How to write a composition when you see something?

1. How to write the composition you saw?

In the morning, when the first ray of sunshine shines into my room, I open my eyes and breathe the unique fresh air in the morning. Ah! This is a new day, and everything is new. Yesterday is a thing of the past forever. A new day has arrived. I stuck my head out of the window and looked around. Mist covers everything and is faintly visible. Birds are singing softly in the branches, singing about this beautiful world. At this time, I saw what a quiet and beautiful world. Frost and fog are everything in the morning.

Gradually, the sun has broken through the clouds and touched the earth. The mist just now has disappeared, the running car broke the silence, and the whistling whistle shouted out a busy day. The town began to get busy, regained its usual vitality and everything in front of it was clearly visible. At this time, I saw a busy and clear world. Cars and noise are everything at this time.

At noon, with the end of class, dark crowds can be seen everywhere in the school. In the dazzling sunshine, the roads are crowded with people, and the whistle and noise interweave into a fast-paced urban March. The crowd and Chehai weave magic notes of different shapes on the staff. At this time, I saw a noisy and crowded world. At noon, people and cars are everything. At dusk, walking by the lake, I saw a drunken sunset and hongxia reflected on the water, as well as buildings and green trees. I don't know who threw a stone and broke the calm lake. A beautiful painting suddenly burst into colorful spots, blurred and flashing, like a long colored silk swaying in the wind, and no one can describe its hazy and dazzling pattern. The street lamp illuminates the road at this time, and the tired people walk to their warm homes with the light. At this time, I saw a dark and tired world, and street lamps and roads were everything in the evening.

At night, the moon continues to illuminate the earth with its dim light. In this silent night, close your eyes and wait for tomorrow's sunshine. At this time, I saw a quiet and hazy world, and moonlight and dreams were everything at this time. On this beautiful day, I saw the colorful world, and I found how beautiful our life is and how beautiful our world is.

The night I first saw xx's composition, I heard my father and mother quarreling, so I stopped them, but my father gave me a hard push and I fell to the ground. They don't care about me at all, but they are busy quarreling with them. I sat on the ground and cried loudly. My father suspected that I had influenced their quarrel, so he picked me up, put me in my small room, turned around and locked the door, and went to quarrel again. I sat in my crib, listening to my parents quarreling. I didn't listen until after eleven o'clock in the evening and fell asleep in a daze.

When I woke up the next morning, I heard they were still arguing. Ah! It turned out that they had been arguing all night. At this moment, grandma came. She first opened my door and let me out, then stopped my parents. My father didn't listen to her and said loudly, "Mom, go away and leave me alone!" " "Seeing that she couldn't control her son, grandma turned to take care of her grandson, but as soon as she turned around, she almost tripped over a stool on the ground. Grandma looked on the ground, the table fell down, the stool was broken, and dad smashed all the furniture. Grandma was so angry that she cried. Seeing grandma crying, I also cried. At this time, the mother who had been tossing all night also went to the bed and cried with a "wow". Seeing grandma and mom crying, I also cried loudly like joining in the fun. At this time, only our father didn't cry. Not only did he not cry, but he also scolded us and said, "You are crying to death! " "

I know there are no dead people, but I can't stop crying and shed the most tears.

3. What composition did I see? The sea I saw.

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Blue filled her eyes, the sea breeze blew gently, like a mother's love, and the little girl's face flushed. She walked barefoot on the soft golden sand, feeling the delicacy and smoothness of the sand. She jumped, leaving a series of delicate footprints, bending down from time to time and picking up hard and delicate shells. Gradually, a touch of the afterglow of the sunset spilled over. Like a little girl, she blushed. She is particularly delicate and beautiful. When the girl was immersed in it, the cock crowed untimely. She barely rubbed her sleepy eyes, and her heart was slightly sour. Yes, how can she see the sea?

The girl's name is Xiaoya. She has a dream since she was a child, that is, to see the real sea. However, this dream has never come true. Families in Xiaoya are not rich, and they can even be described as poor. Her parents don't even have the time and energy to take her to see the sea, and they can't afford the funds needed to see the sea. Even part of her tuition fees are waived by the school.

Accompanied by Chaoyang, she strolled out of the house and walked on an empty road. It's still early, there are few pedestrians on the road, and there are uneven morning fog, which makes the whole world hazy. The sky turned pale because of the fog. In order to save a dollar's fare, Xiaoya has to walk for an hour and a half to get to school every day.

The class has begun. The first class is composition class. The teacher asked everyone to speak freely, express their opinions and talk about their good wishes. Xiaoya finally got up the courage and said to his classmates, "I have a dream since I was a child, that is, to see the real sea. Although I have seen the image of the sea from books, what is the real sea like? I want to see the rolling waves of the sea, the rolling and splashing waves, build castles out of sand and fantasize about the stories of princes and princesses. Tired, I will lie comfortably on the beach and quietly look at Grandpa Sun who said goodbye to me. Although this is only a very insignificant dream, it can't be realized yet, but when I grow up, I will definitely see the sea that fascinates me! "

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"flood! There is a flood! " People panicked and shouted. The flood, like a fierce and huge beast, raged mercilessly in the form of an avalanche, sweeping away houses and scraping off young trees. ...

A few days later, although we evacuated in time because of timely notice, there were not many casualties. However, looking at the once beautiful and warm mountain village, which was almost razed to the ground, the villagers were still in tears and their eyes were swollen like peaches. Less wealthy people have nothing. Xiaoya couldn't bear the huge blow, but in order not to leave the classroom, her mother forced Xiaoya to go to school. Xiaoya had no choice but to return empty-handed.

Teachers and students have already known about this matter, and they have given generously, some giving clothes, some giving learning tools, and some giving nothing, so they sent a warm word. The teacher also mobilized the whole school to donate money for Xiaoya. She brought a gift of light ceremony and friendship, and her heart was full of ripples. The tears that are ready to go can no longer be controlled and surge out. ...

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Later, in Xiaoya's diary, a passage appeared: I have always had a dream, that is, to see the sea. Today, when I was most lonely and helpless, I saw the sea. It's my classmate They care about me so much, comfort me and encourage me. What reason do I have to continue to be sad? I'm just a drop of water. If I don't melt into the sea, I will dry up. Thank you. Although I didn't see the real sea today, I did see the warmest sea.

4. What composition did I see? I saw it.

In the bustling crowd, two figures appeared on the roadside, one tall and one short, holding hands with big hands. Suddenly, amid the noise, a childish voice sounded in my ear: "Sister, why is this floor tile different from that one?" Point with your little hand and find the source of the problem. "Look, what's the difference between them?" "Well, these are yellow, the surface is concave and convex, it is easy to feel. Others are red. Although there are patterns on them, they seem to be just for decoration. Sister, are these differences useful? " Clever, she not only said their differences, but also raised a key question. It seems that she has really thought about it. "Yes, it is a blind road paved with yellow floor tiles, which is specially prepared for the blind. Those bulges are for the convenience of the blind. It seems that the development of this society is really advancing by leaps and bounds, and everyone is considering serving the disabled! " I explained it for my sister, and I couldn't help sighing myself! "Sister, you say that the blind are so convenient, then I will play the blind!" Before I could answer, she closed her big eyes. First of all, she walked on the red floor tile, much slower, stretched out her hands and kept groping forward. "Turn it off, a little to the right." I looked at my lost sister and couldn't help shouting. "Sister, do you think I have learned like this?" My sister slowed down, but at the same time asked me, "I like it, I like it very much, especially when I have no sense of direction." I wanted to make a joke and enliven the atmosphere, but after listening to what I said, I couldn't help but twitch: How can a blind person walk without a sense of direction? How difficult it is! Strong, this word is most suitable for them, most suitable for those blind people! "Sister, now I'm walking in another block." "Well, you try." My sister continued to close her eyes, but faster than before. "Sister, I won't be biased, and the uneven floor tiles under my feet will guide me!" Looking at her bright smile and listening to her happy words, I feel sweet in my heart, and I am happy for the blind. Just then, there was a loud noise in my ear. When I looked intently, my sister was sitting on the ground. I ran three steps at a time, wiping my sister's tears and asking about the situation. It turned out that my sister with her eyes closed accidentally hit a tricycle parked in the blind road. What? Parked in the blind road? My heart was shocked. Looking into the distance along this blind road, cars in twos and threes stopped on it, and the sweetness just now seemed to go straight into the sky and I could no longer feel it. Looking at my sister's crying face, my heart seems to be crying, for the blind, for everyone in society! The road to the blind, the road to the blind. I can't see, I can't see a blind friend on this road, I can't see, I can't see any kind people helping the blind to clear other things on the blind road, I can't see, I can't see … Tears blur my eyes, I can't see anything! After I dry my tears, please let me see a clean road for the blind, please let me see the bright smile of the blind on the road for the blind, please let me see the real harmony and strength of this society! I tried to wipe away my tears and wanted to see what I wanted to see. I am trying, trying, and I believe that tomorrow will not be far away!

5. What composition did I read today? This summer vacation, I went to Rizhao with my mother, godmother and Dandan. I saw the sea for the first time and felt its magnificence for the first time.

At six o'clock in the morning, we started from Nanjing. Although I was a little sleepy, along the way, I looked at ducks, lambs, rabbits, old cows and other animals rarely seen in the city and imagined the sea. I'm really excited. Finally, it cleared up. We finished our meal quickly, put on our swimsuits and ran happily to the seaside. I am so happy, because I saw the sea for the first time! And golden beaches!

I took off my shoes and ran barefoot to the sea. Wow! The sand is so fine and soft that it is really comfortable to step on it! The color of the sea is so beautiful that words can't describe it. I quickly jumped into the sea, wow! The sand is soft and the sea is cool. How comfortable! I put the swimming ring in the water and sat on it. When a wave came, I was washed back to the shore by the sea. How interesting! I took a few deep steps and sat down. Alas, I was washed back. I was a little scared, so I ran back to the beach to play with the sand. Danny said she wanted to bury herself, so I helped her pile sand on her. After a while, my mother took me surfing in the sea. The sea is far from the shore, and the waves are small, unlike the waves on the shore that always hit people. There, the waves fall together, and people seem to play an "automatic trampoline" in the water. When the waves don't come, their feet can touch the ground. When the waves come, they can't touch the ground. Waves are the wonders of the sea, which can make people put aside their troubles and enjoy themselves. Well done!

The next day, we went to Peach Blossom Island, where I caught many small hermit crabs and crabs, the biggest of which was only the size of my nails. Later, we went to a market and bought many souvenirs. After lunch, we reluctantly went home. Thinking about the seaside scenery on the road, I arrived in Nanjing unconsciously.

The seaside is really interesting. I will go to the seaside next time!

Composition 2: I see your strength.

At 2: 28 pm on May 20 15 12, an earthquake of magnitude 8.0 suddenly struck northern Sichuan. In just a few tens of seconds, it has caused devastating damage to the entire disaster area. The prosperity of the past is gone. Many people were buried in the ruins, and cries for help came from time to time in the ruins. Perhaps, many children do not know that they have become orphans; Adults don't know that they have lost their homes or even their children!

After the news came out, the whole country was shocked, and immediately, China launched an unprecedented rescue. All kinds of relief materials are transported to the disaster area with the love of the people of the whole country. The rescue team went to the disaster area day and night, where touching stories happened every day ... I saw a father rush to the collapsed school to find his son and found that if he wanted to save his child, he had to cross over other children. In do or die, he chose to save other children first. However, when he saved his child, the child had stopped breathing. Looking at his sad expression, what do I know? I saw a photo of 1 1 year-old brother carrying his 3-year-old sister 10 to safety for more than hours. I learned what strength is in his tired face! ……

This earthquake has undoubtedly brought great pain to the people in the disaster area. Although we can't go to the scene for disaster relief, we feel your strength, and we hope to pass on our love to you through various channels. We hope that the people in the disaster area can rebuild their homes as soon as possible and let the campus ring with the sound of reading again!

6. Write an 800-word composition on the topic of seeing yourself and others. 1. Material: A rich man asked a philosopher why many people didn't like him after he became rich. The philosopher took him to the window and said, "Look out, what do you see?" The rich man said, "I see many people." The philosopher took him to the mirror again and asked, "What do you see now?" The rich man replied, "myself." The philosopher smiled and said, "Windows and mirrors are made of glass. The only difference is that the mirror is covered with a thin layer of silver. But because of this money, you can only see yourself and not others. " Please make your own ideas, choose your own style and draw up your own title with the topic of "seeing yourself and seeing others". Write an article of not less than 800 words. The content must be within the scope of the topic. Second, analysis: in the face of material interests, we should not only see ourselves, but also others, and also think of the interests of the vast majority of people and the interests of the country. Positive examples, such as Du Fu, Harry, Cheng, etc., millionaires in Hong Kong, negative examples, such as Cheng, etc. Keep the interests of others in mind and always pay attention to the sufferings of the people. As Cang Kejia said, "People will always remember those who worked for the people". Positive and negative examples, such as spoons in heaven and hell, in heaven, everyone sees others feeding with long spoons and others feeding themselves with long spoons; In hell, everyone only sees himself, and the long spoon can't feed himself. For example, when you learn calligraphy, you should look at other people's handwriting and lay a good foundation at the beginning. After reaching a certain level, we must see ourselves clearly and create our own words in order to achieve higher achievements. In terms of stratification, we can do it from three aspects. (1) Seeing only yourself and not others will make you stand still. See oneself as "China is going to the country" and fail to see the strengths of others. (2) Only seeing others and not seeing yourself will make you lose your personality and become a vassal of others. For example, at the beginning of the founding of the People's Republic of China, we only saw the Soviet Union and paid no attention to ourselves. Seeing only others, but not yourself, will also make others lose sight of themselves at some time and hurt themselves. For example, mothers teach their children, only look at them, but let them go. Ignoring mother's feelings. (3) Only by seeing yourself and others can we learn from each other's strengths, strengthen ourselves, constantly surpass ourselves, and finally realize our own transformation. (3) Walking in the world of you, me and others, the eagle sees the vastness of the blue sky, vibrating its feathers, free and proud; The waterfall is dangerous when it sees a steep cliff, and it flows thousands of miles, flowing silver and jade, and it is as smart as a dragon; When Haiyan saw the surging waves, she sang loudly, braving the wind and waves, and the atmosphere was obvious. If people only see themselves, they will be like floating grass on the wall, frivolous and shallow, like a lonely deer on the grassland, and they are always in danger of being swallowed up. God created man and multiplied from generation to generation. In life, there are not only you, but also him and me. People are the world, not just me. Please don't. The sunshine in life will be more brilliant. See yourself, see yourself. Yes, I am very important, I am unique, I love the clouds in the clear sky, I love the pearls in the bright starry sky, I love others to live in my world and live in my happiness. But I also deeply understand that I am one of the sentient beings. Everyone created by God is equal, but why should I be special? Above others? Yes, I'm just me, a nobody in the vast world. I have no reason or ability to stipulate others and let others follow me closely. And I have so many shortcomings, so ordinary, in a small self-world, I am only shallow and narcissistic. How dangerous it will be. I am only a small part of the world. I'm not perfect, not beautiful, not even dirty. I can't grind myself at my own expense and lose my precious life in my own world. I'm divorced from myself. Others are as unique and happy as you, and others have a shocking spiritual journey to surprise you. Step out of your small circle, let your sentiment be tempered in the majestic tide of life, let your temperament be tempered in the tide of bold love for life, brush away the dust and dirt in your heart, and illuminate the dark corner of your life. Looking for the gold of life from others, that noble quality will supplement your innate poverty of life! Go to others to explore the mysteries of life, where there are perseverance, straightness and twists and turns, which will move you, excite you, destroy your weakness and laziness, rebuild your inner dam, make you fair and make you bright; Listening to other people's nonsense, although seemingly prickly, is full of warm words, which will make you clear-headed after dizziness, thoroughly understand when you get lost, and even pull back from the brink. The integrity of life is beautiful because of lovely others. And seeing the beauty of others, others will see your beauty, know each other's hearts, cherish each other's feelings, and your life will be sweeter and more wonderful. See yourself clearly, see yourself clearly; See others and understand others. Therefore, the road of life is no longer accompanied by darkness, but loneliness; The scene of life is no longer misty and rainy, and the wind is bleak. I will walk out of a brand-new self, a sunny self in my life. In laughter, singing and blessing, I walked with others, accompanied by excitement and sweetness. I am mature, confident and proud to walk on the road of life, thus moving towards success and glory. The evaluation topic is "Walking in your world ..." How to treat others is not only the starting point of this topic composition, but also a problem that must be taken seriously in the long journey of life. The author is good at association and metaphor. The first paragraph of the article uses a series of metaphors, which leads to the theme of "seeing yourself and others will make your world more exciting and the sunshine in your life more brilliant". Not only is it full of momentum, literary and emotional, but it is also quick to enter the topic and clever to point it out. The author is also good at using a large number of parallelism sentences appropriately. God is exhausted. For example, "I love the clouds in the clear sky, I love the stars in the bright starry sky, I love others to live in my world …" and so on. In a word, the outstanding features of this composition are rich vocabulary and gorgeous language, as well as poetic and philosophical exposition of the topic.

7. Taking the composition as the topic, I have always wanted to find a "Sai banxian" to calculate my destiny. But when I saw that he needed a wrench to calculate his life, there was no calculator and no formula, I was a little sad. Fortune telling is also a calculation. It should be part of mathematics. For example, solving equations, my dream is an unknown number, so I have to make drafts and abacus. When I found out that my college entrance examination composition was really 0, I saw the draft and understood the process, so I could die with peace of mind.

I'm worried about getting 0 for no reason. Because my composition is really poor, I am worried that the marking teacher will be possessed when he sees my composition.

I have worshipped Lu Xun since I was a child. I grew up watching Kong Yiji and Ah Q, and later I met Han Han. After reading their works, I feel very awesome. At that time, I understood that writing articles can be used to call names. So I have a young mind, and my writing style gradually tends to them. Since primary school, I have been keen on writing critical and negative articles. Because I really can't write a lovely side. I feel hypocritical even if I write it, because I have never had a lovely side in my life. Then tear it.

I understand now that this is the so-called "non-mainstream". And those "mainstream" are praising the motherland and talking about poetry, because this is required by the college entrance examination. From stereotyped writing to now, there is such a hidden rule that the content must be positive. Even if your composition is nonsense, as long as you say "love the motherland and love the party", you can pass. Even if your literary talent is flying, * * *, as long as you criticize the exam-oriented education, you will get zero points, which is not negotiable. Even Chairman Mao said so because he didn't like Lu Xun's crow mouth.

But I'm too honest. I always reveal my thoughts and morals in words. Sometimes just saying a little thing will blow up, which is completely beside the point, and you have to write something shameful, such as exam-oriented education.

Dare to face the bleak life, is the real hero.

I also like this sentence.

Dare to face the bleak exam-oriented education, but also a real hero.

Unfortunately, the marking teacher doesn't like it, and neither does the education department. They are all Chinese majors, very gentle. Most people like to read Jing m Guo's tender prose, but it must have nothing to do with love. It is best to quote some ancient poems. Poetry and imagination bring them enjoyment and hypocrisy. Because the most poetic thing is often what they can't accept and have no chance to see, that is, love letters. )

My mind is full of English words, physical and mathematical formulas and chemical equations. Where can I get the memory to hold the beautiful scenery? So I am pessimistic, and my composition is also negative and cynical. But this is really how I feel. Why should I dress like Jing M.Guo? We are easy to get caught, and we are men. Men should write something masculine, and the eunuch is melodramatic.

I don't know what it says here. I had a flash in the shower just now, and now I knocked him out. So I'm not going to write any more.

Note: I thought of an old saying when I was taking a shower: "Your son should not teach."

So in an instant, I thought of a rude word:

"I can't teach."