Ask for a Tibetan poem

Heavy buildings and heavy scales are better than rivers and mountains.

Breeze singing and dancing praise Taiping

Endless meaning is in the palm of your hand.

I was stunned by my dream.

My humble opinion: the first sentence is about the characteristics of Chongqing's urban construction, the second is about the prosperous times, and the last sentence is closely related to the TV column of Chongqing Story, revealing a little sense of vicissitudes. There are two shortcomings in the foolish view: Xu is limited by the title of his poem, and his content is archaic and relatively dull. One is; Secondly, the rhymes of "heart" and "ping" are different.

Sing softly

Drink too much and ask the children to grind Mo Chi.

Yin Cheng jueshu learning wall

Low eyebrow pull-up inhibition

Sing Xiao Yan, sing Liu Qi.

My humble opinion: there is wine and ink; There are poems and music; There is a sense of selflessness, and there is a pen that walks the dragon and snake; There are romantic poems and songs, touching the strings of joys and sorrows, and telling them alone. What else can a husband ask for in a poetic life?

Mo ke sheng ren

Mo run chun shan bi ban Qiu

This guest has a romantic poetry.

Let's sing with tears.

Life is proud of a glass of wine.

My humble opinion: The first two sentences say, "There is a great scholar in the joke, but there is no Ding Bai in the communication. You can tune the pipa and read Jin Dian. The artistic conception of the inscription in the humble room is that there is no doubt about the case. Unfortunately, the last sentence is too light, and the previous gloom suddenly turned into a light smoke, which could not suppress the whole poem. Anger makes poets. No matter when, real poets are seldom proud. As far as the logic of emotional development is concerned, it is impossible to put down the wine and make it proud just after crying and turning around.

There are also two minor flaws: "ode" is changed to "ode", which has a better meaning and is more in line with ancient Chinese characters; The last word "wine" is light rhyme and should be changed to flat rhyme.

smart

Running water flows into the bowstring.

Goldwind is whispering in the jade hand room

Xiangmanjing, Yun Zheyue

Butterflies fly over the apricot orchard.

My humble opinion: There are many stories in ancient calligraphy in China, such as "an almond shoots out of the wall in spring" and "a monk pushes the moon down the door", just like what Lao Du said, "it's not surprising that words will never stop". Most of the objects of refining words are verbs, which can be described as refining a word and making the whole poem come alive. "Flowing water enters the bow string" and "flowing water" can be understood as natural scenery. The ancient famous song "Flowing Water in the Mountains" has related images, that is, the bosom friends met in Boyazi period. The first sentence is written as "Ru", and the realm is all out. It not only links the meaning of flowing water with beautiful rhyme, but also makes necessary explanations and foreshadowing for the following sentences, so that the whole poem has a series of red lines.

Soft music and beautiful dance.

According to the title of Xiao Du's Sleeping at Qinhuai.

Tap sandalwood to sing palace flowers.

The red candle in the pavilion reflects the skirt.

Men's sleeve cloud shirt gold step shake

Dance like a cloud

My humble opinion: "Business women don't know the hatred of national subjugation, but they still sing" backyard flowers "to cross the river." Xiao Du pointed out the main idea in the poem, but this poem is presented in the form of palace poetry, and the theme expression is more subtle. The hair sticks are swaying, the skirts creak, the dance sleeves fly, the singing is shallow, and the "light singing and dancing" is vividly interpreted; Feasting, singing and dancing, fragrant makeup in the harem, and the image of a bad king is obvious.

Introduction to Tibetan poetry:

Tibetan poems belong to a kind of weird poems, which is a kind of "Tibetan head style". There are three forms of this kind of poems: one is the scenery contained in the six sentences of China's first couplet and the second couplet, which does not reveal the meaning of the theme until the couplet points out the theme; The second is to hide the first sentence of the poem in the last word; The third is to hide what is said at the beginning of the poem.

In real life, Tibetan poems have become an indispensable pleasure in life. You can hide the tail, hide the head and put it in the poem room. Other formats are not limited. It requires vividness, truthfulness, fun and hidden poems, and every initial word is hidden in every suffix. "It means that the first word of each sentence is hidden in the last word of the previous sentence. This is to use the characteristics of many combined words in Chinese characters to separate a "component" from the last word of the previous sentence as the first word of the second sentence, so it is called Tibetan poem or Tibetan poem.

We can't simply treat it as a word game played by literati. To write this kind of poem, we must have a certain foundation. It can hide the inconvenient intention of the poem head word for word, while the whole poem only hides the cover of the poem, and its content has nothing to do with the couplet of the hidden poem, or even the opposite.

In the late Qing dynasty, Li went to catch the exam. The examiner wants to test his knowledge and let him write a poem face to face. Li Yuantiao thought for a moment and wrote a registered poem: the name of Li Bai's poem has been passed down through the ages, and the post method is particularly high; How many poets in the Ming Dynasty also bent for the Si people. "Connecting the words in each line is" Li Ye ".

In the Ming Dynasty, Tang Bohu and Chou-heung decided to flee to Suzhou that night. Before leaving, Tang Bohu left a Tibetan poem on the wall of Washington: Six Arts have been abandoned for half a year, like flying back to heaven. Hiding the spring scenery in the flowerpot, but it depends on the fate of San Xiao. This poem hides the real meaning at the beginning of each line: "Liu Ru (Tang Bohu No.6 Ru Ru) has left."

Anyone who has seen Water Margin knows that Lu Junyi is a hero in Hebei Province. He is not only eager for public interests and kindness, but also charitable, helping people in danger and difficulties. He is also famous for his martial arts, and is called "Hebei Jade Kirin". Song Jiangjiu, the leader of the water margin rebel army, is eager to become famous, and he is bent on recruiting Lu Junyi to sit on the top of the mountain, and * * * will become a great cause and do good for heaven. It happened that this Lu Junyi was rich and powerful, famous and powerful. He has no worries about food and clothing, and his mind is full of loyal thoughts. It is not easy for him to go up the mountain to rebel, and Song Jiang often worries about it.

Military strategist Wu Yong is known as a "multi-star wise man". He is alert and resourceful. Once he has planned everything, there is no reason why he can't do it. So when Song Jiang discussed this matter with him, he gave birth to a story of "Wu Yongzhi earned a jade unicorn".

At that time, Wu Yong, dressed as a fortune teller, quietly came to Lu Junyi Zhuang, taking advantage of Lu Junyi's fear of avoiding the "mass annihilation", hid four hexagrams and asked him to post the book on the wall at home. These four hexagrams are:

A boat among reeds,

Jie Jun, Russia starts from here,

If honest people know this,

The bow can't escape.

In these four hexagrams, Wu Yong cleverly hid the word "Lu Junyi's opposition" at the top of the four sentences, while Lu Junyi, who was bent on avoiding the "mass annihilation", had no intention to examine the secret.

Sure enough, after these four poems were written, the court got the evidence, and the teacher of Daxing asked for politics everywhere to catch Lu Junyi, and finally drove him to the wall.

Another example: Tibetan poems written by the author:

Zhu Zhi painted a divine picture,

The four wonders of Huangshan Mountain amazed the world.

Uncle, the younger generation has a heart,

Always guarding the house is famous.

Work hard every day,

Looking forward to the growth of children.

Joy and family cheers.

Happy birthday to my friend's uncle!

Also: Tibetan poetry can be used to express love, life, birthday, blessings, names, English and so on! There are also Tibetan poetry websites in China.