeting, a smile, a little fate ... these things hidden in our hearts are a truth, which has been profound for a long time, even unforgettable for a lifetime. These warm memories will come out unconsciously when we are lonely and feel warm.

Therefore, every time you hold an old photo that was accidentally turned out, don't be surprised why you shed tears. Maybe that vague number is what you care about.

Therefore, there is a red leaf floating in the dream. Don't be surprised at it for no reason. Maybe it is the treasure of your life.

So, when I read an exquisite essay by the window, don't be surprised why my fingertips tremble. Maybe that philosophical deduction is exactly what you have experienced.

And moving also needs to know how to experience and aftertaste. Have you ever thought about giving when others give you love?

I have heard such a story: there was an old man whose husband died and his children left, leaving her alone. She felt that life meant nothing to her, so she went to the seaside to end her miserable fate. Just as she was walking on the beach, a girl came face to face and gave her a deep smile. Suddenly, the old man felt a beam of sunshine in her heart. Life had not given up on her, so she decided to live a good life.

Just a smile and a touch can make an old man accept life again, so let's hold an umbrella for others in the rain, give a warm cup of tea to strangers, give a bunch of flowers to relatives, and even a bunch of nameless grass. As long as it's not perfunctory, it's not mystifying, just expressing your feelings. Holding that simple and fresh blue with your sincere eyes will make people cry.

Life is beautiful, and touching others will touch you.

Philosophers say that as long as wisdom is unique, even if you smile everywhere, you can feel a kind of love, a taste, a charm and even a philosophy.

What moved me was the slowly melting river that had been frozen for a long time under the spring breeze;

What touched me was a red plum, standing proudly, floating a faint fragrance in the snow;

Touching is a clear spring flowing in the jungle;

Moved by the endless night, the moon is like a hook;

What is touching? A thousand people have a thousand answers. However, no matter who you are, you can't tell a person who has no feelings what is touched. Because moving is not spoken with the mouth, but with the heart.

Grateful heart (from official documents of gw9080.com)

There is a feeling called gratitude.

It is easy to be ignored, but it is full of the most sincere feelings in the world. Some people may say, "We are in an era when gratitude is not easy and it is not popular." Gratitude seems to have nothing to do with us. But when you enjoy life and taste it with a grateful heart, you will experience all kinds of happiness that you have never experienced before!

For example, people can be grateful for a good night's sleep and open their eyes; Enjoy a good night's sleep and make yourself feel comfortable. Pushing out the door, the weather is really good, and people can be grateful; Thanks to the blue sky and white clouds and the breeze, I feel comfortable. Buying breakfast, the girl who sells breakfast smiles and makes people feel grateful; Appreciate the girl's smile and give yourself a good start. A good beginning is sure to bring good luck. These simple pleasures only need you to have a grateful heart.

But what if there is no gratitude? People will find many excuses to belittle, belittle and even turn the good things that others have done for themselves and what happened to them into bad things. "He owes me", "He should", "Nothing to be happy about" and "He should have done this a long time ago" are common excuses. In fact, everyone is choosing their own path. Family, relatives, friends and classmates can help each other, but it is not the relationship between who owes who. Help is out of love, not out of debt repayment. If people can understand this truth, their lives will become warmer.

Man is a magnetic center, and different magnetic centers attract different things. You are the core of good things, and good things are easy to happen to you; You are the magnetic center of bad things, and bad things can easily happen to you. Human gratitude is an important part of the magnetic center of good deeds. With it, good things will keep falling on you. When others help you or do a good thing for you, you are grateful and express it, and people who work for you will also feel happy from it. The constant pursuit of happiness is the law of human behavior. This law makes people very interested in things that bring them happiness. Next time, people who have helped you will be more willing to help you. When something good happens to you, you should be grateful. Gratitude can enhance and prolong people's happiness about good things, and happiness can make people have a better attitude and work more efficiently. In this way, a good thing is likely to be the starting point of several good things. In this way, good things will continue to fall on grateful people in new ways. Similarly, ungrateful people push away from themselves not only a good thing, but a series of good things. Then why don't we be grateful?

Gratitude connects people's life with the source of happiness and happiness, and people's hearts will become very healthy because they are often nourished by good emotions.

Let us be grateful for the wonderful music and simple melody, just like a quiet pastoral in the air under the blue sky. The cello sings slowly and deeply, like a soul exposed to nature. Sighing from the depths, the soul is comforted by music.

Let's thank all the beautiful things that nature has given us, such as the change of seasons, the rushing river and the chirping of silkworms. Such as catkins; Full pond red lotus; Smog, these vivid pictures are also writing a hymn for our lives! Baptize the soul.

Let's be grateful for sincere friendship, which is music decorated with youth and holy life, and it is a hymn of incomparable youth. Please put your hands on your chest quietly, and you will feel the word burning in your chest like a flame.

Let's be grateful for setbacks. It is impossible for a person's life not to encounter difficulties or even disasters. Please don't mind the difficulties. Maybe it's a lucky start, a life test and your life experience, which will make us more mature and know ourselves more clearly.

Start with small things, let your eyes see things worthy of gratitude, and let your heart feel grateful. What people pay attention to, what things will become more and more real. As long as you keep doing it, after half a year or a year, you will find many beautiful things in life and many things to be grateful for. When you make this discovery, your life will become warm, happy and satisfied.

For more information, please refer to touching topic composition examples.

[Topic design]

In our life, there are many moving examples. Sometimes it's sound, sometimes it's color, sometimes it's state, sometimes it's scene. ...

You must have experienced many touching things in your life. Please write a composition on the topic of "moving". Can describe experiences and express feelings; You can comment, comment on the world, and so on

note:

1. Make up your mind. 2. Style choice. 3. The topic is self-made. 4. Not less than 800 words.

[writing instruction]

People's feelings and emotions are always influenced by the objective environment, only by accidental events. This is the touching place. Knowing this, when we write a composition with the theme of "moving", we must first mobilize the accumulation of life, recall the people or things, feelings or scenes that have touched us, and choose materials with rich connotations that are worth chewing and pondering repeatedly. Writing such a topic composition can of course be lyrical or argumentative, but organizing the above materials as the main framework of the article is the basis of lyricism and argumentative. Otherwise, the feelings expressed and the theories discussed will become passive water and trees without roots, which will not only infect readers, but also make them bored and stay away. This is a place that must be paid attention to when writing a composition on this topic.

From the content, we can write great feats, trivial things, miracles of nature and extraordinary craftsmanship. But one thing, this is definitely something that moves you and your readers.

When it comes to touching things, you are by no means making them up. Thinking of the topic of 1999 college entrance examination "tenacity-the character I pursue/overcoming fragility", many candidates wrote about their parents' death, their own car accidents and so on. This will show how tough and strong I am. Is the writing touching? Can you earn tears of sympathy from the marking teacher? The answer is self-evident. Therefore, when writing this kind of article, we must pick things that are touching enough in life and express them in simple and frank words.

Naturally, how to arrange and use the above materials in an article can vary from article to article. It is a writing method to write the above materials as the main part of the article, and then trigger the necessary lyric or discussion; According to the needs of writing, it is also a writing method to sort out the above materials and intersperse them in various parts of the article to write essays that are "scattered in form and condensed in spirit"; Even if there is only narrative, no lyric, no discussion, it is not bad to integrate feelings into narrative and express their feelings implicitly, so that readers can figure it out and play with it themselves. There is no certain method for writing. As long as the content of the article can focus on the topic, explain the deep connotation of "moving" and show a positive value orientation, it should be said that it meets the requirements of the topic.

Eternal complex

Shanxi Baiyun

Although the geese pass without trace and the years are silent, the fleeting time flows without a trace in every gap of life. The fleeting waves will always wash away in the distant heart, slowly swing away like ripples, and the petals fall gently in the wind. What makes our sadness, joy, sadness and joy turn into rain and dew, penetrate into the depths of our souls when we are unprepared, gather all our emotional experiences and launch a round of attacks in the quiet night? I explore, look for, this magical power.

In the dark blue, the stars in summer and the bright moon in autumn are hazy, mysterious and broad-minded. Night attracts too many dreams, so it is unfathomable. People who want to know about it will often be moved by it and fall into it. Looking up at the sky, the ancients used stars to predict good or bad luck. Today, how many meteors secretly wish. Things have changed! Brilliant, tragic, sorrowful and sorrowful history is rapidly turning in the chaotic world, for thousands of years and ten thousand years, but with a flick of a finger. And there are still some relative stillness in the absolute movement of this world, right?

Silence. For a long time, between the dense fog and the mist, a hole was opened, and generate gave off a red light, which soaked the world. Sunrise is the most perfect animation in the universe. Even if there is always a round of life in the foggy sky at dawn every day, I am still willing to look through the layers of chemical smoke, with an almost worshipful mood. No matter how depressed and distressed you are, you will be contained by this gentle color. Your emotions, spirit, will and feelings will melt in the blood-like brilliance, and you will feel the inner shock: your eyes can accommodate so many beautiful things, and your space is so vast!

This energy source not only injects freshness into daily life, but also guides us to carry out perceptual cognition and rational thinking. It illuminates the world and our eyes, just as human civilization illuminates history. What has been excavated in thousands of years of cultural accumulation is the moving factor provided by nature. The waves of the Yellow River beat out the Confucian civilization handed down from generation to generation, and the torrent of Amazon washed out the magical Mayan culture. Although we are stupid, we still can't explore the thousands of forces provided by nature. After all, civilization is moving forward. Nature chooses some right people at the right time, pours out its long-sealed connotation, lets him find the so-called inspiration in an instant, and endows life with elasticity. Kant, a modern philosopher, said, "Looking up at the starry sky and wandering in the forest is enough to give me a chance to meditate." Li Bai, Mao Zedong, Goethe, Beethoven ... they all talked to nature silently and were moved by nature. Then, they either carry the world or transform it.

In the vast space and time, we are really insignificant microorganisms. It is really a lucky thing to be able to face the same nature and accept the same touch with countless predecessors at such a young and heroic age. Whether or not nature chooses us to be the one who can accept its treasures, as long as we work hard, we are moved and fully understand, and we have no regrets.

Touching is the magical power given to us by mother nature and the eternal complex of human beings to nature.

[opinion]

This "magical" article revolves around a philosophical question-what makes all human emotional experiences sublimate into a magical force, makes rational deep thinking, and explores the connotation and true meaning of "motion". Then, we saw a young man who can think and is good at thinking, interlocking and advancing layer by layer; So, we heard a sharp, powerful, meticulous and rigorous reasoning from an author who can give good examples and choose examples. The ancients said, "There is no fixed method for writing." You can see this here.

touch control

Zhao Qi, Shaanxi

When turning over the book, a ginkgo leaf slipped quietly.

I bent down to pick it up. I was shocked to find that this was given to me by my deskmate when I graduated from junior high school. On the back, it says, "Take care, friend!" "I don't remember whether there was an impulse to cry at that time, but now there are tears on the yellow leaves. Come to think of it, there is still a kind of mood in this world called moving.

For a long time, I seem to have forgotten the feeling of being moved. Is my heart cold, or is it filled with something irrelevant?

A friend once wrote me this sentence: "The reason why we passed each other was not because we missed each other, but because there were two words missing in our lives-moving." Indeed, our hearts are no longer sensitive, and we no longer carefully collect the slightest touches around us. Only when I missed it and looked back, did I find that I really lost a lot.

There are always people who complain that there are fewer and fewer touching things in this world. However, as long as we calm down and think about it, you will find that touch is everywhere.

Tired of reading, my parents peeled an apple for us, which was touching; When you are thirsty, your friend will bring you a glass of water, which is touching; When you are depressed, it is touching to get a comforting word; When you are happy, it is touching to have friends to share your happiness with you; On an ordinary day, it is touching to receive a small blessing, even if it is only a petal or a leaf. ...

Man, how many ordinary things touch him every day! Perhaps, sometimes it is because of their triviality that we turn a blind eye. There is a saying: "People are moved because they live in love." There is love in the world of mortals, and love in the world. What reason do we have to let mediocrity blindfold us and not feel touched?

What is touching? A thousand people have a thousand answers. However, no matter who you are, you can't tell a person who has no feelings what is touched. Because moving is not spoken with the mouth, but with the heart.

Touched, such as refreshing spring. After drinking the spring, our hearts become clear and bright.

Touched, like an intoxicating sea breeze. Feel the sea breeze, our hearts become pure and spacious.

Touched, like heartbreaking snow. Appreciating the snow makes our hearts quiet and peaceful.

When the world has no moving footprints, it will become a frozen world. Ruthless.

Friend, please pull your heart out of the mud! Please make room to carry this enough to make us remember the touch of our life!

[opinion]

This is an article on life perception. The article starts from a delicate place: a bookmark of Ginkgo biloba leaves given to me by my deskmate when I graduated, which is now yellow. Picking it up moved me. Therefore, the author creates a feeling that we are often entangled in some irrelevant things, but it seems to be left out and moved, becoming indifferent and numb. In fact, "moving is everywhere, everywhere." After enumerating many examples that touched us, the article puts forward the question of "what is touching" in a different style, and answers this question from the front with a set of parallelism sentences at the end of the article. Throughout the text, the context is clear, the cohesion is compact, the language is fluent and the connotation is profound.

I cherish the sunshine and hide the warmth in my palm, waiting to open my heart and give those lonely children a bright smile.

-Inscription.

"Crack, crack", lively firecrackers come and go, loud voices echo each other, venting the joy in people's hearts. Brilliant fireworks bloom in the sky, fall in the sky like stars like black silk, and shine like diamonds in the dark. The air is filled with a thick atmosphere of joy, intertwined with the colors of strings on TV, and I am excited.