How to evaluate the TV "Kyushu, the sea grazing clouds"

Just look at the small plot, not the big structure. This is actually a bit overwhelming, and few creators can reach this level (the author is not as good as Kyushu screenwriter). It is through details and paragraphs that the context and theme of the whole plot can be explained neatly. The following is an example of Game of Thrones Season 1 Episode 1. The background of the whole play is an attack by a strange ghost. The structure of this season is that Ned Stark wants to be the Prime Minister of King's Landing and compete with the Lannisters for the leadership of the Baratheon dynasty. Small contradictions are problems among Stark family members, and the theme is the reconstruction of rights. A few strokes will get people into the play immediately.

The layout of the world outlook is too immature. One is to rely more on lines to explain, which will make people feel confused and forget after reading it. The second is the ambition to thoroughly explain the whole complex world view. In fact, in the first episode and the second episode alone, the screenwriter only needs to explain the hatred relationship between Shuofeng and Muru, and make the protagonists Shuofeng and Ye ruthless to Muru's fighters to the extreme.

(shaping the values that affect the protagonist's life. The rest of the world view can be slowly spread out through subsequent stories. There is no need for the strange things of the Daduan dynasty in the first episode, because it is not directly related to the plot of the subsequent tribal war and will be played by the audience.

Line problem. There can be lines in Form 2, but lines should be added where the plot needs to be burned after the audience enters the play, not just at the beginning, but also according to the character's personality. A savage battle without schooling, a well-educated aristocrat, a wealthy businessman and a proud princess, different roles have different styles, so it is impossible for everyone to carry out Form 2 to the end.