Thanks to the Chen She family.

Based on the activities of Chen Sheng and Guangwu and reliable historical materials, this paper vividly reproduces the occurrence and development process of the first peasant uprising in China history-Daze Township Uprising, and clearly reveals its essence-a great revolutionary movement supported by the broad masses of the people and opposed to violent rule. The main character in this article is Bobby Chen. By describing the typical historical environment and characters' language behavior, the author vividly created a glorious image of a leader and organizer of the peasant revolutionary movement.

Second, the paragraph structure

This article is excerpted from Historical Records Chen She Family, which has three paragraphs:

The first paragraph describes Chen She's life as a servant when he was young, showing his ambition and rebellious spirit.

The second paragraph: Writing about the planning process of the uprising shows the struggle determination and political foresight of Chen Sheng and Guangwu.

The third paragraph: The story of Chen Sheng and Guangwu Uprising, their successful March and the establishment of political power show the great strength and historical significance of the peasant uprising.

Third, text analysis.

This lesson is excerpted from the first part of Historical Records Chen She Family. Chen She, the leader of the first peasant uprising in China history. Chen She Family is a biography of Chen She, which completely describes the whole process of Chen She uprising. The content selected in this lesson describes the cause, process and great momentum of the uprising led by Chen She and Guangwu, shows the great power of the first peasant uprising in China history, and praises the rebellious spirit and historical achievements of Chen She and Guangwu.

This paper is divided into three parts according to the development process of the event.

The first part (paragraph 1) describes Chen She's life as a servant when he was young, showing his ambition and rebellious spirit.

First, the names and native places of Chen Sheng and Guangwu are explained, and then Chen Sheng is introduced emphatically. "Try to farm with people" and point out his status as a farmer. "I have been regretting for a long time on the ridge of the field." One action, one expression and two dialogues show that Chen She was strongly dissatisfied with the oppressive and exploitative employment life when he was young, hoping to get rid of the painful situation and have great ambitions. This narrative implies that the Chen She Uprising had an ideological basis.

The second part (the second paragraph) describes the planning process of the uprising, and shows the struggle determination and political foresight of Chen Sheng and Guangwu.

First, explain the time, number and position of Chen Sheng and Guangwu Uprising, and then describe the reasons of the Uprising. "There is bound to be heavy rain", "overdue" and "all laws will be cut down" not only point out the direct cause of the uprising, but also illustrate the cruelty of the criminal law in the Qin Dynasty, which drove the peasants to nowhere. With both "death" (escape) and "making big plans" dead, they made the choice of "making big plans" between waiting for death and fighting. The narrative here shows their determination and political foresight in the struggle.

Next, the author wrote in detail Chen and Wu's analysis of the situation at that time and their strategies in a dialogue way. The phrase "The world is suffering from Ku Jin" sums up the depth of oppression and exploitation of the people by the Qin Dynasty, which is the root cause of the uprising and a favorable condition that can be used. Chen She proposed to use the contradictions within the feudal ruling group, that is, to "sing for the world" in the name of Fu Su and Xiang Yan, in order to conform to the people's hearts and establish the prestige of the uprising team. He is convinced that as long as the banner of justice is won at one stroke, "it is appropriate to respond more." It shows that he is brave and resourceful.

Finally, in order to launch the uprising smoothly, Chen Sheng and Guangwu adopted methods such as asking for divination, thinking about ghosts, collecting books in the belly of fish, and humming on bonfires. Create public opinion, inspire people, establish prestige, and convince the defenders of the inevitable trend of "Great Chu Prosperity and Chen Prosperity". As a result, the stroke in the garrison was quickly responded. Once again, it shows the fighting wisdom of Chen and Wu.

The third part (the third paragraph) describes how Chen Sheng and Guangwu launched an uprising, successfully marched and established political power, which shows the great power and historical significance of the peasant uprising.

Guangwu has a good mass base. Chen Sheng and Guangwu seized this opportunity, goaded the masses to revolt, "killed two commandant again", cleared the obstacles of the uprising, and prepared for the mobilization and organization of the uprising below. The description of the two commanders' joint killing is extremely concise and vivid. With verbs such as "stop", "start", "seize", "kill" and "do", he vividly wrote a fierce killing scene, which showed Chen Sheng's wit, courage and rebellious spirit.

Then, write a letter to mobilize the masses. Chen and Wu seized the opportunity after the "anger" of the masses, "called disciples", carried out propaganda and mobilization, and called for an uprising. They pointed out everyone's situation, analyzed their interests, and pointed out the direction of struggle ("to be famous when you die" means to die for your country). As a result, all the disciples were "respected" and ignited the anger of the resistance struggle.

Next, I explained the names of the insurgents in concise sentences-the flags of Fu Su and Xiang Yan; Sign-"right"; Known as "Great Chu"; Swearing-"alliance for the altar" and "sacrifice to the captain"; Organization and leadership-Chen She as a general and Guangwu as a captain. As a result, a vigorous peasant uprising broke out.

Finally, under the leadership of Chen She and Guangwu, the situation of the uprising army's rapid development is described. The rebels were on a roll, and the local authorities obeyed orders and fled everywhere. In the end, "making Chen She king and posthumous title Zhang Chu" won the support, response and support of the broad masses, confirmed Chen She's foresight of "responding to the times" and showed the great power of the peasant revolutionary war.

Fourth, writing skills.

1. The materials are carefully selected and the details are appropriate.

The author has a detailed selection of materials. From the whole article, it describes in detail the preparation and launching process of the uprising, as well as Chen Sheng's working as a young man, Zhao Yijun's offensive line, the establishment of peasant regime and so on. As for the anti-Qin struggle in various places, there is only one sentence mentioned. In the detail part, the focus is on Bobby Chen's paintings, and the rest, such as Rain in osawa Township, Asking for Prophecy, Foot Soldiers Panic, Alliance for the altar, etc. , are shorthand. Only through detailed writing can Chen Cansheng's extraordinary talent be highlighted. From here, we can also see the attitude of historians towards characters.

2. Describe the characters through dialogue description

The full text * * * wrote three words:

In the first paragraph, Bobby Chen's dialogue with his companions showed his lofty aspirations and rebellious consciousness.

The second dialogue between Chen Sheng and Guangwu shows their wisdom and talent in fighting.

In the third paragraph, Bobby Chen's dialogue with the defenders showed Bobby Chen's heroism in resisting class oppression.

3. Write the tone of the dialogue according to the different identities and situations of the characters.

For example, "How can you be rich as a servant?" And "wait for death, can you die?" Both sentences are interrogative sentences, but the tone is expressed in different ways. The previous sentence "Ye" is equivalent to "Ah", and the expression of the tone is definitely stronger, indicating that the "servant tiller" doesn't believe Bobby Chen at all. The last sentence "Hu" is euphemistic and contains the meaning of consultation. So as to vividly depict the characters and make the characters vivid.

A study of key paragraphs of verb (verb abbreviation)

Paragraph:

In July of the second year, 900 people entered Yuyang, osawa Township. Chen Sheng and Guangwu became captains of chariots. It will rain heavily, the road will be blocked, and the temperature has already been lost. When time is lost, the law will be cut. Chen Sheng and Guangwu said, "If you die today, you will die. How can you die if you wait to die? " Chen Sheng said: "Ku Jin suffers all over the world. I heard that II had a younger son, but it was not done properly. It was done by his son Fu Su. Fu Su admonished foreign generals with several words. If you are not guilty today, you will be killed by II. Many people have heard of their sages, but they don't know their death. Xiang Yan, the general of Chu, made many contributions and loved foot soldiers. The Chu people pitied him. Or think of death, or think of death. Today, I sincerely call myself Fu Su, Xiang Yan and sing for the world. I should respond more actively. " Guangwu thinks so. The soothsayer knew what this meant. He said, "Everything is difficult at the beginning, and you have merit. However, the ghost of the first step! " Chen Sheng and Wu Guangxi thought of ghosts and said, "This teaches me to show my ears first." The book of Dan says "Chen Wangsheng Wang", and it is put in the belly of a fish. Strangely, a pawn bought fish to cook and got a book in the fish's stomach. In the temple next to Wu, there is a bonfire at night, and what does the fox say is "Great Chu Xing, Chen". All the soldiers are afraid at night. On the day of his death, stroke often talked, all referring to Chen Sheng.

Research:

This paragraph can be divided into three layers, the first layer, from the beginning to "failure, the law was cut", writing the background of the uprising. "Tunze Township" introduces the location of the uprising, and "being a village head" is a favorable condition for calling on disciples. "If we lose time, we will cut it" is the fuse of the uprising. On the second level, from "Chen Sheng conspired with Guangwu" to "Guangwu convinced orally", Chen Sheng and Guangwu planned the uprising. Chen Sheng first made an incisive analysis of the situation, saying that "I sincerely call myself Fu Su and Xiang Yan, and sing for the world, so I should be more responsive", which reflected Chen Sheng's superior strategy. The third layer, from "Naixing Department" to the end of the paragraph, describes Chen Sheng and Guangwu's "Zhong Wei" strategy. To prepare for the uprising, they set up a fish belly and pretended to sing the fox, which showed the wisdom of Chen Sheng and Guangwu, and also reflected some characteristics of the peasant uprising in China.

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Chen Sheng, a native of Yangcheng County, is called She. Guangwu is a native of Yang Xia County. His name is Uncle. When Bobby Chen was young, he was hired to farm with others. (One day), he stopped farming and went to the highland near the field (rest). Sighing for half a day, he said to his companions, "Whoever is rich one day, don't forget our poor brothers." The cave companion answered him with a smile: "You can't be rich if you are a cow and horse!" Chen Sheng sighed and said, "How can the sparrow know about the red pigeon?

Lingyun ambition! "

In July of the first year of Qin Ershi, 900 poor people were recruited to keep Yuyang and temporarily stay in osawa Township. Bobby Chen and Guangwu are both in this team and serve as team leaders. It rained heavily and the road was blocked. I guess I have missed the deadline. If you miss the deadline, you will be beheaded according to the military law of the Qin Dynasty. Chen Sheng discussed with Guangwu, saying, "Run away or die now, and you will die if you rebel. They're all dead anyway. How about restoring the state of Chu after death? " Chen Sheng said: "The people of the whole country were oppressed by the Qin Dynasty for a long time and suffered terribly. I heard that II was the week of Qin Shihuang. Son, you shouldn't be a monarch, you should be a prince Fu Su. Fu Su, because he repeatedly remonstrated with the first emperor, initially sent him to the frontier to lead troops. Recently, it was rumored that I killed him for no reason. Most people heard that he was clever, but they didn't know that he was dead. When Xiang Yan was a general of Chu, he made a lot of contributions and took care of his foot soldiers. Chu people like him very much. Some people think that he died in the battle, while others think that he escaped. Now, if we pretend to be the team of childe Fu Su and Xiang Yan and call on the whole country, there should be many people responding. " Guangwu thinks (this view is correct. (two people) and then went to calculate divination. Knowing their intentions, the fortune teller said, "You can achieve everything and make contributions. But you'd better ask ghosts and gods! " Bobby Chen and Guangwu are very happy. They figured out the meaning of "asking ghosts and gods" and finally realized: "This is to teach us to establish prestige among people first." So he wrote the word "Chen" on the note with vermilion, and then stuffed the note into the stomach of a fish caught at home. The soldier bought fish and cooked it. It was very strange to find that there were silk strips in the belly of the fish. (Chen Sheng) secretly sent Guangwu to hide in the Ci Hall surrounded by grass trees near the station, lit lanterns (ghost people) after dark, pretended to be the voice of a fox, and shouted to (soldiers): "Great Chu is revived, and Chen Sheng is king." The soldiers were shocked and frightened all night. The next day, everyone talked about it and pointed fingers at Bobby Chen.

Guangwu usually cares about the people around him, and most soldiers are willing to contribute to him. (That day) (two) officers were drunk, and Guangwu deliberately offered to escape many times, causing them to catch fire and let them punish him to anger the soldiers and the masses. That officer did whip Guangwu. The soldiers were angry. The officer drew his sword to intimidate (soldiers). Guangwu jumped up and grabbed the sword to kill him. Chen Sheng assisted Guangwu and killed two officers together. Chen Sheng called all the guards together and announced the order, saying, "Everyone (here) was caught in heavy rain, and they all exceeded the prescribed time limit for reaching Yuyang. If you are late, you will be beheaded. Even if you don't get killed, six or seven of the 80 people guarding the frontier fortress will die. Besides, if a gentleman doesn't die, there will be great things. Are princes and nobles born expensive? " The guards replied in unison, "I will obey your orders." So they pretended to be the team of Fu Su and Xiang Yan, the sons, to obey the wishes of the people. Everyone showed his right arm, calling it a sign of rebellion, and played the flag of Chu. Another high platform was built and an oath ceremony was held, sweeping the world with the heads of two officers. Chen Sheng was appointed general and Guangwu was appointed captain. The insurgents attacked osawa Township (first), occupied it, and then attacked the county seat. After conquering Xinxian County, Ying Ge led troops to capture the eastern part of Xinxian County. (Chen Sheng) attacked Ren, Nuo, Tuo, Qiao and other counties, all of which were captured. ~ retreat on the road. When we hit Chen County, there were six or seven hundred chariots, more than 65,438 war horses and tens of thousands of foot soldiers. When attacking Chen county, the county magistrate and the county magistrate were not in the city, and only the guarding city led the troops to fight at the reef gate. The insurgents could not be defeated (for a while), and the army was killed (soon) before entering Chen County. A few days later, Chen Sheng called local township officials and prestigious Jin * * to discuss major issues. These people said with one voice: "General, you went into battle in person, crusaded against the cruel and heartless Qin State and revived the Chu State. On merit, you should be king. " So Chen Sheng was acclaimed as king, claiming to rebuild Chu. At this time, the people oppressed by the officials of counties and counties in the Qin Dynasty, in response to Chen Sheng's call, revolted in succession, punishing local officials and killing them.