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Peacocks fly southeast; Southeast Fly the Peacocks; The Peacock Flies Southeast

Peacocks fly southeast; Southeast Fly the Peacocks; The Peacock Flies Southeast

Wandering five miles away

Shisanneng textile element

Fourteen studies and tailoring

Fifteen bullets

Sixteen recitation poems

17 years old is the wife of the monarch.

My heart is always bitter and sad.

Since you are a government official,

Stay chaste.

Cheap concubines leave empty rooms

We seldom see each other.

Woven by chicken crow

Don't rest every night

Three days off, five days off.

It's too late for adults.

Not because it was woven too late.

It's hard for couples.

I can't be driven

Stay and do nothing.

Can be white, can be old.

Repatriation in time

Officials can smell it.

Pastor A Mu is in class.

My son is already very thin and handsome.

Fortunately, this woman came back.

Sleep with each other

Huang * * * as a friend

* * * What happened in 2003.

It's been a long time.

Unbiased bus bar

What do you mean, not thick?

Mother is a government official.

Henaitai District

This woman has no manners.

Act on your own

I was angry for a long time.

Are you free?

The master has a virtuous daughter.

Claiming to be Qin Luofu

Poor health is unparalleled.

Mom wants to see you.

You can send it quickly.

Be careful not to stay.

Government officials said on their knees.

Fu Weiqi's mother

If you send this woman today,

Never get married again

Mom must smell it.

Hammerhead was very angry.

Children are fearless.

How dare you help a woman?

I have lost my kindness.

Will not agree.

The officials were silent.

Say goodbye again and go back to the house.

Speaking of brides

Choke to be speechless.

I didn't kick your mother out.

Forced mother

Qing Dan temporarily returned home.

I will report to the government today.

Return as soon as possible

I'll meet you to get it.

With that in mind.

Be careful not to go against my words.

The bride is a government official.

Don't repeat the differences

Chuyang used to be old.

Xie Jia laigui gate

Serve the public and follow the public.

Dare to study independently.

Work and rest day and night.

Lonely and bitter

Say you are innocent.

Support sb's kindness

More exiled

Why did you say that again?

I have an embroidered waist.

Autoluminescence of Corydalis yanhusuo

Red Rover Zhang Dou

Four-corner sachet

Box curtain sixty or seventy

Green, blue and green wire rope

Things are different.

There are all kinds.

People are cheap, things are cheap.

Not enough to meet future generations

Let it be disposed of

There is no reason for this.

Always for comfort

Never forget for a long time.

The rooster crowed and woke up outside.

The bride wore a lot of makeup.

With my embroidered skirt

Everything is four or five rings.

tread underfoot

Turtle lamp on the head

If the waist is flowing, it will be full of elements.

Listen to the bright moon

Fingers, such as cutting onion roots

Mouth is like a pearl pill.

Take big steps.

Exquisite and incomparable

Thank your mother in class.

Mother listened angrily.

When I was a daughter.

Give birth to a child in the wild.

There is no lesson in this.

Be ashamed of your family.

Get more money from my mother.

Unbearable mother drive

Go home today.

Nianmu Lao Li Jia

Say goodbye to your sister-in-law.

Tears fell from the beads.

When the bride first came,

Sister-in-law began to help the bed.

Was deported today.

My sister-in-law is as long as me.

Diligent pension

Be good at helping others.

The seventh and ninth days

Don't forget each other when playing.

Go out and board the bus.

Tear down more than 100 lines

Government officials and horses are in front.

The bride's car is in the back.

Yi Yin and Diandian.

Juhui Datong kou

Get off, get on.

Head down and whisper.

Never part.

Then go home for a while

I'm going to the government now.

Return as soon as possible

Swear that the world will live up to it

The bride is a government official.

I feel sorry for you.

If you look at the records,

I hope you will come soon.

Treat you like a stone.

I want to be a concubine

Puwei is as tough as silk.

Rock-free transfer

I have my own father and brother.

Sexual violence is like thunder.

I'm afraid it doesn't suit me.

Fire me with adversity.

Raise your hand and work hard.

The two feelings are the same.

Brief introduction of Shangjiatang

Face tool

A Mu dazhangdai

Automatic return without graph

Shi Sanjiao Ruzhi

Shi Si can Cai Yi.

Fifteen bullets

Sixteen-knowledge etiquette

Seventeen send you to get married.

Say what someone says without an oath

What crime did you commit today?

come uninvited

Lan Zhi's grandmother.

The child is innocent.

Mother was devastated.

Return to China for more than ten days

The county magistrate sent the media.

Yunyousaburo.

My fair life is unparalleled.

189 years

Talk more and be more talented.

Mother's name is A Nv.

You can answer it.

A Nv answered with tears.

Lan Zhi went back to the original time.

Government officials urged me.

Swear not to leave.

Violate love today

I'm afraid that's not surprising.

Self-interrupting letter

Take your time.

A Mu worships matchmaker

The poor have this daughter.

Shi Shi Huan Jia men

Unbearable woman

Do you agree with your husband?

Fortunately, I can make extensive inquiries.

Unwilling to make a commitment

The matchmaker went for a few days.

Please pay me back.

Said there was an orchid girl

Ji Cheng has eunuchs.

Cloud has the fifth lang

Yi Jiao is unmarried.

Send cheng as a matchmaker

Main book language

Let's get this straight, satrap.

There's this order, husband

I want to solve my justice

So I was sent to your door.

A Mu Xie matchmaker

Women take the oath first.

Old Mu dares to speak.

Brother needs to smell it

Feel disappointed and annoyed.

Say "a-mei"

Make a plan, why not measure it?

Marry the official first.

Marry a husband in the future

Is it like heaven and earth?

Enough to win honor

Don't marry an honest man.

Its desire for He Yun.

Lan Zhi looked up and answered.

The truth is just like my brother's words.

Thanks to the family husband.

Zhongdao xionghuanmen

Do as your brother wishes.

That's self-styled

Although I have an appointment with a government official

I'll never see you again

Make a promise when boarding the plane.

You can get married.

The matchmaker got out of bed.

Nuo Nuo Fuer

Return to Bai Fujun.

Xiaguan is on a mission.

Speak by destiny

You can smell it.

Be happy in your heart

Reopen a book through a visual calendar

This month is convenient.

Liuhe is communicating.

Jiliang 30

It's twenty-seven now

Qing can get married.

Yusu clothes

A cloud

Qing que gu Bai Fang

Sijiaolongqi

Elegant with the wind.

Che Jin Yu Zuolun

Wandering green horse

Fringed gold saddle

Zhai Qian 3 million

They are all wearing green silk.

Miscellaneous harvest of 300 crops

Jiaoguang salmon Zhen

From four to five hundred people.

Yu Yu Deng Jun Nanren

Mother's name is A Nv.

Dreyfus arborescens

See you tomorrow

Why not make clothes?

Do nothing.

A Nv was silent.

Cover your mouth with a towel.

Tears welled up.

Move my glass sofa

Below the lobby

Left-handed ruler

Hold the silk with your right hand

Chao cheng xiu Jia qun

Late-maturing sweater

Secretly longing for death

Worried about going out and crying.

Officials heard about the change.

Return to leave temporarily

Not the second or third mile.

The sadness that destroyed kurama.

The bride knows the sound of a horse.

Meet on tiptoe.

Look at each other from a distance

A bosom friend is an old friend.

Raise your hand and pat the saddle.

Sighing hurts.

Since you left me.

The number of people is immeasurable.

Better make a wish first.

This is not your job.

I have parents.

Persecute, be brothers

I should respond to others.

What can you expect?

Government officials are brides.

He Jun wants to go higher.

This rock is square and thick.

Can die for thousands of years

Puwei is also having a hard time for a while.

This is only a matter of a few days.

Qing dynasty conquers heaven.

I'm alone in the grave.

The bride is a government official.

What do you mean by saying that?

Persecuted together

So is your concubine.

Meet under the grave

Don't go against today's words

Hold hands and go their separate ways.

Go home separately.

Neither life nor death.

Hate It doesn't matter.

Reading and secular discourse

Never complete again.

Government officials go home.

Worship your mother in class.

It is cold today.

The cold wind destroyed trees.

Frost and blue flowers

Today, my son is invisible.

Your mother is in the back.

Pretending to be a bad plan

Don't complain about ghosts and gods

Life is like Nanshan stone.

Four health and straightness

Mom must smell it.

Zero tears fell.

You are a big family.

Taige official

Be careful not to die for a woman.

How thin is your relationship?

The master has a virtuous daughter.

Gentle and graceful Qingcheng Guo

Mom wants to see you.

This is a matter of a few days.

Government officials worship again.

Sigh in an empty room

Make a plan.

Turn your head indoors.

I gradually saw sadness and pressure.

On the other hand, cows and horses hiss.

The bride entered Lu Qing.

After dusk

A lonely person will begin.

I am finished today.

The soul goes to the body and stays forever.

Skirt-pulling and silk-removing shoes

Lift yourself to the pool.

The officials heard about it.

We've known each other for a long time.

Wandering under Shuting Tree

Hanging on the southeast branch

Two families seek to be buried together.

Buried together beside Huashan Mountain.

Planting pine and cypress in east-west direction

Planting buttonwood on the left and right

Branch cover

Foliar communication

There are two birds in it.

Call yourself a mandarin duck

Raise your head and sing to each other.

Five shifts every night.

Pedestrians stopped to listen.

The widow hesitated.

Thank you, posterity.

Be careful, don't forget.

Peacock flies southeast, which is the first and greatest narrative poem in the history of China literature, and is known as the "saint of long poems". Xiaoligang, a small town in Huaining County, is where the story takes place. Xiaoguan Port in the ancient town, once named as Lijiao Port, Xiaoshi Port and Xiaoshi Port in history, is now a small town. The old records are named after Jiao Zhongqing, a small official in Lujiang County in Han Dynasty, and have an address since Han Dynasty. There is a hill called Huashan in the east of the town of Xiaoligang. "The two families want to be buried together, next to Huashan Mountain". In ancient times, "flowers" and "Hua" were universal, and Huashan was Huashan. Jiao Zhongqing and Liu Lanzhi were buried in Huashan Mountain. Jiao and Liu were buried together, and the locals called it "Peacock Grave". In the early 1930s, there was a tombstone carved with ancient blue bricks in front of the tomb. Every year in Tomb-Sweeping Day and the twelfth lunar month, a large number of people come here to burn incense and sacrifice. In 1980s, the People's Government of Huaining County renovated the tomb and made a tombstone with marble inscription "Tomb of Liu Lanzhi, Jiao Zhongqing in Han Dynasty".

Brief introduction of the author

Xu Ling (507-583), a writer in the Southern Dynasties, was born in Donghai (now Tancheng, Shandong). He has served as Zuo Fushe, Danyang Yin and Zhongshu Supervisor. His father, Xu Shuo, was a famous court scholar in the Southern Dynasties and an important writer of palace poems. Xu Ling is also famous for writing palace poems and parallel prose. In Liang Dynasty, he was as famous as Yu Xin and was called "Yu Xu" by the world. During Emperor Wen and his reign, he drafted all the important documents of the imperial court, and his poems paid attention to formal beauty and pursued elegant beauty. Later generations compiled Xu Ji and edited Yu Tai Xin Yong.

Synopsis of story:

During the Jian 'an period of the Eastern Han Dynasty, Liu Lanzhi, who was both talented and handsome, and Jiao Zhongqing, a petty official of Lujiang, really loved each other. But her mother-in-law Jiao Mu made things difficult for Liu Lanzhi for various reasons, and Lan Zhi resolutely invited her back. Zhong Qing begged her mother in vain, so the husband and wife had to say goodbye, and both of them "vowed to live up to it."

Lan Zhi returned to her family, and suitors followed. First, the county magistrate proposed it for her son, and then the satrap appointed Cheng as the middleman. Lan Zhi flatly refused because he had an appointment with Zhong Qing. However, his brother abused him, and Lan Zhi had to agree to the marriage of the Taishou family. When Zhong Qing heard about this change, the husband and wife agreed that "we want to fly in the sky, two birds grow together on the ground with one wing, two branches of a tree." . On the wedding day in Lan Zhi, Jiao Liu and his wife went to the grave, which became an eternal song.

The end of the story, almost like other folk literature in China, is full of romantic ideals: two people are buried together and there are birds in the forest. (Others, such as "become a butterfly" in "Butterfly Lovers" and "Meet on Qixi Festival" by the Cowherd and the Weaver Girl).

Appreciation of Peacock Flying Southeast

Peacock Flying Southeast was first seen in Yutai New Poetry, which was named Jiao Zhongqing's wife's ancient poems. The preface to the poem says, "Liu, the wife of Zhong Qing, a petty official in Lujiang House, was sent by Zhong Qing's mother and vowed not to marry. His family forced him to die without water. When Qing heard about it, he hanged himself in the courtyard tree. When a person is injured, it is poetry. " This is a sad song based on facts and shaped by chanting. Among them, the death of the protagonist and, on the surface, is the result of the persecution of the fierce and snobbish Mr. Liu. In fact, Jiao Mu and Liu Xiong were also victims of feudal ethics. Because of Jiao Mu and Mr. Liu's original intention, they didn't want to kill their sons and sisters. This can be seen from the regret that "the two families seek to be buried together" after the death of Liu and Jiao. -Although this is their belated recognition and blessing for Liu Lanzhi, it is also their undying love for Jiao Zhongqing. Although their subjective starting point is self-interest, they also have the desire to unify the lifelong happiness of their loved ones with their own interests. Mr. Jiao Mu tried to find a balanced green space between himself and the interests of Jiao Zhongqing and Liu Lanzhi. However, they did not succeed. Here, the problem is profound: after all, Liu Lanzhi and Jiao Zhongqing were killed directly by their hands. Jiao Mu and Mr. Liu also became accomplices of feudal ethics. This kind of social force, which is independent of individual will, is an inevitable reflection of the evil nature of the feudal system at that time.

Liu Jiao's death was inevitable at that time. Because they face only two choices: either give in to Jiao Liumu Xiong and break their love vows; Or defend their love vows with death. Liu Hejiao can't rebel at will. The third possibility. Because the social conditions they live in are not their own choice, but they were established and inherited in the past. The deaths of Liu and Jiao were caused by external pressure, but also by internal reasons. The reason is that their own thoughts can't get rid of the feudal thoughts that dominated at that time. The Book of Rites is the core memorial of life, which points out: "Women have seven ways to go: disobeying their parents, not having children, whoring, jealousy, illness, talkativeness and stealing." Jiao Mu persecuted Liu Lanzhi with his first article. The Book of Rites also stipulates: "A son is a good wife, and his parents are unhappy." Jiao Mu ruled Jiao Zhongqing with filial piety. After Liu Lanzhi returned to her family, she was also bullied by paternalism. So are Liu Lanzhi and Jiao Zhongqing fundamentally opposed to these feudal dogmas? No. What Liu Hejiao argued repeatedly was that they did not violate these feudal norms. Their understanding has to be limited by the times. And Jiao Xiong believe that only by adhering to these feudal dogmas can we truly guarantee the happiness of ourselves and our loved ones. Obviously, under the social conditions at that time, Jiao Mu and Liu were strong and doomed to be weak. They were not in the May 4th period when the store of Confucius was overthrown, but in the late Eastern Han Dynasty, when the landlord class in China was still promising and the feudal system was still rising. The struggle between Liu Lanzhi and Jiao Zhongqing is only an unconscious and hopeless conflict between their own reasonable human requirements and feudal ethics that violate these requirements. Therefore, their death is the inevitable requirement of history and the product of this requirement. Their death is an indictment of the evil nature of feudal morality. The limitation of ideology cannot change or deny its objective role in practice. Liu Lanzhi and Jiao Zhongqing were worthy of being the early rebels of feudal ethics, because they did not succumb to feudal ethics. Death and submission are the destruction of feudal ethics. But this is the destruction of two different natures. If they give in, then although their bodies are still alive, their souls and their love ideals no longer exist. However, death shows their struggle for the ideal of love, conforms to the inevitability of historical development, wins the sympathy and respect of future generations, and becomes the spiritual inspiration for future generations to crush feudal shackles. Therefore, the death of Liu and Jiao broke through the narrow scope of individuals and families, which has great typical significance and exposed extremely common social problems. The great ideological value of Peacock Flying Southeast lies in its family tragedy of Liu Lanzhi and Jiao Zhongqing's double suicide, which vividly exposes the early cannibalism in China feudal society, enthusiastically praises Liu Lanzhi and Jiao Zhongqing's rebellious spirit of being loyal to love and resisting oppression, and directly entrusts the people with their ardent yearning for freedom of love and marriage.

The greatest artistic achievement of Peacock Flying Southeast is to create a distinctive character image through the dialogue of individual characters. The whole poem is "* * * 1,785 words, the first long poem in ancient and modern times. Rainy ideas, repeated, in Chinese miscellaneous about a dozen people, and each Xiao Qisheng, not chemical pen "("Ancient Poetry Source "Volume 4, notes). Throughout the conversation, we can see Liu Lanzhi's different attitudes and tone towards Zhong Qing, Jiao Mu, sister-in-law, brother and mother. It is in this difference that she can feel her industrious, kind, oppressed and rebellious character. Similarly, in Jiao Zhongqing's words on various occasions, we can also feel his honest and weak but developing character, loyal to love, discerning right from wrong but being forced by his mother. In the poem, before Lan Zhi and Zhong Qing died, Lan Zhi pretended to agree to remarry. After Zhong Qing saw Lan Zhi, he went home to say goodbye to his mother. Their words at this moment are very suitable for their respective identities and situations. Chen Ruoming's Selected Ancient Poems of Caijitang once made such a detailed analysis: "Lan Zhi is not a white mother, but a white mother, a woman is a mother, and a son is a mother. It feels different. A woman who follows her husband is also afraid that her mother will be on guard. Her mother has a brother, but she can die. Son or wife, which is more important than mother? And what is mother's death, can it be white? With the dead, love also. Don't let each other down. Women pay with death, so don't they die with peace of mind? When you were together, the mother regretted it and welcomed her daughter, but it is still possible that both of them are not dead. However, Tara refuses to welcome a woman. She can't die. Therefore, there is a difference in the words of white mother. Today, the child has made it clear in four words. Today, cold is like a rock, unknown so. I'm also afraid that my mother will feel defensive about me. If the official is a white mother and the mother is unguarded, then this woman will be gone for a long time. He won't die tomorrow, but what is it to die alone today? However, it is not necessary to say that this resentment is true. So, I answered with the boss's daughter to comfort her. However, government officials are all white mothers, and it is not said that women will change their fitness. They refuse to change if they don't say that women want to die, and welcome women. If they show true feelings, they will stop me from dying. " Imagine that if Lan Zhi said she would die, this weak woman would be bound by violence and forced to get married. The analysis of the above quotations shows that the situation in Chongqing is naturally different from that in Lange. Another example is: "I have been angry for a long time. How can you be free?" And "My boy is fearless, how dare he help the woman?" Here you can see Jiao Mu's arrogance: "Why don't you plan?" Marry a government official first, then a husband. Is Thailand as glorious as heaven and earth? If you don't marry Yi Langti, do you want any rhyme? "This shows Mr. Liu's snobbery. Even the short conversations of matchmakers, government officials and other minor figures are in line with their identity and characteristics. In poetry, the concise description of characters' behavior is helpful to the vividness of images; Exquisite lyrical interludes enhance the charm of the works. "When the chickens crow outside, the bride's makeup is very strict. I embroider a skirt, and everything is four or five ways. "I wrote the ambivalence when I left Jiao's family. She wants to get up at dawn, which shows her determination not to live in Jiao's house. Strict makeup is her protest and demonstration of focusing on her mother. When dressing up, everything is mixed, showing her delicate psychology of loving Jiao Zhongqing and reluctant to leave. "When I said goodbye to my sister-in-law, tears rolled down her eyes." Sister-in-law is not easy to get along with, and Lan Zhi has a harmonious relationship with her sister-in-law, which shows that she understands etiquette and is easy to get along with. This is in contrast to the burnt wood. Besides, Lan Zhi's stubbornness can also be seen when she gave up her mother's tears and her sister-in-law's tears. The same is true of Jiao Zhongqing's image description. He sent Lan Zhi to the entrance of the road, "dismounted, got on the bus and whispered", showing his true feelings. I heard that Lan Zhi was going to get married, and "it will take two or three miles to get rid of kurama's sorrow". In the poem, the sadness of the horse set off his intense inner pain. Before he died, he sighed in the empty room and moved to the house. He was still taking care of his mother. Here, he becomes more and more honest and kind. In the whole poem, there are some action descriptions similar to the above. Although there is not much pen and ink, it is very essence. When Lan Zhi died, he turned his back and "took off his skirt and silk shoes and lifted himself to the pool"; When Zhong Qing died, he took care of his mother, "wandering under the courtyard tree and hanging the southeast branches." These different action details are suitable for their respective personalities and situations. The same mother, Jiao Mu, became furious after hitting the bed. When Liu Mu saw Lan Zhi coming home, she was both surprised and gentle, which is very vivid for describing her character. Lyric interlude is less than action description, but it is also a successful pen. When Lan Zhi and Zhong Qing broke up for the first time, the author couldn't help sighing, adding a tragic atmosphere. "Life is death, hate is that", which makes the finishing point and arouses people's concern and sympathy for what happened to Liu. Even at the end of the poem, there is a strong lyric meaning, full of the author's sympathy and expectation. These natural and seamless lyric interludes play a wonderful role in shaping the characters and increase the emotional color of the whole poem.

It is particularly noteworthy that the use of metaphor and romance in this poem has played a very important role in shaping the image. The author's feelings and ideological tendencies are clearly expressed through this artistic method. At the beginning of the poem, "Birds fly to the southeast and wander for five miles" is a kind of "xing" technique, which is used to arouse harmonious love and decorate the atmosphere of the whole article. In the last paragraph, in the cemetery where Liu Hejiao was buried together, the branches and leaves of pine, cypress and phoenix trees were hidden, and Yuanyang sang all night. This not only symbolizes the immortality of Jiao Liu and his wife, but also symbolizes their eternal grief and accusation. From the realistic double-burial portrait to the portrait of a pine, cypress and mandarin duck symbolizing eternal love and happiness, it shows the people's belief that freedom and happiness will inevitably come in the future. This is the romantic development of Liu Jiao's image, shining with incomparable ideal brilliance, which makes the whole poem have a qualitative leap.

Peacock Flying Southeast has a complete, compact and fine structure. The organization of the plot adopts the way of double-line alternating promotion. Among them, a clue is between Jiao Fu and Jiao Xiong. This is a struggle between persecution and anti-persecution. It was the first conflict, and Zhong Qing asked his mother for a passage, depicting Jiao Mu's domineering and Zhong Qing's weakness. Lan Zhi's resignation from Shiva is the second conflict, which reflects the cruelty of Jiaomu and the struggle of Lan Zhi. Lan Zhi's refusal to marry is the third conflict between Lan Zhi and his brother, which highlights Lan Zhi's precious and loyal character and his brother's meanness. Zhong Qing bid farewell to her mother and wrote down her stubbornness and Zhong Qing's commitment. These four conflicts intensified every time, until they were both double suicide. Especially the protagonist Lan Zhi, her resolute struggle influenced and decided Zhong Qing's attitude and struggle.

The emotional entanglement between Lan Zhi and Zhong Qing is based on the above contradictions and conflicts. The first paragraph of Langer's complaint shows her trust in Zhong Qing and explains the background of the contradiction. Zhong Qing's failure to find his mother and Liu's departure from Jiao reflected Zhong Qing's tender feelings. After the second conflict with Lan Zhi, Zhong Qing's farewell fully expressed the sincere feelings between husband and wife. Lan Zhi's refusal to marry in the third conflict, Zhong Qing's resentment, Lan Zhi's confession and their farewell vividly depict eternal love. It can be seen that the above two clues are mutually causal and develop alternately, completing the narrative of the story and the interpretation of the fate of the characters.

The fine structure of this poem is also reflected in the echo. "Selected Poems of Cai Jitang" once pointed out: "Any long story must be taken care of frequently, otherwise it will be rambling. The article is like thirteen weaves. I'm going to Yamen today. Rocks and chickens crow at cows and horses, and the silence before and after is all care. However, it is best to use it from the beginning without leaving a trace. It is a deified person. " The metaphor of Pu Weiyan, which appeared twice in different occasions in the poem, really deepened the readers' understanding of Liu Jiao and his wife's love loyalty, and also strengthened their sense of integration when reading this work. In addition, Lan Zhi's concern about his younger brother's "violent behavior" and Jiao Mu's "master's beauty" are also hidden and cared for in his poems, showing fine structure and meticulous poetic thinking.

The structural characteristics of fine needle thread in Peacock Flying Southeast are due to simple and appropriate tailoring. The stories of Liu Lanzhi and Jiao Zhongqing are complicated. If they are not cut and concentrated, they will be scattered and unorganized. Shen Deqian, a poetry critic in Qing Dynasty, commented in The Source of Ancient Poetry: "Poetry is more expensive than tailoring. If we start with the situation of the two families, how can we be sad at the end? Is it unnecessary and procrastinating? So I'm done in a word or two. There are deletions in a long poem. " The viewpoint in Selected Poems of Cai Jitang goes deeper: "When two families heard of their death, they panicked and regretted each other, so something was bound to happen. However, if you write again, it will drag on. So ask for burial directly, the situation is tight, but you know there is no idle talk from beginning to end. Don't write about the family situation of the previous two families, and don't pay attention to their family situation. After that, I won't write two robberies, and I don't care about this. People who can write about God without predicates are not idle. If it is indispensable, if it has nothing to do with the person you like, it is idle. The cutting method can also be realized here. " It is these so-called indispensable but irrelevant materials that make people fall into the wrong path of cutting. In fact, some seemingly indispensable materials are not necessarily the most important materials, nor are they necessarily the materials that need pen and ink most. Some just need a little explanation, such as the family situation of the two families in the poem, the grief and regret after the death of their families and so on. Here, the key is to grasp the "favorite" in the poem, select and sort out the poetry material, and highlight the main clues and feelings.

The handling of the details in the poem is excellent. Zhong Qing failed to invite his mother, Liu Jiao's farewell, Lan Zhi's wife's resignation, the satrap's wedding reception, etc. , are colorful paragraphs. These paragraphs are directly related to the key content of Liu Jiao's love tragedy in the whole poem, and play an extremely important role in shaping the characters, venting the emotions and showing the meaning of the problem. Even better, this kind of thick brushwork and heavy color plays a rich role in the basic style of the whole poem, which makes the whole description have a dense rhythm and moderate speed. Shen Deqian's comment is insightful: "If a long poem becomes dull, it has no color. In the middle, there is also a philandering, which makes readers see things in a blur. For example, when the bride goes out,' I have embroidered Luo' is a joke. After the Taishou chooses a good day,' Green Bird and White Stork Boat' is also a joke. "