Daquan composition

In daily study, work and life, many people have experienced writing and are familiar with it. Writing is a transition from internal speech to external speech, that is, from compressed and concise language that they can understand to developed and standardized grammatical structure that others can understand. I believe many people will find it difficult to write a composition. The following are 9 complete compositions I have compiled for reference only, hoping to help you.

The article tells that at first, I was slightly dissatisfied with my deskmate's appearance and temperament, so I didn't agree with my deskmate everywhere. Finally, I really realized the beauty of my deskmate's mind through one thing. The reference to nicknames not only highlights the characteristics of the characters, but also reflects the emotional color of the article. 2. The description of the article is meticulous and vivid, and the language of the characters is personalized, which conforms to the characteristics of the characters and depicts the vivid images of the characters. 3. The content is concrete and substantial, the structure is complete, the language is fluent and clear, and the true feelings of the little author are revealed between the lines.

Second, it looks like a cross talk, like a short play. The theme is novel and refreshing. What copying homework and pretending to teach teachers have exposed the phenomenon that some middle school students don't like learning and get up early to copy homework. But the author's psychology is concerned with all kinds of bad factors, which is worth thinking about.

This article is imaginative and original. The language of the article is highly refined, and the use of fairy tales is very innovative.

Third, it is a trivial matter to lead the way for the blind, but the little author wrote a hymn of the soul. The little author devoted his deep admiration to the description of the blind, which constituted the moving part of the article, especially the ending, which was wonderful!

Fourth, it shows that a person is extremely addicted to cigarettes. From different angles, the author chose a typical scene to show. The author's entrance is the mess of Uncle Wang's smoking room, which shows the characteristics of an old smoker. The author is proficient in description, what action description, what psychological description, what expression description and so on. It's all immersive.

The theme of this composition is environmental protection. It doesn't talk too much, but starts with the little things around it, so that the materials are fully prepared and convincing. In particular, the author used three sentences to ask questions at the beginning of the article, which seems to be asking readers, but actually paving the way for the following content. Of course, if these three interrogative sentences can use push questions, it will be even more powerful. Even so, this composition is very successful.

Sixth, this interesting childhood story is really funny. At first, the author tried to exaggerate the heat of the weather and told grandma that she was busy doing housework, which laid the foundation for the development of the article. In the process of writing, the image of a lively child has been fully displayed.

Seven, the author thanked the teacher for his first class, which was very novel. This article begins with memory. Writing the teacher's words first immediately narrowed the distance between teachers and classmates and left a deep impression on me.

Eight, the choice of words is just right, writing the consistency of action and highlighting the character.

Nine, the author is good at grasping the actions that best reflect the character and the inner world of the character to summarize/describe in detail.

Ten, some places describe monotony. If you add personalized language that conforms to their personality, you will hear their voices, and at the same time add corresponding action expressions, which will enhance the expression effect of the dialogue.

Eleven, the article is not long, but the process is clearly described, the activities of the characters are also described in detail, authentic, vivid and interesting, the full text structure is compact and complete, and the writing is smooth.

Twelve, the plot is lively and interesting, the narrative is clear and complete, and it also shows the author's intelligence and wit, full of family life interest, and the writing is smooth and vivid.

Thirteen, although it is a trivial matter, the author describes it vividly, and the indispensable pen at the end highlights the theme of the article.

Fourteen, the vivid description of the details reveals the inner world of the characters in a beneficial way, which is the success of this paper.

Fifteen, the article is novel in material selection ... This matter is full of rural life and full of children's interest. It makes people feel very happy and comfortable after reading it.

Sixteen, this article is based on real life, with appropriate materials, great originality, clear paragraphs, natural transition, full of interest and strong readability.

Seventeen, the full text is lively, the language is fresh, always full of humor, and it is very interesting to read.

The vivid and meticulous description of … is the daily feature of this article, which also reflects the author's keen and meticulous observation. This is a major factor in the success of the article.

Nineteen, this article is vivid and rich in content, novel and refreshing in language and unique and reasonable in structure.

This is a mature narrative work, which shows the whole process of the experiment with accurate and fluent language, ups and downs, full of interest. The little author observes carefully, narrates orderly, and describes the characters carefully and comprehensively. The article embodies xxx and is very interesting to read.

Twenty-one, the beginning of the article is clear, which plays the role of the full text. The last few sentences show the author's lofty ideals and firm confidence in exploring the mysteries of science, which is inspiring.

Twenty-two, three major successes of this article: first, pay attention to the selection of the most beautiful fragments to write, second, use accurate words, and third, the structure of the article is compact.

According to the sequence of events, the article describes that … the language is fluent, the level is clear, and it looks very happy from beginning to end.

Twenty-five, the article is full of respect and gratitude for … from beginning to end, and … is deeply touching, which is the shocking power of this article.

Twenty-six, the tone of the whole article is relaxed and humorous, and it is interesting and fascinating to read.

Twenty-seven, the author is clever in conception, good at choosing points to expand, and his writing is ups and downs, which is intriguing. The language is lively and interesting. Although the story is ordinary, it is sincere, rich and touching. The end of the article is unconventional, giving people the feeling of wanting to rest.

Twenty-eight, the case is vivid and concrete, and the words and deeds of the characters conform to their respective identity characteristics. It can be seen that you are a conscientious person in life. The article comes from life, so the language is not so beautiful, but it is really interesting and well written.

Twenty-nine, the full text is fluent in language and free and easy in writing, which is a relatively successful work.

2 nights of Daquan composition, very quiet.

Fingers kept tapping on the keyboard, watching the blank space on the Word filled with words bit by bit, my heart was full of inexplicable joy.

The telephone suddenly rang, which was abrupt and harsh in the quiet night. Reaching for the receiver, it was the voice of Little A. ..

"Hey, it's my little A."

"oh? Small A, scared me a lot. "

"Silly girl, I wish you a happy birthday. You 16 years old ... "What did the other end say? It took me half a ring before I came to my senses. After a while, I took the microphone and said "thank you" and hung up.

16 years old, 16 years old? I have been with her for almost three years.

I suddenly remembered the scene of my first acquaintance. A few weeks after the start of junior high school, in the supermarket on campus, I reached into the same notebook and linked two girls with different personalities. I looked up at Xiao and smiled. "All right, I'll give it to you."

She looked at me sideways. "You, you are also in Class 4?"

Later, I became her backstage.

Just like the plate drift on the earth, this piece and that piece will collide and merge involuntarily because of the crustal movement, forming new land and sea.

Who did you meet and who didn't meet you? Yes, involuntarily, or a kind of fate. Buddha said, looking back 500 times in the past life, I passed by once in this life. So many beautiful deposits in my memory and hers should have been changed by the hardships of previous lives.

I looked at the screen, my fingers were sliding rapidly, and the darkness spread around me without restraint. Looking at the words that once condensed time bit by bit, my heart suddenly shrank and became sour.

I remember I promised Xiao to see the first ray of sunshine in the morning.

I was sitting on the rooftop with Xiao-ah, and the beautiful starry sky overhead was as clear as a pool of deep water, so calm that there was no ripple. A few lone stars dotted on it gave off a little dim light in the moonlight.

Little one lies on my shoulder, and I lie on little one's shoulder. We looked at each other's backs and felt each other's bodies trembling gently, but silence always existed between us. I remember M once said something to me, girl, can you stop being so calm?

I am a typical Gemini girl with a changeable personality, which can almost be described as two-faced. In front of Xiao and all my friends, I am always calm, as if everything has nothing to do with me. Only when you are alone, you will feel lonely and wrap your whole body. Your heart will feel dull pain in the dark like being run over by a heavy stone mill.

In the dark, I could hear small and gentle breathing, so we leaned together quietly and watched the passage of time, and we both entered the dream with peace of mind. I finally got through the morning light.

I always tell my stories in a very plain tone, which has nothing to do with reading. My friend said, how can you tell yourself so calmly, just like telling other people's stories. You have to be emotional, so that you can move others.

I don't understand. Just touch yourself. Why touch others?

My nerves are very sensitive and fragile, and I am always moved by what I write.

Tears wet my face and this lonely night. ...

This morning, on my way to school, I met a lovely little girl. She sat on her mother's bike, hugged her waist and shouted, "Go! Dadada Didi! Didi Didi! "

I almost laughed when I looked at this picture. This little girl is really cute.

This photo reminds me of interesting things in my childhood. Brought back a lot of good memories. I feel that my life is very happy, and people and things around me have become very beautiful. Suddenly I want to thank the people around me for everything they have done for me.

Although many times we are feeling that life is not smooth and complaining about our situation, although there are many pressures and difficulties in life.

But we should not give up or be pessimistic and disappointed, because there are still many moments in life that make us laugh or move, like the picture I saw in the morning, and people around us who care about us. The blue sea, the vast sky, the twinkling stars, the bright moonlight and the bright smile are all around us, as long as we change our way of thinking or open another window. Life will be completely different.

The autumn wind is cool and the sun is shining. As soon as the residual heat of the summer heat receded, "Qiu Hu" immediately took over and baked the ground very hot. In this hot weather, as a freshman in Guangxi, I walked into the campus and started a seven-day military training life.

Life in military training is hard. My classmates and I were sweating like a pig in the hot sun, practicing those basic movements repeatedly on the playground; Not only hard, but even a little boring. Although it is very hard, I learned to be happy in the bitterness, and I chatted happily with new friends during the limited rest time, which reduced the fatigue caused by many trainings. Although boring, I deeply realized the uniform pace of the soldiers during the National Day military parade. The momentum that shocked the world was obtained through diligent training and hard training on weekdays. Only by hard training and repeated practice can we achieve results. This is exactly "one minute on stage, ten years off stage".

Military training not only honed my physical fitness, but also exercised my independent ability. For the first time, I left my family, my comfortable home, my dormitory life and my "self-reliance" life. The phrase "do your own thing" taught by my mother since childhood has been fully implemented in this military training. Although some are not used to it, some are not suitable, but I have the wealth of "independent ability" as compensation; This ability will help me grow up healthier.

Thanks to military training, I made new friends and established new friendships. Thanks to military training, I understand the meaning of "diligence". Thanks to military training, I have cultivated my independent ability. . . . . . . I have learned a lot from military training, which will be a valuable asset in my life and I will benefit from it all my life.

My stories are like stars in the sky, countless stories, the most of which is the story of me and books.

One day after class, grandpa took me to the Oriental Book City to read and bought a copy by the way. I was so excited that as soon as I got off my grandfather's electric car, I ran into it. Grandpa called after me, "I'll pick you up at 65438+ 0: 30. You have a class." I quickly responded: "I see."

On the second floor, a few steps across the "foot sea". Came to a bookshelf. Ah! There are many books here that I haven't read. Even the tarot cards have a new one. I took a book "Knight's Pledge" and a book of ill sentences, regardless of the image on the ground and read it with relish. I also giggled from time to time: on an opaque night, tadpoles in the pond were basking in the sun; The round moon is like a bow; On the night of the power outage, it was dark everywhere, and I was so scared that my skin was raw ... Unconsciously, my grandfather came to me. I looked at my watch. Oh, it's already 2 o'clock. I blinked, thinking that Grandpa would scold me. Unexpectedly, Grandpa smiled and said, "I am crazy about reading." I don't want to answer: "As the ancients said, those who are bookish must work hard, and those who have a sense of art must be skilled." Then I quickly bought a knight pledge and went to school. As for the result, I think everyone speaks for themselves.

Reading a hundred times, its meaning is self-evident; I read thousands of books and write like God ... These are all things I learned from books, and there are many stories about me and books. ...

Son, you must be the apple of your eye at home now, and you must live a life of reaching out with clothes and making ends meet! Do you know how miserable Wanka's childhood was? Today, I will take my childhood with Van Karby.

My childhood was full of joy and happiness, and I was the treasure of my family. Mother put me in her mouth for fear of falling. Dad also cared for me, let me live a life of reaching out with clothes and food, and let me become a flower in the greenhouse; Grandma is a second-class chef, who gives me rich and delicious meals every day. Grandpa is a history teacher and has countless interesting stories to tell me in his mind.

Fanka's childhood was full of suffering. He has no parents, can't get the love and warmth of his parents, is often beaten and starved, and can only sleep in the aisle. The guys played a trick on him, but Fanka could only swallow his pride and do nothing.

Students, you will feel sad for Fanka's miserable life. What a contrast between my life and Fanka's!

Winter has suddenly come, and I haven't had time to put on the sweater that has been pressed at the bottom of the box for half a year. When I woke up, I found myself ill. There was a heavy snow outside, and large pieces of snowflakes fell in the cold wind, and the whole world turned white overnight. Children make snowmen and have snowball fights in the snow with childish smiles, which reminds me of my childhood.

When I was a child, I had no idea about winter, except that there would be clean and white snowflakes floating in the winter sky, and my friends and I could go to the snow to enjoy childlike happiness.

When I grow up, I have a certain understanding of winter. I know that the sky will not only snow, but also the temperature will drop very low. Remember to put on more clothes when I go out. As for making a snowman and having a snowball fight, I dare not think about it at all. I wonder why I was not afraid of the cold when I was a child, but I was so afraid when I grew up.

With the growth of age, knowledge will continue to increase, but some happiness will be lost forever. This kind of gain and loss is really difficult to choose. Sometimes I want to be a child who will never grow up, so I have been living a decadent life. In the cold and freezing days, I can run to the snow to play with my friends without fear, without worrying that my clothes will get wet or my hands will be scolded by my mother, but I still imagine. Like other children, I grew up in my imagination and spent less and less time with my childhood friends. We are all stuck on the desk with endless papers, and no matter how hard we struggle, we can't put them down. This is the fate of reading.

There was a crisp laughter from the children outside the window. They are playing in the ice and snow, while I am hiding in the greenhouse to keep warm. I'm ashamed. I decided to put on my coat and go out with them, but my mother stopped me. I don't want to resist. I just kept warm in the house and listened to the innocent laughter coming from outside.

Each of us carries our five senses at all times and places, and never leaves our bodies. The five organs on a face have different appearances, different functions and different strengths.

The mouth in the five senses is not beautiful in shape. His body is short and fat, with a simple structure. Everyone has many parts. He only has two pieces-the upper lip and the lower lip. But among the five senses, it is the most willing to endure hardships. Other organs are in high positions and dominate one side, but he is willing to squeeze under his nose to "serve the people"; Sweet and sour, let him taste; People like to bite him with their teeth when they are in trouble; If a person wants to vomit, he must be dirty. He is also a flatterer of life. Employees please the leader, eyebrows and eyes are only used to flatter, nose and ears don't work, but he wants to sweet talk and say good things that are not concentric. If I'm wrong, other organs won't suffer, but he has to bear a big mouth.

The mouth often cooperates with the nose. The posture of the nose is not as gentle and elegant as the other three organs. Although he is cocky, it hurts to hit the wall. There are two huge holes under it. Although his work is not as hard as his mouth, it is harder than his mouth. During the day, he wants to-inhale-exhale,-inhale-exhale, and can't stay for a moment; At night, he should inhale and exhale, inhale and exhale, and nothing can be neglected. Other organs are resting at night, but he has to work. Without his works, there would be no writers like us!

Among the five senses, the eyes have the best position and the most gorgeous appearance. He lives in the center and there are barriers from top to bottom. His figure is the most elegant, and his eyebrows protect him from the wind and rain. Just like her brother, he never leaves. She will never be hit by a foreign object, so she has beautiful curves and is spoiled everywhere. She can bring us light or keep us in darkness. People say that "eyes are the windows to the soul", and a person with clear eyes will give people a feeling of innocence.

Ears are on both sides of the head, shaped like funnels and plump. Usually help us ask for information and let us listen to all kinds of wonderful and moving voices. He prevents foreign objects such as dust from entering, but he is dirty.

With fine eyes and poised, like a lying silkworm. However, nothing is weaker than him. At most, it is to block dust and sunshine for my sister. When people express their emotions, they often distort and play a key role.

The five senses on my face, I just think there is a difference between appearance and function, and there is no love-hate relationship. Like all people, it is useful for the five joints to unite and be responsible for their work. There is no longer any difference between strength and beauty and ugliness.

This summer vacation, on August 24th, my mother's classmates took some of our friends to go rafting in Tianmuyuan Moon Bay in Lin 'an.

We put on life jackets first, and then got into the rowing boat. Because there are two oars on the rowing boat, we rowed on that slope and slipped down. The water hit our backs or heads, and we were all soaked.

Because we can't row, my mother and aunt hate rowing hard. The ship won't go forward, but it keeps spinning in the same place. We had to ask uncle how to row, and uncle told us to row left and right with equal strength, so that we could drive forward, so we rowed along, really drove forward, and then rowed to the slope, and slipped down like this. However, on the next slope, uncle put away the paddle. From here on, the rowing boat drifted by itself. I found many sharp stones under the rowing boat and stung my ass to death. There is a narrow place in the back, which is easy to get stuck in the rowing boat, so the next rowing boat can only hit our rowing boat and then go down. We regret that they were trapped because they didn't catch the rope.

Finally, we drifted to the finish line, swimming and barbecue. I think today is fun, exciting and thrilling.