My excellent composition

In our daily study, work or life, everyone has dealt with writing. With the help of words, people can reflect objective things, express their thoughts and feelings, and transmit knowledge and information. Do you know how to write a good composition? The following are my excellent compositions, which are collected for reference only, hoping to help everyone.

My excellent composition 1 I went to junior high school in Wucheng No.5 Middle School on 20 12, and my father and I came here happily to register. I am happy because I have been promoted to a higher level and feel that I have grown up; Also because I came to a new school, I felt very fresh everywhere. The teacher on duty told me the dormitory number and asked me to find my own dormitory. Because the dormitory is on the second floor, I found it soon. I spread my bedding on the empty bed and put all my daily necessities away. Because it is the first time to leave home and live in a dormitory, I am reluctant to leave my father. I asked him to chat with me for a while, and then he gave me living expenses and left. After a while, several new students came to the dormitory. I greeted them kindly and learned that they were all in my class.

In the afternoon, the head teacher took us to know our new classroom and told us that we would have military training tomorrow. Tomorrow will arrive soon, and groups of freshmen are standing on the playground of Nuoda, facing the hot sun. First of all, stand in a military posture, hold your head up, chest up and abdomen in. This is the basic point. Later, there were many signs of torture, so I won't say them one by one. Anyway, you all know. After the military training, the instructor asked us to have a rest, and the students quickly went to the supermarket to buy water to drink. I also participated, and the rest will continue. The same is true for the next few days. The students are so tired that they are going to get down, fearing that my strong body can't stand it.

A few days later, after the military training, we officially entered the learning stage, and the subjects we studied were four more minor subjects than before, which aroused my great interest in learning, and my after-school life became easier every day.

My excellent composition 2 She has a pair of big eyes and a pair of small glasses on her flat nose. Can you guess who she is? Yes! She is me-a lively but timid girl.

I am in Grade Three this year. Although I am dignified during the day, I dare not go to the toilet at night because I am most afraid of the night. At night, everything I see is strange: the clothes on the balcony have become demons waving to me; The electric fan on the ground turned into a person who kept staring at me; The standing table tennis bat turned into a head ... My mother always laughed at me as a "coward" and said that my imagination was too rich at night.

Let my mother leave my room every time I fall asleep. But one night I slept in a daze and suddenly wanted to go to the bathroom. At that time, my mother had fallen asleep, so I had to get up the courage to get out of bed and open the door a little. By the moonlight outside the window, I looked at the living room empty and rushed to the bathroom. As a result, there was a bang, and I didn't know what I knocked down, which scared me to shout "A ghost!" "At this moment, the light of the sitting room is on. My mother ran out of the bedroom and was surprised to see me sitting on the ground. I didn't know I was afraid of the dark until I asked the reason. "You see, the ghost you said is our potted plant! "I couldn't help laughing.

Hey, when can I be bolder? But I'm trying to correct it. I keep reminding myself: "Be brave, be brave, you can do it." I must be a brave boy.

Comment: At the beginning, the little author introduces his appearance in the third person and his character-timidity. I vividly and interestingly described this small shortcoming with a concrete example, and finally expressed my willingness to correct my timidity. The article is complete in structure, concrete in content and fluent in sentences.

My Excellent Composition 3 In my world, I have met many teachers, including kind teachers, strict teachers and beautiful teachers! We have a good teacher who cares about us! I think this teacher is very good.

She has shiny black hair, bushy eyebrows, kind eyes and a pair of reflective glasses on her high nose. She is our head teacher-Miss Yuan.

Miss Yuan is very friendly to us. I remember one time, Miss Yuan asked me and several classmates to practice writing in her office. Teacher Yuan is devoted to teaching us to practice pen writing, and praises us whenever we finish writing vertically. However, Mr. Yuan is always somewhat dissatisfied, either because his handwriting is crooked or wrong. Finally, once I succeeded in writing, Teacher Yuan smiled happily when she saw my beautiful handwriting.

Miss Yuan, you are a torch shining in front of us. Teacher Yuan, you are a ship, taking us to the ocean of knowledge; Miss Yuan, you are a candle that will never go out in our hearts!

My excellent composition 4 is blue, emitting a lake-like strange brilliance. This is my sky.

My sky is vast and beautiful, and the blue sky is full of all kinds of excellent books, from the fairy tale The Little Prince to How to Be a Healthy Man. Some of them, like Peter Pan, bring me happiness when I am lonely. Some are like street lamps in life, leading me to the bright road; Some of them are just like wonderful music, which makes me intoxicated. ...

My sky is as fresh and elegant as green grass. I closed my eyes, stepped on a winding corridor full of ink and walked ... suddenly there was no way out. Open your eyes, your eyes are full of green, dark green, elegant green, swaying green ... The faint vanilla flavor is scattered in the air, so charming and mysterious. ...

Oh, I'm Snow White. Here, I can sing and breathe fresh air to my heart's content. There is no noise, only the thin sound of running water and the crisp sound of birds ... this is my place to relax, and this is my fresh and elegant sky like green grass.

My sky is not only fresh and elegant like green grass, but also silent like leaves.

There are autumn leaves, gray drizzle, crystal pearls ... If you are unhappy, you can rush in regardless and cry loudly to vent your emotions. No one will stop you, you can shout and run, and there is no noise.

My sky is like a fire, full of passion but gentle. ...

My sky is a blue lake, a blue sky, a happy spirit, freshness like green grass and calmness like fallen leaves. ...

I love my sky. Although it is not as big as the real sky, it is full of happiness and freedom. Everyone has his own sky. Maybe your sky is not vast, but it is very interesting. Write down your own sky quickly!

My excellent composition 5 Look! A pair of small eyes, short black hair and a pair of heavy black-rimmed glasses on the bridge of the nose! Who is he? He is me!

I am a fourth-grade student, and I like reading horror novels widely. No, I was reading tonight, and my father told me to sleep again, alas! Just watched the wonderful part, it's time for bed. I still don't know the ending of the story. I'm really unwilling! Lying in bed, staring straight at the ceiling like a light bulb, the book is full of suspense. Suddenly I had an idea, quietly took out my flashlight and carried out "underground action" in bed. While I was swimming with a pillow in a horror novel, I suddenly heard my mother's voice: "What are you doing? Sneaky, eyes don't want it. " My "underground operation" came to a screeching halt. Yes, I'm nearsighted. I can't cherish the window of my heart anymore. I want to take it to see the world!

This is me, a little boy who corrects his mistakes!

My excellent composition 6 famous writer Lev. Tolstoy said: Ideal is the beacon. Without ideal, there is no firm direction. Without direction, there is no life. Indeed, everyone has an ideal. My ideal is to be a writer.

I have always admired writers. Mr. Lu Xun used articles to expose the darkness of society at that time; Shen used his works to show the different personalities of animals. Xu Youbin's works tell us the truth of life. I want to be like them, too, because I can write freely, talk when I am in a bad mood and share with others when I am in a good mood. An article or a book not only expresses the author's point of view, but also shows readers their inner world. How nice! I'm afraid there are not many things that have the best of both worlds.

However, the road to being a writer is indeed full of hardships. Perhaps, every writer has been rejected, but if we give up because of this difficulty, then this ideal cannot be realized. Therefore, I must learn to persist and learn to persevere. Moreover, I should pay more attention to every little thing worthy of attention in my life and accumulate it into material. It is also important to read more books. Every book contains a truth, which we should understand well. Of course, the most important thing is to study hard and master the writing skills of each article. For example: echo from beginning to end, contrast, rhetoric, transition and other methods. In the final analysis, the most important thing is persistence, persistence in paying attention to the details of life, persistence in reading good books, and persistence in taking reading notes ... these are all very important.

No one is born a success. The so-called success, no matter how much talent there is, can only be achieved through unremitting efforts. Ideal is the result of working towards the goal.

My excellent composition 7 sunset, the afterglow of the sunset shines on the tree, that ray of sunshine makes me full of reverie about the future. "Me, what should I do?" I'm thinking quietly. Suddenly, I remembered my dream of becoming a doctor for many years.

Every time I get sick and see a doctor in white treating people, I will cast envious eyes. Especially when children cry, when they can turn children from crying to laughing, my admiration will burn. Give them a thumbs up. Since then, the seeds of doctors have quietly taken root in my heart. ...

In order to realize my dream, I have been practicing since I was a child. When I play house with others, I always put on a white coat, and take the patient's blood pressure, heartbeat and prescription with dignity ... In this way, the seeds germinate. ...

When I grow up and enter primary school, I know the psychological pressure and arduous task of being a doctor. Every word written on the prescription and every knife on the operating table may be related to the patient's life. However, this did not hit me, but let me turn pressure into motivation and make myself more cautious. Of course, this has something to do with the little things in life-writing carefully during the exam and carefully examining the questions ... This has exercised my carefulness and made me take another big step towards becoming a doctor! The buds in my heart are also growing up slowly. ...

Medical knowledge is essential to becoming a doctor. So I will insist on reading medical books for more than ten minutes every day. Seemingly rare, it will become the sea of Wang Yang over time!

Love, responsibility and wholehearted heart are the basic principles of being a doctor. In life, I will also aim at them and try to be a good student and a good boy!

The eagle's ideal is blue sky, so I keep flying; The ideal of a water drop is the sea, so it flows day and night. Ideal is everything in life. Without it, life is like a bird without wings, falling into a cliff; Without it, life is like a stagnant pool, which no longer flows. So, let's work hard for our ideals!

I am just a speck of dust in the world ... but these dusts have found a good place to weave webs and will try to turn into gold ... Lala.

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About my address

You can call me Xiaoyu or messy, I don't mind! The name is just a code name, and nothing matters. But ..... I prefer people to call me Xiaoyu, because this is my name and represents me. When I said this, I didn't know if it was consistent. I'm used to being confused!

About my personality

Speaking of which, I really live up to my horoscope! Typical Aries personality: energetic, like a tired locomotive, always chattering, but since I entered junior high school, I have changed a little, sometimes it will be quiet, which may be the reason for my study ... even my junior high school writing has changed.

About my idol

My idol is Angela Zhang. I especially like the sound of her singing with her heart. It is pure, meaningless, messy and penetrating. The first time I knew her was in The Lover of Dolphin Bay. This cute little girl is so cute!

There is another one, Rao Xueman, which is so poetic! As an elder said, those poems danced in her pen like water. Summarize in detail!

About my hobbies

My hobbies are listening to music, singing and playing the piano, but I prefer the piano among the three. Those beautiful music are drunk in my heart, and I remember to create a network. Our story has been written: the unique purity of the piano is the best commemoration of youth, and I am obsessed with the natural feeling flowing out of the middle. When my fingers danced on those black and white keys, I forgot my sadness and felt happy. It's true. Tired of studying, I also like to play a few songs, but my efforts on the piano are really not in vain: I passed the piano exam of 10 the year I graduated from primary school, and I got an excellent exam. Congratulations!

final result

The original intention of writing this article is to let Wang Chuang's predecessors know me, not to win anything. Please also forgive my immature writing. I feel that I will get along well with the predecessors who created the Internet. ...

My excellent composition 9 I am a thirteen-year-old boy.

Appearance: short hair, love to wear a pair of jeans and a pair of jeans. If you see a person with messy clothes, it must be me.

Hobbies: I like playing football, playing chess, reading books and computers. Of course, reading is my first hobby.

Height: not as tall as a giraffe or Yao Ming, only 150 cm.

Weight: not as heavy as a tiger, only 38kg.

Address: Please forgive me, in order to effectively prevent some people, there is no comment!

Family situation: not very rich, just make do!

Result: It's not bad at ordinary times. When I got to the big exam, I panicked and didn't do well in it.

Advantages: I like playing chess very much. As long as there is a place where China plays chess, I will definitely go. Besides, I like reading books. The books I read mainly include biographies of celebrities, popular science books and some reference books.

Disadvantages: carelessness, because he made me miserable in the last exam.

My excellent composition 10 My head teacher, Miss Zhuang, is a very strict person, but we still like Miss Zhuang very much.

"Ding, Ding" the bell rang, and only a burst of footsteps came into the classroom. A classmate shouted, "Teacher Elephant is coming." The noisy classroom suddenly quieted down and became a quiet place. As soon as Teacher Zhuang came in, she smiled with relief on her serious face and said happily, "Oh, today's students are great!" " "We almost laughed. Why do we call him "the elephant" teacher? Because every time he sneezes, he makes a sound like an elephant. "Noise makes the whole class laugh every time. Teacher Zhuang's hair is very short, like a thorn. Although he wears glasses, his eyes are big and bright, and his serious face cannot conceal his inner humor.

On one occasion, Mr. Zhuang assigned an assignment, which was to recite mathematical formulas and recite them the next day, but I came home too late and didn't finish reciting the formulas. The next day, when I was in math class, the teacher began to draw back. I want to avoid the teacher's eyes with a guilty conscience and pray silently: "Don't draw me, I forgot my back!" " "But you can come, whether you don't want to. The teacher called me first, and I stood up, bowed my head and stopped talking. The students around me snickered in a low voice, and I suddenly felt that my face was as red as a big apple. I heard the teacher say sternly, "Mou Liuyang, didn't you recite the formula last night?" I still didn't answer. Teacher Zhuang was furious and said, "Mou Liuyang, copy the formula 10 after school and come to my office when you have finished reciting it!" "During the break, I had to obediently punish copy, and then finish the book back. After school, I came to the office, handed over what I had copied to the teacher and recited the book fluently. Teacher Zhuang stretched his eyebrows and said kindly, "You can't make such a low-level mistake again. This time, Mr. Zhuang will give you another chance. "After listening to his words, I was greatly relieved, just like a prisoner who made a mistake was acquitted. Although teacher Zhuang is very strict, she often has a gentle side.

This is my teacher, my favorite teacher!

My excellent composition 1 1 I have a pair of bright eyes and a Zhang greatly's mouth, which hides endless words.

My mother said I was a fan of small books. Once, I was watching it with relish, and my mother came over.

He said, "I'm going out to do some shopping. You must tidy up your room. Don't forget! " I nodded and said, "I see." Actually, I just wanted to read. I only heard my mother talk, but I didn't hear a word she said, because I was used to it. As long as the adults say it, just say yes! After a while, my mother came back and asked me, "Is your room clean?" I suddenly realized that my mother asked me to tidy the room. When my mother saw the messy room, the clear spring suddenly turned into a volcano. In this way, my mother pulled me over and gave me a good beating.

My brother said I was a computer nerd. Once, my mother was going out and asked my brother to take care of me. However, my brother ignored me and went out to play by himself. Well, I was the only one at home. I rushed to the computer room like an arrow and played a little game happily. After a while, my mother came back, but I didn't notice, because I had completely entered the game. And my mom found out. It seems that my mother already knew that my brother had gone out to play and said, "Your brother doesn't care about you, I care about you." With that, she picked up the stick on the table. I knew the situation was not good, so I ran away, but my mother was still chasing me behind my back, alas! They are all computer games.

This is me. I love reading and playing games.

My Excellent Composition 12 Among many students, I have a very excellent classmate named Wang Fei. She is not tall and wears a pair of glasses on her fair face. Through the glasses, you can see that her eyes are like black pearls. Her hair is black and shiny, and it feels smooth. She likes to wear a ponytail.

She is lively and cheerful, often telling humorous jokes and doing some interesting actions. Once, she was naughty at home and hit her chin on the coffee table. She was speechless with pain, so she had to write what she wanted to say on paper and communicate with us. She is too naughty and a little stubborn.

Wang Fei likes dancing. In her usual movements, she always brings some dance movements. She also tells me some dance languages from time to time. Although I haven't officially seen her dance, I think her dance must be great. She also likes learning English. When I went home with her, she said that she would walk about two kilometers to learn English, which made me feel that she loved English very much.

She likes to take the initiative to answer questions in class and is often praised by teachers. She is a good student and my best partner.

My excellent composition 13 I am very ordinary. I don't have the story of losing Sim's appearance or Zhuge Liang's talent, so I don't attract attention at home and school.

When I was in adolescence, I had to be a little rough in the face of the pressure of study.

In retrospect, I always say, mom and dad, I'm back! Now, my parents can't say a word.

My family used to be full of this warmth and ignorance. I always say things that are not enough to make my relatives and friends laugh. But now, the whole room is deserted and sometimes very lively, but it's just a quarrel between my parents and me.

I always wanted to stay at home and occasionally spoil my parents, hoping that they would love me more. But at this moment, I am blindly thinking about how to escape from this "birdcage". I feel disdain for my parents' nagging, as if two flies were quarrelling in their ears.

When I was young, I would learn how to understand and be considerate of my parents. But now, I only complain that my parents don't understand me Sometimes if you are not satisfied, you will be unhappy, and the love given by your parents will be annoying.

Before ... now ...

Will the ugly duckling really become a beautiful swan? Will silkworms eventually become butterflies?

I am afraid, I am afraid that I have changed from an ordinary little girl to an angry old witch.

People say that the best thing in a person's life is adolescence. But why do I think adolescence is the most terrible?

When I was a child, I always wanted to grow up quickly, because when I grow up, I can do whatever I want!

When I grow up, I think of my childhood and miss my carefree childhood.

Maybe life is like this-very contradictory and helpless.

My excellent composition 14 Today is the annual Double Ninth Festival and my grandfather's birthday. It's me that hurts grandpa most at ordinary times. Grandpa has shiny black hair and a short and pointed beard on his mouth. Sometimes he would ask me to sit on his lap and make out with me with his pointed beard.

Grandpa's hobby is playing chess. He likes playing chess too much. Once, grandma asked him to buy rice. On the way, he saw someone playing chess, so he couldn't help but join in the fun. Everyone else let him down. As a result, he lost one, lost one, lost one, and grandpa was elated. Suddenly, a phone call shocked him. He thought, "Oh, no, I was so fascinated by chess that I forgot to buy food." After returning home, grandma said in surprise, "Where is the rice?" Grandpa lowered his head and said awkwardly, "I was so fascinated by chess that I forgot the' task' you gave me." Grandma said angrily, "I wouldn't let you buy it if I had known!" " "

Grandpa is my grandfather, a grandfather worthy of my respect. I wish you "happiness like the East China Sea and longevity like a fat pig."

My excellent composition 15 teacher is like a bright lamp, which illuminates the way forward for us; Teachers are like scarves in winter, which bring us warmth; A teacher is like an umbrella, sheltering us from the wind and rain.

My teacher has black hair, a ponytail and walks like a ponytail. She has big eyes and double eyelids, so strong. Cherry mouth can always tell our mistakes, let's correct them. Although our teacher is very beautiful, she is actually very humorous!

Once in a music class, two students fell asleep. The teacher didn't wake them up, but asked the whole class a question: "What's the difference between sleeping and studying?" We replied with one voice: "One is a noun and the other is a verb." The two students woke up in an instant and looked at us blankly. The teacher asked him two identical questions, and their answers were the same. The teacher shook his head and said, "No, sleeping and studying are all lying and sitting." The students all laughed and the classroom suddenly boiled. The two students also straightened up and listened carefully.

This is our humorous music teacher.