I miss my lover in my heart and wrote a limerick. I hope the expert will comment on it. Thank you for hiding your love for Lang Jun in my heart.

Since you said it was a doggerel, I won't judge by the rules. The limerick is direct, light and catchy, and your writing is basically consistent. The whole poem can show the deep yearning and love for Mr. Lang, full of dreams and deep feelings. Therefore, it is better to change "happy meeting" into "early meeting" in the end. First of all, it sounds corny. Secondly, meeting early can better reflect the author's expectation of meeting Mr. Lang as soon as possible, which is more appropriate to the above.