Analysis of Writing Questions in CET-4 and CET-6 and Model Essays (3)

Changes in people's diet

As can be seen from the table, people's diet has changed greatly in the past five years. Grain used to be the main food in China, but now its position in people's minds is not so important? The diet, and the consumption is a little high? Energy foods such as milk and meat have grown steadily.

What caused these changes? I think the reasons are as follows: First, the open policy has brought people the opportunity to make big money. Second, people now pay more attention to the diet structure. They are seeking the most reasonable diet structure, which will be beneficial to their health.

As can be seen from the above, with the development of the country, the living standards of China people have changed in the past five years. I believe there will be greater changes in the future.

The first sentence of the article clearly tells the reader that this composition is a chart composition. Then according to the chart, it analyzes what changes have taken place in people's diet structure in the past five years, and finally predicts that people's living standards will change even more in the future. Although there is a lot of data in this chart, the author doesn't cite these data too much, but points out the problems to be explained through the data.

[Example 2] Note: This part requires you to write a composition of not less than 100 words about the income sources of students in China and the United States in 30 minutes. Write three paragraphs to:

1. Describe the differences between Chinese and American students' income sources.

2. Analyze the possible reasons for these differences.

3. Forecast the future trend.

[model essay]

Sources of income for China students and American students.

The source of income of China students is quite different from that of American students. In China, 90% of students' money comes from their parents, while in the United States, only 50% comes from their parents. In addition, only 5% of China students' income comes from part-time jobs and 5% from scholarships or scholarships, while American students' income from these two sources accounts for 35% and 15% of their total income respectively.

I think there are three reasons why they are different. First of all, due to the influence of different social and family values, China students have formed the habit of asking their parents for money, while American students have formed more sense of economic dependence. Secondly, most parents in China pay too much attention to their children, and they would rather save money to support their children? American education, not encouraging them to participate? But in America, many parents pay more attention to students' development? Self-ability? Dependence, so they encourage their children to find parts? Earn some money by working on your own. Thirdly, because the United States is more developed than China, it is relatively easy for students to find a part? In China, such an opportunity is quite rare.

I believe that with the development of China, more and more China students will realize and pay more attention to the importance of self? Dependence. In addition, they will be provided with more and more opportunities to participate? Time work. Therefore, more students will step out of the ivory tower to expand their knowledge and become the masters of their own lives.

In this chart composition, the author makes good use of the hints given in the chart and title. The structure of the article is complete, the meaning is clearly expressed, and the content that a chart composition should express is well completed.

Section 5 Proposition Composition

Propositional composition requires writing on a given composition topic. Compared with other compositions, propositional composition has greater autonomy. Because the same topic can be written in different styles from different angles. For example, the topic "My teacher" can be written as a narrative or a descriptive article. No matter what style you use, no matter what aspect you write, as long as your article is relevant, fluent, clear and correct in language, it is a good article. However, this greater autonomy will also make candidates feel embarrassed. Because it is not easy to form an outline and write an essay in a limited 30 minutes. This requires candidates to carefully examine the topic, carefully analyze the meaning of the topic, clarify the scope of the topic, determine the central idea of the article, and avoid digression. Furthermore, we should choose the right style. Finally, around the central idea of the article, the writing materials are analyzed and classified, and the writing outline is written, including: introduction sentence, topic sentence and ending sentence.