Diary: My hometown Niuti Town. More than 250 words

I saw a beautiful sunset when I came home from school in the afternoon. The first time I saw it, it reminded me of the amazing fish-belly white. When I opened my eyes and looked carefully, I had a new view: the bright sun is like a crystal ball used by magicians to predict the future. Then, the "crystal ball" was covered by some "coarse and fine" clouds. Why do you say it is "coarse and fine"? Because these geese in Yun Xiang are like a flock of geese, and there is a big cloud below. It seems that these "geese" are going to climb this "mountain". It's really wonderful! There are several clouds like light beams beside the "Fish-belly White", and each light beam looks different: the first light beam has a crater-like hole on the moon, as if the moon approached us on purpose, so show us what it looks like; The second "light beam" is like the horn of a unicorn. The spiral trace seems to be eager to stab the opponent ... There are countless "light beams" that I can't finish talking about. Today's sunset is the most beautiful sunset I have ever seen! Teacher's comment: "The bright sun is like a crystal ball used by magicians to predict the future." The young author is full of associations and makes good use of figurative rhetoric to show the beauty of sunset. The article has beautiful language, detailed description and clear center. However, the little author mainly writes from the shape of clouds, and it would be better if he could express the changing process of sunset from the perspective of color.