Modify the types of wrong sentences and mixed sentences, help me! !

The revised sentence is: 60,000 mu of snow-white pear blossoms make the lush Yongchuan Huanggua Mountain white; Golden rape blossoms and pink peach blossoms adorn it, which is very spectacular.

Yes-manufacturing

It's a typo. I don't know if you called yourself.

"Add" and "add oil and vinegar" seem to be repetitive.

Both "evil" and "abnormality" indicate degree, and one is enough.