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Wild Goose River-My Nanny Ai Qing

Liaoyang County No.3 Middle School Bai Wenxiang

[Teaching objective] 1. Understand the lyrical characteristics of poetry and understand that poetry often expresses feelings with vivid images.

2. Clarify the lyric structure of the poem and grasp the image of the nanny.

3. Read aloud repeatedly and realize the function of rhetorical methods (contrast, repetition and parallelism).

[Teaching Hours] 2 class hours

[Teaching Methods] Reading aloud, discussing,

Teaching process: the first class

First of all, introduce a new lesson: maternal love (prose poetry)

Today, we use this essay "Motherly Love" to recall that historical moment. 1933 One morning in June, a young man stood in a cold and damp prison. When he saw the snow, he couldn't help flying with cold and thinking of people. He remembered an ordinary peasant woman who didn't even have a name. His nanny, Dayan, was grateful for her thoughts, and wrote the poem "Dayan He-My Nanny", which was a hymn dedicated to the working people in China. . This poet is Ai Qing, and today we are going to learn this poem together.

Second, 1. About the author: Ai Qing, formerly known as Jiang Haicheng, was born in 19 10. A brilliant star in China's poetry circle. China is a famous modern poet. In addition to the text, representative poems include Ode to Light and Colosseum of Ancient Rome.

2. Writing background: Ai Qing was born in dystocia. A fortune teller said that his life was "father's, mother's", so he was sent to a poor farmer's house to raise him. At the age of five, he was taken home and began to study, but he was still given the cold shoulder. He is not allowed to call his parents, parents, only uncles and aunts. As he himself said, he grew up in an atmosphere of indifference and discrimination. Therefore, his love for his adoptive mother Dayanhe (Dayanhe) is heartfelt, and Dayanhe's love for him is unforgettable.

Three. First reading

1. Play the recording.

2. Pay attention to pronunciation.

3. Accurately grasp emotions.

Four. Overall perception

What do you know after reading this poem? How do you feel? What thoughts and feelings did the author express?

Students discuss clearly:

After reading this poem, I know Dayanhe is my nanny, and I grew up eating her milk. She has a kind heart and worked hard all her life. She loves me as much as her own son. She lived only forty years before she died.

Sentiment: This poem not only reveals the poet's inner anguish, but also sets up a simple and solemn statue for our rural women in China. That kind of repression first comes from those unfair things in real life and from his concern for the fate of farmers.

With deep and sincere feelings, the author eulogized the industrious and kind quality of poor peasant woman Dayanhe and described her tragic fate. And cursed and exposed the dark society that led to her tragic fate.

5. Clarify the structural level.

The first part (section 1-2) describes the reason why Dayan River got its name and the relationship between Dayan River and itself.

The second part (section 3-8) focuses on the industrious and kind quality of Dayan River, and expresses the poet's nostalgia and respect for Dayan River.

The third part (section 9- 10) describes the desolation of Dayan and his family after his death.

The fourth part (12-13) is the elegy and poem dedicated by the poet to Dayan River.

Second lesson

Sixth, experience feelings

Poetry is the carrier of the poet's feelings. What emotion does this poem express?

The whole poem consists of 13 sections, which summarizes the thoughts and feelings expressed in each part.

Part 1: Memories and Mourning

Part II: Attachment and gratitude

Part III: Sympathy and Complaining

Part 4: Acura and Praise

Seven. Dayanhe image

1. Dayan and I have done two kinds of work all my life. When he was a poet, he was a wet nurse. After the poet was five years old, she became a helper.

2. You hold me in your arms with your big palm and touch me "is the main sentence, and the main sentence is a complex sentence that carries on the relationship. A series of "after you" are adverbials, which constitute parallelism. What are the functions of these parallelism sentences? On the one hand, these parallelism sentences describe Dayanhe's extreme poverty and heavy housework, on the other hand, they show Dayanhe's constant care and love for the suckling, always giving him warmth and caressing him everywhere, which fully shows Dayanhe's diligent and selfless love for the suckling. We feel that despite poverty and rudeness, there is a mother's love hug and touch here.

Always smiling, which highlights her diligence, simplicity, generosity, kindness and duty, and also permeates the poet's sympathy for her tragic fate. She exchanged her hands for the minimum living needs of herself and her family, and she was very satisfied-her requirements for life were so low! The description here reminds us of the description of Sister Xianglin in Lu Xun's Blessing. Lu Xun wrote that Sister Xianglin escaped from her husband's family and went to help Master Lu. Although she is busy all day, "but she is not satisfied and her face is getting white and fat." This is a state of mind that is not bitter but enjoys bitter water. )

On the one hand, the author shows Da Yanhe's diligence, simplicity and generosity, on the other hand, he also shows Da Yanhe's love for the baby, and writes on the front that Da Yanhe really loves the baby. On the first day of New Year's Day, Dayan and her baby were "busy cutting the candy of winter rice", and they put the Guan Yunchang painted by the baby on the wall next to the stove and praised the baby to their neighbors. These descriptions have been exhausted, but the author digs deeper and shows the deep affection of Dayan River bottom:

Dayanhe once had an unspeakable dream.

In the dream, she was eating a baby's wedding wine.

Sitting in the hall of the glorious celebration

Her beautiful daughter-in-law affectionately calls her "mother-in-law"

The description is vivid. "A poet should be a keen intuitor of typical things", which is what Ai Qing has. Through great research and generous and kind actions, she found her heart. Great research and love for the baby are so deep and sincere, even in dreams! Her baby's happiness is her greatest satisfaction! This dream pushed Dayan and her love for the baby to a climax, and devoted her loving mother's affection. But this dream can't be said, because this dream is right or wrong for Dayanhe, and it is an unattainable but unforgettable persistent expectation.

However, it is such a person who is endowed with poverty and suffering by fate. She lived, worked selflessly for the world, and gave everything to her without reservation-from blood and sweat, milk to sincere heart, until her death, what did the world give her? (Read aloud)

Dayanhe left in tears,

With the shame of more than 40 years of life,

The misery of countless slaves,

With a four-dollar coffin and some straws,

There are only a few feet of land to bury the coffin,

With the ashes of a handful of paper money,

Wild goose river, she went crying!

6. The sharp contrast between the quantitative phrases "over forty years old", "countless", "four dollars", "several feet long", "several bundles" and "one hand" highlights the poet's exposure and accusation of "unfair world": Dayanhe lived only over forty years old, but suffered from "countless" torture, and only a coffin of "four dollars" was given to her for burial. The poet's strong indignation is contained in the comparison of these quantitative phrases.

After her death, her husband died, and her son could only be a slave to the waiter except as cannon fodder. The real brushwork contains the voice of accusation. The poet himself finally completely betrayed the class where he was born and became real brothers with the class who raised him. Therefore, Dayan River not only nourishes the poet's body, but also nourishes the poet's spirit.

7. (How to understand "Purple Soul"? One view is that purple is a symbol of nobility and sacredness, and "purple gas comes from the east" and "Forbidden City". Although Dayanhe's identity is humble, she is kind, kind and hardworking, which concentrates the virtues of human beings. Her soul is the noblest and greatest. Another view is that purple is the color of scars, the color of blood coagulation, and the color of people who suffocate. It stands for misfortune, pain, pain and death. Dayanhe suffered all his life and had a tragic ending, so he was called "Purple Soul". )

Ai Qing portrayed Dayanhe as hardworking, kind, generous and simple, and wrote the tragic fate of farmers in old China, didn't he? It is these nannies in the human society like the Wild Goose River who created the world with their hard-working hands, created material wealth for the ruling class and the exploiting class, and warmed people with their generous and kind hearts. It is thousands of working people in Qian Qian who milked, bled and sweated, fed others, but had nothing and lived a miserable life. Therefore, the poet presented this poem to everything on the earth, and my nanny is like Dayanhe and their son, which makes the theme of this poem have a deeper and broader social significance.

Eight, poetic expression analysis.

1 is a lyric poem, but it expresses strong feelings in narrative: for example, the narrative in verses 4, 7 and 8, 1 1 expresses sympathy, nostalgia, praise and love.

2. Rhetoric:

Wonderful contrast: the contrast of two family lives shows that the social system is unreasonable; The contrast of different treatment between the two schools shows the poet's love and hate; Labor before death is miserable after death; The contrast between beautiful dreams and tragic death profoundly shows the theme of the article. Dayanhe's industrious and kind character and her tragic fate are highlighted in this contrast, which shows the poet's praise for Dayanhe and his curse on the unreasonable world.

A large number of repetitions: express unique feelings, make poems have songs and sighs, and enhance lyrical effect.

In order to strengthen the melody of emotion and syllables, repeated rhetorical methods are also widely used in poetry. For example, the first sentence and the second sentence of paragraph 1 repeatedly chanted "Dayan River is my nanny", showing a special affection for Dayan River. The first sentence and the last sentence of the third paragraph are all repeated: "Dayanhe, I saw snow today, which reminds me of you", further exaggerating the depressive feeling of missing. In paragraphs 4, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 1 1, the repetition of the beginning and end of the poem is also adopted, which makes the poem sigh three times and sing tactfully, thus enhancing the lyrical effect of the poem. )

Multiple parallelism: even if the content is concise, the form is neat, the rhythm is clear, and the momentum is smooth, it is also helpful to express strong feelings and enhance the momentum of poetry. .

Parallelism is the greatest feature of the artistic expression of this poem. This technique is used in the whole poem except the first, second, fifth, eleventh and thirteenth verses, and the great inspiring force and strong lyrical atmosphere formed in the poem are all related to this technique and sentence pattern. )

In short, repetition and parallelism are more conducive to expressing strong feelings.

Attachment: A notable feature of Ai Qing's poetry in form is the free and unrestrained poetic style. Some people call it "prose culture" and accuse it. However, it should be said that this is not a defect. Ai Qing has also tried various forms, and it turns out that this kind of free poetry with the tendency of "prose culture" is more handy for him, and he has written successful poems in this form. His poems shed the shell of metrical and strict laws, but did not abandon the core of poetry. In this poem, the poem has not lost its poeticity because of dispersion, but is more poetic, free and full of expression. The application of parallelism and repetition to embody metrical rules has achieved good results. A large number of parallelism and progressive layers not only show a variety of pictures, but also enhance the lyrical momentum and internal melody of the poem.

Finally, we might as well look at the famous poet Lu Li's evaluation of Ai Qing's artistic style:

Think of Ai Qing's poems.

Think about the beauty of prose.

His poems spread like wildfire.

Not a neat rhythm.

His poems fly softly like clouds,

Take its inner beauty as wings.

His poem is a girl on a green stream.

Not a slutty woman

You don't need a gold bracelet or a jade necklace.

What is needed is a breeze and morning dew. ...

9. Summary: Today, we learned this poem together. Through the memory and remembrance of her wet nurse, the author expressed her nostalgia, gratitude and praise for the poor peasant woman Dayan River, which aroused people's sympathy for the tragic fate of working women in old China and strong hatred for this "unfair world". The lyric structure of the poet from reality to memory to reality is clarified, and the ups and downs of the poet's emotional melody are understood.

In Shanghai in the late 1930s, a famous poet saw Ai Qing and said excitedly that Germany has the Rhine, France has the Seine and Egypt has the Nile. Therefore, I can proudly say that China has the Wild Goose River. Yes, if the poet's half-century creation is regarded as a huge river, then Dayan River is his inexhaustible source.