Evaluation of describing hometown composition

Evaluation of the composition describing hometown 1 1. The praise of the characters at the end is sincere and touching. The implicit ending of the article is both topical and intriguing.

2. Focus on the end to express emotions, give consideration to the beginning, and summarize the full text. Coherent from beginning to end, in one go. The vivid description of details reveals the inner world of the characters in a beneficial way, which is the success of this paper.

3. The article ends with …, which is concise and full of charm.

4. At the end of the article, the central sentence is revealed, and the pen is clear, short and powerful. The ending is full of expectation and enthusiasm, and the words are still unfinished.

The poetic language at the beginning and end of the article is full of imagination and rhythmic beauty, which makes people want to read and love to read.

6. Although it is a trivial matter, it is vividly described by the author, and an indispensable stroke at the end highlights the theme of the article.

7. Although the story is ordinary, it is sincere, full and touching.

8. The end of the article is unconventional, giving people the feeling of wanting to rest.

9. The ending is clear and meaningful.

10. the article is miscellaneous but not chaotic, but it can be detailed and focused.

1 1. This article fully and appropriately renders ... and gives a detailed and vivid description of the key points of the article.

12 ... is practical and contains simple and profound philosophy. It is refreshing and emotional to read.

13. This article is full of passion. Between the lines, we can understand the little author's love for …. The full text has distinct levels and fluent sentences.

14. The case narrative is vivid, concrete and interesting, which is in line with the previous metaphor. Finally, the author expressed his feelings for … in a few words, which is touching. The article is well organized and forms a complete image.

15. The language of the article is fresh and lively, the description can grasp the main features of things, and the length is short and pithy, which is worth reading.

16. The content of this article is vivid and rich, the language is novel and refreshing, and the structure is unique and reasonable.

17. The article is meticulous, orderly, vivid and concrete, which is a masterpiece.

18. The close-up is unique and interesting. The full text is full of childlike innocence and interest, and it is very kind to read. This article can read fresh and interesting language and descriptions … between the lines, it is full of childlike interest in childhood, and laughter is endless, which is a masterpiece.

19. Appropriate details and the combination of reality and reality are the two major characteristics of this article, which is also the content of this article ... richer and more vivid.

20. The full text is fresh and elegant, friendly and euphemistic, simple and unconventional, which is worth learning.

Composition evaluation, who described his hometown, 2 1. Although he described ordinary things, his analysis was thorough and reasonable, and his rational exploration was profound, which highlighted the essence of the incident.

2. Although the incident is small, it reflects profound truth and has certain universality.

3. Multi-angle material selection, fully embodies the personality characteristics of the characters, and the characters are full.

4. The language is simple, the feelings are dull, and the affection is not deep enough.

5. The emotion is too strong, and it doesn't seem too emotional. Instead, he is complacent.

6. Lack of depth of emotion, failure to express feelings through scenes, and failure to generate feelings from events. Although feelings are hidden in words, they fail to dig deep.

7. Psychological depiction is not vivid and concrete enough to effectively express the attitude, likes and dislikes of the characters. Rationality: repeatedly emphasize the author's point of view from different angles and aspects, demonstrate thoroughly and have clear ideas.

8. Quoting classic examples of famous sayings is more convincing and can express the author's point of view more powerfully.

9. Strong arguments, thorough and reasonable analysis and strong philosophy.

10. Rich examples, proper selection of materials and detailed description are more convincing.

1 1. Strong feelings, such as volcanic eruption, can deeply touch readers.

12. Sincere feelings, deep affection, like mellow wine, make people drunk if they don't drink it.

13. Emotions are real and natural, and there is no suspicion of affectation. Show your true feelings with a normal heart.

14. The mental journey is true and delicate, and the thoughts and attitudes of the characters are clear to readers at a glance.

15. The feelings are true and delicate, and the words are touching, which really comes from the author's heart.

16. Seek the gains and losses of life from self-reflection, reveal the true feelings in confession, and the words are powerful and shocking.

17. The sentence is fluent, the sentence meaning is fluent, the words are beautiful, the narrative image is vivid and vivid, and the language expression ability is strong.

18. The language is concise, the words are concise and powerful, and a few words can convey the spirit of the characters.

19. The language is fluent, detailed and vivid; The meaning of the sentence is implicit and euphemistic, with profound implications. After reading it, it is like a lingering fragrance after drinking.

20. The language is vivid and humorous, which makes people laugh.

Describe the composition and evaluate your hometown: 3 1. The words used in behavior description are exquisite and accurate, and the verb series vividly highlights the psychological state of the characters and points out their personality characteristics.

2. The language is basically fluent, occasionally fluent.

3. The language is not fluent enough, and the meaning of the sentence is vague and puzzling. This statement is wordy, but it doesn't convey the meaning. Just verbose.

4. The language is too brief, which seems to be an outline narrative, but it fails to get an outline, with incomplete meaning, and the narrative is boring, dry and lifeless.

5. The beginning of the article is simple and appropriate, and it is very artistic to set off the emotions of the characters through environmental description. The beginning is concise and to the point

6. The beginning of the article is novel and serves as a warning. Let readers have the impression of … as soon as they meet.

7. The beginning of the article is fascinating and attracts readers. The combination of point and surface makes the article vivid, concrete and meticulous.

8. The language of the article is vivid and readable. The beginning is extraordinary, attracting readers from the beginning, touching people's hearts and feeling the truth.

9. The beginning of the article is very clear, which plays the role of general manager. The novel selection of materials in this article aroused readers' desire to read.

10. He described with passion ... focused and detailed. The metaphor is apt and the words are vivid.

1 1. The language of the article is easy to understand, close to the reality of life and friendly to read. ... in a relaxed and pleasant tone, it is memorable.

12. The narrative is natural and vivid, with compact structure, natural and coherent connection and prominent center.

13. For the description of the scenery, the language is concise and accurate, while the association is touching the scene, and the scene naturally blends into one.

14. By enriching the characters' language and actions, the characters' ideological quality is set off.

15. This article is lyrical in narration.

16. Make full use of the combination of static and dynamic writing, supplemented by metaphor and personification.

17. The little author observes carefully and narrates orderly.

18. The use of some subtle words adds a lot of interest to the article.

19. The article is elegant and fluent, especially the characters' language is humorous.

20. The imagination of the article is reasonable.

Composition evaluation 4. Describe my hometown. Facing the continuous sunshine and cold wind in the early morning, our family set foot on the country road for mountain climbing.

After about an hour or two, we crossed the rugged mountain road, the narrow gravel road, the chic and beautiful pavilion and the dark bamboo forest, and finally reached our destination.

We climbed the high steps and saw a tall, lush and grotesque tree. When we walked in, a sign said "branches face north". I don't understand. My mother will explain it to me quickly. "The name of this big tree is North Branch, which is said to commemorate Yue Fei. You see, the branches are all facing north, as the name suggests. " I heard it, and it suddenly dawned on me.

Then, we came to Longquan. I saw mountain spring water flowing from the mouth of a big ball of shilong, with bright eyes, slightly raised eyebrows and wide mouth. What a domineering faucet! It is said that drinking the "holy water" from Longkou can eliminate disasters and cure diseases. Everyone is eager to try.

And that "Luo". It is said that this arhat tree was planted by the founder of Shimizu, with a history of more than 300 years. However, it is only more than three meters high and its trunk is thick. Legends about "Lohan Tree" abound.

Sightseeing all the way to the "Qingshui Ancestral Temple". Incense is flourishing here. Every holiday, people from all directions come to burn incense and worship Buddha and pray for peace. Bright red walls and golden glazed tiles are like a sparkling sea in the sun, and smoke fills the "Qingshui Ancestral Temple", just like a fairyland on earth. Walking into a door, there are four fierce stone statues on both sides, with various weapons in their hands, a belly like a big ball, and two round eyes wide open, which seems to be "unlucky". I quickly strode to keep up with my parents. According to reports, the "Qingshui Ancestral Temple" has three floors, the first and second floors are for praying. The third floor is used for fortune telling. Of course, it's just luck now. God-like founder of Shimizu, there are many stories about his origin. It is said that Qingshui Rock was founded by him.

The TV series My Fair Princess was filmed in Qingshui Rock. The origin of the famous Anxi tea "Tieguanyin" is foggy, except that there is indeed a Tieguanyin behind Qingshui Ancestral Temple. There are still many myths and legends about Qingshui rock, which can't be finished!

After sunset, we drove home by winding roads.

What a happy day!

Teacher's comment: The article describes what I saw, heard and felt during my trip. Beautiful words are like the water in a waterfall. This article has both sound and shape, dynamic and static combination, and rich imagination adds icing on the cake to the beauty of nature, just like being there, and the waves of words are fascinating.

Description of hometown composition evaluation 5 I love the mountains and rivers in my hometown, and I love the bamboo forests in my hometown more. Spring is full and the spring is charming. It is a highlight of my hometown and the most beautiful scenery in my heart.

Standing on a small stone bridge with a stream overlooking the bamboo forest. Looking from a distance, the greenery is overwhelming, the bamboos are interlaced, but they are orderly. They are full of vigor and vitality, full of youthful enthusiasm and joy, as if there is infinite power in their bodies that will gush out and soar into the sky. The wind blows gently, and the leaves scattered on the ground dance with the wind, interweaving in the air, sometimes turning into a whirlpool, and sometimes performing magic like a playful bamboo elf. When the wind passes, the leaves fall.

Walking into the bamboo forest, a fresh breath of bamboo and grass came to my face, which made people feel refreshed and intoxicated. Looking closely at the bamboo forests, one by one rises from the ground. Looking up, I only feel my neck ache, but I can't see the top of the bamboo. Green, dark green, light green ... all kinds of green confuse my eyes and blur our hearts. Very high, a section, like a glowing green aperture, covering the bamboo seam, but also so bright and pleasing to the eye. Coming here, I seem to have entered a green paradise. "People travel in the world of painting." Even though I am a talented painter, I'm afraid I can't jump this painting onto my present paper.

Walking in the bamboo forest, I saw a bamboo house in Athens. Pushing through the door, I was extremely surprised by what I saw. Bamboo doors, bamboo windows, bamboo cutting tables, bamboo chairs ... the whole house is new green. Gently touching, smooth and meticulous, is really wonderful! My thoughts are flying, and the fragrant bamboo is famous all over the world for its pride. Their perseverance, justice and modesty have attracted the praise of countless literati. Zheng Banqiao in the Qing Dynasty also left an eternal story, which vividly described the noble quality of bamboo. Bamboo, also known as the "four gentlemen in flowers", is a well-deserved gentleman.

Walking out of the bamboo house, I recall the joy of one step at a time, and my heart is full of deep satisfaction. Looking back at the footprints, I felt an indescribable excitement.

The tour is over, but no matter when, I will never forget this beautiful bamboo forest. I love the bamboo forest in my hometown!

Teacher's comment: This landscape composition has far-reaching artistic conception. The author has a special liking for the bamboo forest in his hometown, is good at describing it, and has beautiful language and rich meanings. From the article, we can see that young writers have profound language skills, and we can also see that authors love their hometown, appreciate the virtues of nature, and have love in their hearts before they can write virtue articles.

No one knows how old the slate road in my hometown is.

Years of wind and rain have carved deep "wrinkles" on its face, and the edges of some stone slabs have been polished bare and dull. Look! Occasionally, a few uneven' stone tablets' are engraved with the handwriting of which dynasty! People can't help but want to open that ancient history.

However, the vicissitudes of slate and its four seasons are unique. Let's enjoy it together!

The bluestone road on the spring night is full of moonlight footprints, and a thin layer of rain and fog occasionally rises on the street! The dim moonlight will make you relaxed and happy. Under the dark blue sky, the strip looks like a huge rice paper, and the moonlight penetrates through the branches and leaves. The mottled light and shadow released by the rice paper looks like a wonderful freehand brushwork ink painting, like a poem and a dream. The bright moon is like a huge street lamp, illuminating anywhere in the narrow strip. At this time, Qingshi Road is quiet, gentle and beautiful.

The bluestone road in summer is cool. The scorching sun is unbearable. When I was thirsty, I couldn't help exclaiming "It's so cold!" as soon as I walked to the bluestone road under the long eaves. I only feel that there is a coolness under my feet from time to time, which goes straight through my heart and is cool! At this time, you don't want to go to that annoying hot world, just want to stay here, bathe in the cool wind, and never want to leave this cool bluestone road again!

In the lingering autumn, I will pick a rainy day, hold a small umbrella, go shopping with you and enjoy the beautiful scenery. Walking on the bluestone slab in this misty rainy street, I saw water dripping down the eaves and naughty raindrops beating on the roof tiles. All these make up a cheerful sonata. Looking down, I saw a drop of rain beads falling into a small stone pit at my feet, splashing a crystal water. Look! This water drop is also welcoming you!

In snowy winter, snowy nights are even more interesting. There is a furry "snow blanket" on the bluestone road, which makes people feel particularly warm and thick when stepping on it. At this time, I will go hiking on Qingshi Road with you. In the snow, we will leave two pairs of lovely little footprints, and two strings of silvery laughter will echo, so warm. ...

Ah! Qingshi Road in my hometown has different styles all year round. Students, if you are free, please step on the green slate with me!

Teacher's comment: this composition begins with a topic, which leads to its four seasons from the ancient history of Shiban Road. According to the order of spring, summer, autumn and winter, the language is vivid and distinct, and the invitation at the end gives people a cordial feeling.