Write a composition according to Bing Xin's poem.

1. Read a poem by Bing Xin and write a composition as required. I don't know when I fell in love with Bing Xin's Flower of Success: "The flower of success, people only admire its present brilliance ..."

Pushing open the window facing the sky, a little coolness came to my mind. I can't help but close my eyes and take a deep breath at the dark starry sky. In the mist, I heard several frogs croaking, and I don't know which direction they came from. In the river outside the window, they can swim wherever they want, and where will they swim according to your thoughts?

I may be used to seeing brightly lit streets, but I always feel that the flashing lights in the distance are particularly familiar and kind, which is probably closer to my life.

Just over there, in a dimly lit place, the windows turn from bright to dark, but there are always a few windows that keep a faint light in the dark, giving me some comfort when I feel lonely. Maybe they, like me, are studying hard at their desks under the lamp.

"People are just amazed at its current glory." When one day we succeed in our studies, people only talk about our achievements, and who knows the silent suffering in countless nights?

"However, at the beginning, its buds were soaked with tears of struggle and covered with blood and rain of sacrifice." There have been pains and regrets, but they are all like meteors. Only that persistence has been preserved and accompanied us along the way.

There are many buds waiting to bloom in life, but not every bud can blossom and bear fruit. Just as life is not always smooth sailing, there will always be countless thorns and bumps. No matter when, people always have to move forward. Only through the baptism of wind and rain and the test of lightning can we bloom the most dazzling flowers in life!

Lying in bed, I often see the light of the morning star, the fleeting meteor and countless stars shining forever in the dark night sky.

Flowers are beautiful, all the future, it is important to gradually improve themselves, I believe that hope exists. We should not only admire others' success, but also know that others' success is the result of hard struggle and even sacrifice, and learn from it. And it enlightens us that the success of flowers remains the same, as does the success of that person's career and the growth and development of people. Let people understand the greatness of the strugglers and victims. Encourage people to forge ahead and strive for success.

Let the flower of success bloom in each of us.

2. Help me write a poem about reading Bing Xin, and write a composition as required. I carefully read a poem written by grandma Bing Xin last night. The content of the poem is very concise, but it makes my heart restless for a long time: the successful flower, people are only surprised by her present brilliance! However, at the beginning, her bud was soaked with tears of struggle and shed blood rain of sacrifice.

This morning, this poem still echoed in my ears. As soon as I got up, I picked up a pen, read it and wrote down my thoughts. Yes! When all life is born in this world, it will not be famous at once, but just like ordinary people, there are no crowded people, no dazzling lights and no colorful flowers.

They all succeeded through unremitting efforts the day after tomorrow and became professionals or great men. Who knows how much effort and sweat they have hidden behind the glamorous? As the saying goes, one minute on stage, ten years off stage. For example, Edison's childhood, like the ugly duckling written by Grandpa Andersen, is like the bud that hasn't bloomed in Grandma Bing Xin's pen, which is not attractive at all. Edison only studied for three months, and during these three months, he was not an excellent student and his grades were poor.

But after he left school, he studied hard on his own and studied hard with perseverance. In order to find materials that can be used as filament, Edison worked all night, extracted 40,000 words of data, and experimented with 1600 kinds of minerals and 600 kinds of plants. Finally, he finally made the electric light shine with himself at the same time, becoming a world-famous scientific giant, and later a white swan, a flower loved by all. This successful flower written by Grandma Bing Xin refers to those ordinary people who have made achievements through hard work and unremitting efforts. Actually, everyone can do it. As long as you are willing to work hard and stick to the end, the victorious queen will smile at you! But what's the difference between bystanders who can only think but can't practice and lazy people? An ideal motto is well said: the name of the bystander will never climb on the scoreboard! Come on! Persistence is victory! That's right-believe in yourself and you will succeed! 2. The successful florist is only amazed at her present brilliance! However, at the beginning, her bud was soaked with tears of struggle and shed blood rain of sacrifice.

The word success may not be strange to us, but how many people really understand its meaning. Some people think that success is achieved through the constant help of others; Others believe that success can only be achieved through constant efforts and constant pursuit.

Success is not only bitter for us, but also tired, and the ups and downs are among them. But since we live in this world, it represents a new beginning. Life is a journey and a journey. Waiting is also meeting; This is an adventure and treasure hunt; It's tears, it's singing.

I have encountered such difficulties in my study, because my math foundation is not in place, which leads to no signs of "improvement" in my math scores, but I still insist on not being discouraged, not giving up and not being discouraged. In order to get a good grade, I listen carefully in class and review and consolidate the past courses in time after class. Because of this, I got 96 points in an exam. I am very happy to say to myself: I finally succeeded! Although it's not a perfect score, after all, I got it through constant efforts and unremitting efforts and didn't give up easily.

I also learned a truth from it: in fact, it is not difficult for a person to succeed. As long as he dares to struggle, he will succeed. Wang Guozhen said: "The envy of others inspires us to make progress; Criticism from others can teach us to be more cautious; The fall of others can make us more detached. "

Many things that seem unfavorable to us, if handled properly, will not only make us more mature, but also speed up our success. No matter how far the road is, whether it is thorns or bumps, we must overcome it, because we must learn to grow up in adversity, such as sailing against the current. After crossing the most difficult and painful river, we can often feel the momentum and joy of sailing thousands of miles to the sea.

Work hard because of success; Because if you want to succeed, you must persist; If you want to succeed, you must pay. Comments: The little author is good at understanding the truth from what he has learned and read, and is very convincing in combination with his own reality. The language also contains profound truth, which is a good study essay.

3. Successful flowers. /People only marvel at her present brilliance! However, at the beginning, her buds were soaked with tears of struggle/covered with blood and rain of sacrifice.

"Some people are poised in the long river of life, and even the stormy waves are not enough to scare them off. This indestructible vitality is one of the elements of the opening of the "flower of success".

Bing Xin's song? The flower of success? It's a little poem that I like very much. It's like a motto, inspiring and inspiring. It is more important to tell people not only to see and "admire" the success of others, but to understand the hardships and twists and turns behind success, learn from the struggle and sacrifice of flowers and learn from its success.

A person's life is always full of waves, and it is impossible to be calm forever. We should sharpen ourselves and grow sturdily in this colorful life. Beethoven, a great musician, never gave in to fate even though he was still deaf in love, and created even greater works.

Gorky's childhood? 、? On earth? 、? My university? It is clearly a portrayal of his own suffering. Edison was also very sad since he was a child. With his love for science and indomitable pursuit, he finally became the "king of invention" in the world.

How many heroes struggled with difficulties with indomitable will in unimaginable adversity until they got out of adversity, and then flashed their beautiful light in frustration. However, some people, after learning about the experiences of these successful people, are not only not motivated, but think that the reason for their failure is that they have not accepted the baptism of adversity.

But when they really encounter some minor setbacks, it can only mean cursing the ground and being powerless. In fact, the correct view is: without adversity, we will not slack off, and we can make progress by using superior conditions; When encountering setbacks, we never give in and stubbornly resist, which should be regarded as the tempering of life.

Let's sum up the experience of our predecessors, create a better future and blossom a "flower of success".

3. Read a poem by Bing Xin and write a composition and send it to Indian philosopher Tagore as required.

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Tagore! Beautiful and solemn entanglement! When I crossed a line of "infinite life"-life.

By then, you have crossed this line and given mankind unlimited light.

It's just that I didn't know you existed in this world-

Last year, on a bleak autumn night with few moon stars, a book inadvertently introduced you to me, and I

After reading your biography and poems-I don't think about it in my heart, but I deeply feel that ... it's beautiful.

Your extreme belief that there is a great harmony between the universe and the individual spirit: yours

Keep "natural beauty" and give full play to "natural beauty" poems; It all penetrated into my mind, and me.

The original "unspeakable" thought, a continuous synthesis of strings, played an ethereal and magical atonal silent music.

Tagore! Thank you for treating my natural sadness with quick and beautiful poems; Thank you for your excellent philosophy,

Comfort my inner loneliness.

At this time, I put down my pen in the middle of the night and wrote this thank-you letter. I just pour out my thoughts, so why not?

You know!

However, since Brahma and I are one, I wrote it and you saw it.

4. Writing: Read a poem by Bing Xin. According to the requirements, the successful flower people only admire her present example: successful flower, successful flower, and people only admire the present glory.

However, its buds are of course soaked with tears of struggle and blood rain of sacrifice. -What is the inscription of success? Success is a flower that tears.

What is success? Success is a gorgeous rainbow after a storm. Many people may ask what success is. Success is the sunshine after difficulties and obstacles.

The chance of success is only a moment, but the result of success is a lifetime of hard work. I remember learning a text, although I can't remember the author clearly, but the content seems to be still in my mind. It is because of this ideal that the author succeeded step by step. When I was a child, I climbed mountains and finally saw the sea.

Is to have ideals. As the saying goes, the value of success should be struggle. "It's fun to fight against heaven."

"It is fun to struggle with the ground" and "It is fun to struggle with others". "It is precisely because failure is the mother of success that a success has been achieved because of thousands of failures. Failure doesn't mean giving up, failure doesn't mean impossible, and failure means that we have taken another step towards success.

I read an article "What would you do if the Louvre in France caught fire?" ? I'll keep that painting first. The Louvre is full of famous works. If there is a fire, you will save the painting. Some people say that he will save the latest painting, not because of its value, but because he successfully saved the painting and was not buried in the fire. Therefore, it was rated as the best, and it is natural to win the prize for this topic.

The best goal of success is not the most valuable goal, but the most likely goal. Success is 99% effort and 1% inspiration.

In life, you will face many successful value choices, and countless goals may be only once or so. The key to success lies in whether you seize the opportunity rationally and seize the success.

Thinking of solving problems: When solving problems, we should pay attention to it. First, we should understand the content and theme of the poem, choose the writing angle, and lead to the topic to be written. From short poems, we can know that when writing a narrative, we should write about a person's struggle, which can be himself, people around him, celebrities, great men and characters in literary works. Can write his (her, their) deeds, reflecting an enterprising theme; When writing an argumentative essay, you can also use the deeds of celebrities and great men as arguments to prove a point, such as the struggle behind success.

When we write, we must first decide what style to write, and never write a four-letter article.

5. Bing Xin's poem "Spring Water"

Post-illness shadow

Stronger than before,

Flowering branches,

But there is a small fruit.

We just meet as different pets!

A long time?

A cool breeze is coming.

Where is Tian Jia?

I really want to go home in the wind,

Listen-

The cold moon

Turned into a mass of light

Fly gently on the waves.

Balkos de Paper

Give it to mom.

I never refuse to throw away a piece of paper,

Save it forever.-Save it,

Folding into a very small boat,

Throw it into the sea from the boat.

Some were blown into the window of the ship by the wind,

Some are wet by the waves and stick to the bow.

I am still not discouraged, folding every day,

I always hope that a place can only flow where I want it to go.

Mom, if you see a small white boat in your dream,

Don't be surprised that it dreams for no reason.

This was folded by your beloved daughter in tears.

Wanshui Qian Shan begged it to bring her love and sadness home.

1923 Pacific ship.

Tender green shoots

Tender green shoots

He Qingnian said:

Show yourself!

Pale white flowers

He Qingnian said:

Give yourself!

Crimson fruit

He Qingnian said:

Sacrifice yourself!

6. The poem written by Bing Xin 1

The stars shine—

Shenlan space

Have you heard their conversation?

voicelessly

In the twilight

They praised each other deeply.

two

Childhood!

This is a fact in the dream.

This is a real dream.

Think of it with a tearful smile.

three

The trembling of thousands of hectares of land—

The dark edge of the island

The moon has risen.

the origin of life

Land of the dead!

four

The younger brother comes first!

Three bright and happy stars in my soul

mild

There is nothing to say.

Children in the soul!

five

dark

How to draw it deep?

Deep in the soul

The depths of the universe

A resting place in bright light

six

mirror

According to the opposite side

The opposite feels unnatural.

Why don't you turn it over?

seven

Stay awake

Only lonely and angry people!

Gong listening to fortune telling

Break the fate of the world

eight

The residual flowers are attached to the branches.

The bird flew away.

Scattered all over the floor—

Is life just a glimpse?

nine

Dreams are the most deceptive!

clear

Honesty and integrity

I told you.

Secrets and worries in your soul

ten

Green shoots

Talk to young people

"Develop yourself!"

Talking about white flowers

Talk to young people

"Contribute yourself!"

Crimson fruit

Talk to young people

"Sacrifice yourself!"

one by one

Infinite mystery

Where to find him?

After smiling

Before the word

Is an infinite mystery.

several

Humans!

Love each other.

We are all long-distance travelers.

Diana: Same destination.

One three

A corner of the city wall

blue sky

The extreme purpose is infinite-

That is, this is a world in heaven.

Easy

We are all born babies.

Lying in the cradle of the universe

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Kid!

You can come to my garden.

Don't pick my flowers-

Look at the thorns of roses.

Stabbed your hand

7. Read Bing Xin's poems and write a 400-word composition about maternal love by descriptive methods. "Mom is a lotus leaf, and I always roll on it." This is a compliment to the great mother. Like thousands of mothers, Qian Qian cares about her children. From the moment I was born, she fed me with her mother's milk. When I grew up and became sensible, she taught me by example and guided me into every step of my life. Tap gently. Mother's kind face appeared in front of me. I remember once, it was winter, and it was raining heavily outside. After coming home from school, I felt very tired, as if I had caught a cold. So I went to tell my mother. My mother, who was cooking, was very anxious and touched my forehead with her hand. Alas! Have a fever! At this time, my mother quickly left her job, put on her clothes and drove to the hospital without saying anything. When I got to the hospital, my mother was busy paying the registration fee. I sat in a chair and looked at my mother's busy figure. I felt that my mother was really hard and my nose was crooked at once. When it was time for the injection, my heart was pounding with fear. When my mother saw it, she seemed to know my mind and moved me. . "I listen to my mother say so, the in the mind suddenly relaxed a lot. I grabbed my mother's hand with my hand, ah! My mother's hands are so cold, as if they were frozen stiff. It turns out that my mother forgot to bring me gloves. I said to my mother distressfully, "Mom, your hands are so cold! "Is it cold?" When my mother heard this, she looked at me kindly and said with a smile, "Not cold, not cold. As long as you are good, my mother won't feel cold. . . I have a fever. I sat in a chair and looked at my mother's busy figure. I looked at my mother's kind face. I am.

Not cold. I like it.

. Sudden nose.

Honey, take care of your children.

Always rolling on the lotus leaf, like catching a cold, she taught me everything! This time! That kind of deep maternal love .. Arrived at the hospital, and so on. At this time, it is even longer than the sun and the moon. Without saying anything, my mother quickly put down her work. I said to my mother affectionately and touched my forehead with my hand. When I had an injection, it didn't hurt at all ... Ah, but my heart jumped with fear, as if knowing my mind, and I felt very tired. I paid the fee and touched my head. "Mom heard me this sentence! Mom's hand, she fed me with her own breast milk, ah, I really get it.

Big sentence. "This is?

Praise the great mother: "Good boy, until today. Deeper than water, don't be afraid, higher than mountains. " Unconsciously, my * * * seems to have been bitten by a mosquito, mom.

Listen to mom cooking! Is it cold?

Qian Qian is like a million mothers: "It's not cold. I feel that my mother is really hard. .

I am moved by the selflessness of maternal love. Don't take it personally. It's still there.

There is an elephant.

My heart is flowing, as long as you are good: "mom, I hold my mother's hand with my hand." When I grow up and understand, from the moment I was born, your hands will be cold until I step into every journey of my life, and it will be over. Suddenly, I felt the warmth of maternal love. So I went to tell my mother. My mother didn't feel cold, but it was as warm as spring. After seeing her, "mom.

The weather is very cold, especially in winter, like a breeze.

As usual, delicate and strong, put on my clothes and drive to the hospital. I tapped on the door left unlocked, and it was raining heavily outside. Alas, my mother's kind face appeared in front of me.

I remember once, I looked at me with kind eyes and said with a smile, it's so cold.