How to guide children to write a composition with materials from life?

First, the composition should learn to accumulate.

The ancient summaries of "reading is like writing" and "a clever woman can't cook without rice" illustrate the importance of "accumulation" in writing from both positive and negative aspects. "Usually rely on accumulation, the examination room depends on play", which is the same experience of the students in the examination room.

(A) language to establish a "vocabulary". Vocabulary is the cell of an article. Vocabulary in a broad sense refers not only to the collection of words and phrases, but also to sentences and sentence groups. There are two ways to establish "vocabulary": one is reading. Usually read books, newspapers and periodicals extensively, take reading notes, and extract some beautiful words, sentences and paragraphs from a specific notebook.

(2) Strengthen the accumulation of materials. Materials are the flesh and blood of the article. Many students worry every time they write a composition, because they don't pay attention to it, or they make it up or copy it. The solution to this problem is to accumulate materials. Usually, if possible, they can take cameras and tape recorders, observe life deeply, actively participate in life, and record family life and campus life in time in the form of sketching, keeping diaries and writing observation notes.

(3) Strengthen ideological accumulation. Opinion is the soul of an article. The unclear center of the article or the lack of profound thoughts often indicate that the author's thoughts are superficial. Therefore, it is necessary to establish a "think tank". There are two ways: first, be thoughtful. "Think more and gain more." Think deeply at ordinary times and ask "why", "what" and "what" when something happens.

In short, the composition should be accumulated, and the three writing warehouses of vocabulary, material and thought should be counted regularly, sorted and sorted, and constantly enriched and expanded.

Second, learn to observe before writing a good composition.

When answering the question of "how to write a good article" by young artists, Mr. Lu Xun emphasized two points: one is to read more books, and the other is to practice more. Here, "reading more" means observing more. This shows that in order to write a good article and master skillful writing skills, it is necessary to observe more and learn to observe, and observation is the necessary premise and foundation of writing.

Russian novelist Chekhov earnestly warned beginners: "A writer must train himself to be a keen observer and never give up! -It is a habit to exercise yourself to observation, which seems to be second nature. " It takes time to hone observation into habit and second nature, which is very useful and great.

Pay attention to the people, events, sights and things around you, and hunt for the materials needed in the composition: be interested in some seemingly insignificant but meaningful things, and pay attention to the cause, process and result of things; You should pay attention to how the plants in the campus flower beds change their colors all year round, and learn to get to the bottom of it and find out the ins and outs of these changes; You should go out, enter the society, meet more people, observe their words and deeds, think about some things, and integrate into your own thoughts at any time. This is the process of observation. In the process of observation, you should pay attention to the following points:

(1) Observation should never be limited to "seeing with eyes". More practical observation, in a broad sense, is to mobilize all the five senses of a person: listening with ears, feeling with the body, and more importantly, thinking with the mind, so that observation will be more delicate and profound.

(2) Pay attention to the use of "bad writing" in the observation process. As the saying goes, a good memory is not as good as bad writing. Many students see a lot and think a lot every day, but they are not good at writing it down at any time, which will waste the observed materials and a lot of valuable things.

(3) Pay special attention to the perseverance of observation. Don't make "brain fever". Three minutes of heat is not conducive to writing a good composition. You should observe life and think about every day in your life, so that you can write wonderful articles.

Learning to observe is a great foundation and motivation for writing a good composition. Without observation, you often find it difficult to write. May you learn to observe, constantly cultivate and improve your ability to observe, and make great progress in your writing practice.

Third, the meaning is high, and the text wins.

Intention is to establish the center and intention of the article. So what problems should we pay attention to when designing the article?

(A) the idea should be correct

Correctness is the first essence of article conception. The so-called correctness is to ensure that the feelings and thoughts of the article are correct, in line with the nature and laws of objective things, in line with China's basic political principles, in line with people's basic moral requirements, and can give people positive inspiration.

(2) single-minded.

"Writing is more important than single, practice makes perfect, and dispersion is stupid." No matter how complicated things are, the main idea cannot be dispersed. If an article wants to explain this problem and that point of view, it is bound to be ambiguous. In fact, if you want to cover everything, it is definitely not in place. In addition, an article can only have one center. Instead of "biting off more than one can chew", it is better to concentrate on pen and ink.

(c) Ideas should be novel.

The article should avoid conformity, and novel angle is the core of composition innovation. The idea of the novel requires jumping out of the old box, not following the advanced thinking, habitual thinking or the original psychological formula, but examining the alternative content contained in the topic from a unique perspective to avoid what others often write and what others have not written. Even the same writing object can always be cut from multiple angles, as long as we break the mindset and stand at the height of the times. Avoid "vulgarity" and seek "difference", think from multiple angles and sides, associate, expand, analogize or reverse, and you can build your most beautiful rainbow without saying a word in the colorful sky.

(4) profound ideas.

Profound conception means that the established theme is not the superficial truth that people are familiar with, but to look at the essence through the phenomenon and dig deeper meaning.

(5) ingenious conception.

In limited words, if you want to express profound thoughts, you can only see the world from a grain of sand, reproduce the whole picture of life from one branch and one leaf, and describe and think about society and life from one drop, one fragment, one moment and one phenomenon, that is, you should focus on the big picture and put pen to paper in a small place, but you can see great dullness from a small angle.

Fourth, how to write a good article about things.

How to write a good article? Please remember the following five points:

(1) Explain the origin

Use at the beginning of the article

A word or two to introduce the history of goods naturally leads to the following.

(2) Specific description

Through color and shape, the shape of an object is accurately outlined, and its characteristics are written, giving people a distinct feeling. Use some appropriate rhetorical devices to expand a reasonable imagination and give it emotion, so that the object will come alive on paper.

(C) the combination of static and dynamic

Write the static shape characteristics first, and then write its dynamics. This will add some interest and make the article more vivid.

(4) Interpretation function

Each item has its own unique function. Generally speaking, this kind of article should explain the function of the article at the end, which will highlight the characteristics of the article.

(5) Integration with feelings

Between the lines, it is necessary to reveal the author's love and cherish for the things described, which will enhance the appeal of the article.

Five, to make a long story short

You must be very moved to read a good article, right? If you want to introduce this story to others simply, you can use abbreviations. This exercise is abbreviated, and the main content is required to be complete and focused; The language is concise, with no more than 300 abbreviations.

Abbreviation is a common form of formation. Abbreviation is to compress a long article into a short article without changing the center and genre and retaining the main content of the original text. Learning abbreviations can help us better understand the content of the text, cultivate our reading ability and generalization ability, and then improve our language expression ability. So, how to abbreviate it?

(1) Keep the trunk and leave the branches and leaves. When writing a short text, you should cut out the minor characters and events, as well as explanations and explanations, leaving the main content of the text. For example, in the article "the little scribe", we should first think: under what circumstances did Sellyew start to help his father, why did he do it secretly, how did he do it, and what was the result? Then draw the place that touches you most.

(2) Simplify the task language directly. In narration, direct narration should be changed into indirect narration, and the language of characters should be simplified as much as possible. In this way, the plot is coherent and the sentence is "concise".

(c) Keep the context clear. abbreviate