Writing of parallel argumentative essays

? Common argumentative structure modes: parallel, progressive, contrast (contrast), total score, synthesis, etc.

There are two kinds of coordinate structures: argument coordinate and argument coordinate. The former can better show the depth of speculation.

The juxtaposition of sub-arguments

(1) Meaning: After the central argument is established, the central argument is logically or logically decomposed into several parallel sub-arguments, and then how to demonstrate the sub-arguments is considered.

For example, "think"

1, to develop the habit of thinking more (general argument)?

2, think more about learning knowledge (sub-argument 1)

3. Think that more can be invented (sub-argument 2)

4. The more you think, the more you use your brain (argument 3)

(B) the basic requirements of sub-arguments

1, the position of the independent variable should be at the beginning of each part.

2. It is suggested to divide the number of parameters into two or three.

3. The language of sub-arguments should be concise, generally controlled in 15 words.

4. The statement of sub-arguments should be as close as possible to the key words of the topic, so as to ensure that every paragraph will be deducted.

5. The structure of sub-argument sentences should be consistent, forming a parallel or quasi-compound sentence.

6. The arguments are in the same position, without repetition, inclusion or crossing.

For example?

? Live a wonderful life.

? Xu Ziwei

Nietzsche said: "Even if life is a dream, we should dream with relish and don't lose the emotion and fun of the dream;" Even if life is a tragedy, we should make it vivid and not lose its grandeur and comfort. "Life, bumpy or smooth, is not important, fate in our own hands. Live, or struggle, or decadent, or optimistic, or negative. Living a wonderful life is what we should pursue.

To live a wonderful life, you need to have an optimistic attitude towards life. Someone said, "If you see a shadow in front, it means there is sunshine behind." Tragedy or comedy, the key is yourself. When frustrated, Li Bai sang, "Since God has given talents, let them find jobs!"! , spin one thousand silver, all back! "Indulge in drinking, not being depressed. How many difficult days and nights have Chilean miners trapped underground spent with optimism to come to the rescue? Although Li, a girl from Guizhou, is facing the difficulties of drought, water shortage and poverty, she still actively said, "I have a dream" to impress you and me. An optimistic attitude towards life is precious. I believe that "sunshine always comes after the storm" can regain confidence in adversity and make great progress.

We need unremitting efforts to live a wonderful life. Maybe we can't change our miserable life, but we can grasp it; Deduced a wonderful and magnificent life movement. Ju Xiaolin, a migrant worker, devoted all his spare time to study and research, creating a model for migrant workers to rewrite architectural textbooks. Zhang Keshan, the village party secretary, broke down from constant overwork. Even if a lung was removed, he still worked tirelessly to build the messy Bagou into a new countryside with flowers, willows, grasslands and apartments. Mo Tianchi, a candidate with cerebral palsy, persevered and achieved 604 success at the speed of 1/3, just for others. Although Wei Ruihong, a porcelain doll, was born brittle and depended on others to live, she never gave up and actively obtained a degree from a famous university to help more people like her. Living a wonderful life is not an empty dream, but more sweat.

To live a wonderful life, you need to strengthen your dream of life. The poet Liushahe said: "Ideal is a lamp that illuminates the way forward, and ideal is a road that will accompany you to the dawn." Without a firm dream of life, like a ship without a compass, it will lose its way. Since we are on the verge of "untimely birth, we can't afford to die", why not strengthen our faith? Thoreau pursued an elegant life and finally found a spiritual home in Walden Lake. The painter Rembrandt was not appreciated by the world before his death, and there was no Bole, but he still painted according to his own ideas. Now that his paintings are appreciated by the public, why not? Xu Wenchang made his bold writing appreciated by later generations. Although he was not understood by the world before his death, he had a wonderful life after all.

Live a wonderful life, even if it is a dream. We should also have this dream with relish. Life is limited, but people's ability and potential are unlimited. As long as they are well excavated, they will be able to emit a different kind of light.

The first paragraph of Structural Analysis puts forward the central point: leading a wonderful life is what we should pursue. Then at the beginning of the second, third and fourth paragraphs, three arguments are listed, and each paragraph uses examples. The last paragraph draws a conclusion.

Material 2? Every year, many people explore the virgin forests of South America, and the guides are all indigenous people of local tribes. The aborigines are very alert and interesting. They have a strange habit of calling their names every time they walk. The aborigines said that this was to prevent the soul from keeping up with the body and to call itself back.

A philosopher said that everyone is the architect of his own destiny, and only by constantly awakening himself can his life climb to the peak.

? Please write an article of no less than 800 words on the topic of "awakening yourself", and choose your own style (except poetry)

? Wake yourself up.

Xu Ziwei

The aborigines living in the primeval forest areas of South America have a strange habit of being guides for explorers. Call your name every time you walk to prevent your soul from keeping up with your body. They have to call themselves.

Indigenous people should call back their souls. Similarly, as a human being, everyone is the architect of his own destiny. Only by constantly awakening yourself can you make your life climb to the top.

Wake yourself up, wake up the sleeping conscience. In the flashy world and materialistic society, people gradually lose their conscience and kind nature. Instead, it is the worship of money, the strong desire for vanity and the contempt for human nature. From the "My dad is Li Gang" incident, Li left a malicious word after hitting people and walked away, to the tragedy of the "rich second generation" hitting people to make up for the knife. Excuse me, while the material is constantly enriched, is people's conscience really buried in the dark abyss? Another example is the "Peng Yu case" in which the old people who were helped repeatedly hit the rake, and the outrageous consequences caused by more "fake" incidents in real life. Should we wake ourselves up? Whether it is the "official second generation" or the "rich second generation", we should awaken our conscience.

Wake yourself up, wake up your dreams. Maybe this time, you are still in the prime of life; Maybe by this time, your hair has turned gray. However, we should still insist on having our own dreams. ZhangZetian, a senior three student in the middle school affiliated to Nanjing Foreign Studies University, gave up the role in The Hawthorn Tree Love and became a "girl seeker". She persisted in studying and realized her dream of becoming a successful woman. She seldom chooses between fame and study, which is a manifestation of her persistence in her dream. Fu Xinhua, a graduate student of Wuhan University of Science and Technology, persisted in searching for fireflies in his heart for more than ten years regardless of the severe winter and heat, and took pains to realize his dream. In order to save the country, Qian Weichang persisted in studying physics and made great contributions to strengthening national defense construction. Dreams are sails that guide us forward, awaken our dreams and realize the value of life.

? Awaken yourself, awaken the lost innocence. We will no longer "babble", and there will never be "the sun comes out and the moon comes home?" Doubt, you won't cry because your little paper boat is knocked over by the river, and you won't do stupid things because you can't bear to eat ice cream until it is eaten by the sun ... People often say that what children say is the purest and is not influenced by the world. But with the growth of age, we no longer have a tender face, we have learned to be smooth, snobbish and vain, and what we blurted out has become a thing of the past. However, isn't this childlike innocence exactly what is needed in social communication? Awakening the lost innocence will make life warmer and more trusting.

Wake up yourself, wake up your soul, keep your precious conscience, dreams and innocence in your heart, and live a limited life in a colorful way. Wake yourself up, stick to yourself and add a touch of luster to your life.

Structural analysis The structure of this article is the same as the previous one, and readers can make their own comparative analysis.

Explain that Xu Ziwei (20 1 1), a senior three graduate of Shangrao No.1 Middle School, got full marks in the composition of the college entrance examination. These two selected essays are her usual classroom exercises.