After saying goodbye to the teacher, I walked out of the school gate, and my ups and downs were still in my mind.

Classification of ill sentences

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1 Misuse of nouns

1. This conservative thought has hindered our progress. (Obstacle-Obstacle [Obstacle])

How I wish I would never part with him! (wish-hope)

Judging from a large number of statistics, there is no doubt that smoking causes cancer. (Doubt-doubt)

2 Verb misuse

1. He tried to spread all kinds of rumors to destroy our friendship. (fabrication-rumor)

What a touching scene this is! (dynamic-dynamic; Touching)

3. The big car coming on the highway alarmed the bordeaux horses in the team. (frightened)

I want him to know how the poor live. (understanding-knowledge; Understand)

5. It organically integrates environmental issues and development issues into the comprehensive strategy of social and economic development.

Please note that the deadline for submission is the end of this month. (1 Deadline changed to Deadline. .2 Move "cut off" to the back of "bottom")

7. The annual output of this power station is not only supplied to Hangzhou, but also transported to Shanghai, Nanjing and other places. (Change "transportation" to "supply")

8. Dreams are closer to real life.

9. The solicitation will be held for five consecutive sessions, and each session will select 10 songs as candidate songs for the Beijing Olympic Games. (The word "access" was changed to "action")

10. Her paintings are concise, lively and youthful, and have always been loved by her classmates.

3 Misuse of adjectives

1. He is full of valuable work enthusiasm. (rich-complete)

Shirts with the same fabric are produced by the same manufacturer, but the price difference between the two stores is half. (parallax-phase difference)

Xiao Wang's words suddenly added an indescribable heaviness to Xiao Li. (heavy feeling)

At the 47th World Table Tennis Championships, China athletes were full of energy and won four gold medals. Finally: the old man is full of vitality. )

The emission of carbon dioxide is increasing rapidly.

6. For us, the teacher really forgets to eat and sleep. He did it on purpose. (Change "deliberate" to "fuck his heart" or "work hard")

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4 Misuse of auxiliary words

She often dresses up beautifully. (Germany-Germany)

He said happily, "ok, let's go together." (De-Di)

Comrade Lei Feng's deeds have always inspired us to move forward. (Delete "Zhe")

Mr Lu Xun, the founder of China New Literature, is very concerned about young writers. (Turn to "De")

5 preposition misuse

1. No matter what we do, we are responsible to the people. (right)

2. The name Jiao is not familiar to middle school students in 2 1 century. (Delete "for")

Our school has taken some measures to improve students' lives. You cannot insert a verb-object phrase in "on". You can add "problems" after "life", or change "above" to "aspects")

After this interesting experiment, I fell in love with biology.

Yes, he is an example for me to learn from.

Hui Qi's composition, with its rigorous structure and fluent language, won the first prize in the city composition competition.

He was admitted because of the second interview. (pass)

8. Self-written and self-performed teaching materials have played a certain role in developing personality and guiding students to read famous works. (replace "in" with "right" and add "and other aspects" after "masterpiece"

9. The organizing committee announced that the song collection for the first Olympic Games will start on April 15 this year. ("In" and "Up")

6 pronoun misuse

(1) reference unknown

1. Wang Li and Li Mei met a strong wind on the road. She ran forward in three steps, holding her hand and asking questions. (She-the citation is unknown, so the first "she" is changed to "Wang Li" or "Li Mei")

Li Ping and Xu Yang went home all the way. He told him that he bought a The Journey to the West in the bookstore the day before yesterday and asked him if he had read it. (The first "he" is changed to "Li Ping" or "Xu Yang")

The shepherd boy is eating grass with the cow. Whether "the shepherd boy eats grass" or "the cow eats grass". Change it to "the shepherd boy leads the cow, and the cow is eating grass." )

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(2) People are wrong

1. Sister wrote: "She studies very well, and teachers and classmates like her very much." ("She" becomes "I")

2. Some time ago, the media widely reported that Sichuanese had fasted for 49 days, and some people put forward new views on the limit of human life. Mr. Si Manan questioned this matter, and I think he is right. (The reference is unclear)

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7 adverb misuse

1. The new class teacher cares about the students as much as the original class teacher. (more-very; All)

Xiao Wang is excellent in character and scholarship, and no one in the class doesn't say that he is not a good student. (multi-adverb "no", remove one)

No one will deny that the earth does not revolve around the sun. (One more adverb "no", one more)

4. improper use) every step they take, there is no denying that they don't need to pay huge sums.

After reading this letter, no one in our school was moved by it. Courage.

Can we deny that our views are incorrect?

We can't deny that the earth is not moving.

8. Use more negative words) Experts remind you to take protective measures when watching the solar eclipse, and don't watch it directly with your eyes to avoid burning your eyes. (Delete "Don't")

9. Use more negative words). The street hopes to vigorously carry out legal education through various channels to prevent teenagers from breaking the law. (Delete "No")

10. Correct) The history of scientific progress tells us that new knowledge can only be obtained through field experiments, not through introspection or philosophical empty talk. (Correct) Chongqing College Entrance Examination in 2006.

1 1. Correct) I am very interested in the TV series Yongzheng Dynasty. (correct)

12. Correct) Observing the world through instruments broadens people's horizons, which also changes our understanding of the material world. Chongqing college entrance examination in 2006

13. Correct) A large number of facts tell us that environmental disasters have no national boundaries, and all mankind should work together to protect our homeland. (correct)

14. Correct) 03 National College Entrance Examination. At that time, there was more than one literary club in the whole school, and our "Sea Breeze Club" was the largest. The students who participated in it spanned three grades and published the most beautiful literary publication "Shell".

15. Correct) Building Beishan into a provincial forest park is an important project for the local government to implement sustainable development. (correct)

16. Correct) Educators should be good at guiding students to see the world with beautiful eyes and feel the world with beautiful hearts. (correct)

17. Through the joint efforts of all of us, the SARS epidemic has been gradually controlled. (correct)

18. Correct) We should live in harmony with nature and protect our own home-the earth. (correct)

19. Correct) The light in the hut went out, and the owner entered the sweet dream country, leaving only the dark night to watch over her in the forest. (correct)

20. Correct) The national curriculum reform initiated in the new century has achieved some phased results in Tianjin Experimental Zone. (correct)

2 1. Correct) In World War II, the victory of Normandy opened the second battlefield in Europe and accelerated the demise of fascist Germany. (correct)

22. Correct) The China Disabled Art Troupe performed a large-scale music and dance & gt in Hongkong, which was warmly welcomed by the audience. (correct)

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Misuse of conjunctions

1. There are eggplant, beans, cucumbers and many vegetables in my small vegetable garden. ("and" changed to "etc")

No matter whether the emperor Lao Zi broke the law, we should punish him according to law. ("No matter ... this sentence is a hypothetical relationship).

There are only a few lights in our garden, but they have stars all over the sky. (just-but there is)

People who work the most often cherish time most, because they have a clear goal, not only to arrange their work reasonably in order to achieve this goal, but also not to waste time in indecision. Therefore, there is only one way to make effective use of time and cherish it, and that is to set a goal for your life and strive to achieve it. (1 Delete "not only." 2 "and"

5. According to> regulations, the construction of large-scale infrastructure projects must be approved by the cultural relics department, but some infrastructure units start construction without authorization, which leads to destructive excavation and worries.

6. Yucai Hope Middle School in a certain place specializes in recruiting poor students with excellent academic performance. Not only does the school not charge tuition, but teachers often raise money for students' accommodation.

7. Global warming has a great impact on human production and life.

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1 incomplete theme

[1] Abuse of ellipsis makes the subject incomplete.

1. In the process of knowing him, I was deeply impressed in my study, work and life. (Add the subject "He" before "Du")

2. Xu Honggang's epic deeds suddenly touched the heartstrings of the audience, and he was deeply educated in extreme excitement. (Add "audience" before "before")

When the wind sweeps across the rice fields, it rises and falls like a boiling Yellow River. (Add "paddy field" before "just like")

When my mother and I walked onto the overpass and watched the endless stream of people, we were all very excited. (add a subject before "look")

1 incomplete theme

[2] Abuse of prepositions leads to incomplete subject.

1. After this study, we got a great education.

2. Through this period of review, students' academic performance has been greatly improved.

Through education, I have improved my understanding.

Edison's desire to do experiments while selling newspapers on the train was broken by the rude intervention of the conductor.

Thanks to everyone's efforts, we have finished the work of making class web pages.

6. Nanjing was named "China Excellent Tourist City" through strict national evaluation.

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7. In the process of building the Three Gorges Dam, no matter what kind of difficulties the workers encounter, they can overcome difficulties and forge ahead bravely.

8. In the process of reading literary classics, I have learned a lot about being a man and the true meaning of life.

At six o'clock in the morning, thousands of people stood on both sides of the street leading to the airport.

10. Reading this article has greatly educated me.

1 1. Through our efforts, we finally completed the learning task of junior high school.

12. By planting trees, the vigilant people can know the past and see the future, and finally become the conscious action of the whole people.

1 incomplete theme

[3] secretly changing the topic, resulting in no topic behind.

1. The enemy on the left was about to grab the gun on the table when Li Jianwu cut off four fingers with one knife and shouted "Be honest". The subject of Shousheng is Li Jianwu.

Since then, Wang Xiaohu was injured and disabled, but he was still forced to do heavy work. (Add "someone" before "still forced")

After all the other passengers got off, I saw Li Ming finally get off with an old man, with a suitcase in his hand. (add "grandpa" before "hand")

2 Predicate is incomplete

1. When further deepening the reform, all units should establish and improve the necessary rules and regulations. (1 Delete "Work"; 2 add "completed" before "built")

On the way to the artillery position, Zhu Kezhong, a cook of the battery company, suddenly came up to him dressed as a pig picker. (Add "find" or "see" after "suddenly")

We should advocate and carry forward the spirit of hard struggle and step-by-step learning methods. (Add "master" before "step by step")

4. Cunning people despise learning, fools envy learning, and smart people are good at learning.

5. The Government of China has always been committed to maintaining world peace and stability and resolving international disputes through political means. (Add "advocate" before "adopt")

6. A glorious history worthy of a nation's memory. (Add "you" after "should")

3 Incomplete object

1 Broadband network can not only browse information, send and receive e-mails, but also provide intelligent and personalized services such as online video on demand and distance education.

The instructor's face showed relief. (smiling face)

There are many opportunities for myopia, so we should develop eye hygiene at ordinary times. (habit of)

The county government severely dealt with the unauthorized price increase of cement plants. (event or problem)

Recently, the relevant departments issued an urgent notice prohibiting all hunting, selling and purchasing wild animals such as civets. (Delete "everything" and add "action" at the end)

It is understood that at present, a kind of anti-corrosion, anti-wear and anti-bacteria has been introduced in Guangxi market, which makes the "healthy" condition of solid wood flooring better maintained. Added products)

We actively responded to the announcement made by the headmaster at the opening ceremony of the school to rejuvenate the country through science and technology.

In the face of national interests, should we abandon Confucius and Mencius' "golden mean", learn from the Korean spirit, and hold high "deal with a man as he deals with you"? (the flag of)

This is a deeper inhibition in the brain.

10 We should cultivate our students with rich knowledge and noble quality. (Absence of subject and object)

Thank you for letting me know how poor we are. (Add "you" after "thank you")

4 The attributive adverbial is incomplete

1. If you want to get excellent grades, you must work hard. (Add "hard work" before "labor")

They put the students together on the farm and practice eating, living and working together. (Add "and farm workers" before "implementation")

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1 Improper collocation of subject and predicate

1. Grandpa's habit of watching football seems to have improved. The past haunts me again. (emerging)

Angels in white fought in the front line of fighting against SARS, and their touching deeds and spirit of sacrifice spread in the hearts of the broad masses of the people. (oral communication)

I took my mother's smiling face and words into the camera and made an album.

4. Say goodbye to the teacher and walk out of school, and the ups and downs of thoughts are still rolling in my mind. (changed to "ideological trend")

From the day he went to school, China people took a keen interest in him. (inappropriate theme)

6. Her second exam was accepted. (Delete "of")

7. How many all-around battles have you fought? ("Almighty" becomes "fierce"; Change "play" to "occur" and "expand")

8. The night wind blows, and the dense branches and bright moonlight sway, making a rustling sound. (Add "leaves" before "hair")

Mr. Liang Shiqiu's former residence "Yashe" is an important cultural landscape in Pei Bei. (The word "important" was changed to "protection"

2 Improper collocation of verbs and objects

1. We should always ensure the safety of ourselves and the people around us. (change "guarantee" to "protection" and delete "work").

The fundamental purpose of developing productive forces in socialist countries is to improve people's living standards. ("improve" and "level")

3. The completion of the new Paifang overpass will greatly ease the traffic jam during the rush hour. ("mitigation" is inconsistent with the problem. Change it to "solve")

The injection of new funds has brought about fundamental changes in this seriously loss-making enterprise. (change to "occurrence")

As soon as I entered the meeting, I saw many colorful flags and a cheerful song. (improper verb object)

6. The third year of the college entrance examination. In view of the rising international crude oil prices, the United States, India and other countries have established or increased their oil reserves, and China must also establish a national strategic oil reserve system as soon as possible. (Improper "establishment" and "oil reserve". )

7. Smart people are good at cultivating, adjusting and melting their emotions, so that their emotions are subjected to a colorful virtuous circle. (Change "received" to "generated")

I let my guard down. (Relax) [A quick whistle broke the quiet night-it should be "the peace of the night"]

9. Because proper temperature helps the chemical reaction speed, the construction period will be chosen in May and June when the temperature is high. ("help" and "speed" are improper. )

10. This small building has left an indelible memory in everyone's heart. (Memory changed to "impression")

1 1. Some people, facing the beautiful scenery of nature, only hear sounds and colors. (Add "View Only" before "Color")

12. We must expand and accelerate the development of education in China. (Add "scale and" before "development")

13. We should safeguard the interests of the collective and don't do anything that is not conducive to unity, and don't do anything that is not conducive to the collective. (Delete "things", change "harmony" to "or" and "behavior" to "things")

14. The People's Liberation Army has rescued and provided disaster relief for many times, protecting people's lives and property. (Delete "Security of")

After reading the Judgment, people will ask such a question: Who caused these criminals? (Replace "make these criminals" with "make these people criminals")

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3 improper calibration

(d+head language. Improper modifiers and headwords)

1. In order to give full play to all his talents, he resolutely decided to return to China to participate in China's space development research.

I walked into a novel and unfamiliar school gate. ("This Gate" is changed to "Campus")

The new headmaster, Chen, left a beautiful and deep impression on us. (The attribute "beautiful and profound" is not appropriate)

4. Guo Moruo's Goddess is the product of the May 4th Movement, and its outstanding historical significance lies in its outstanding expression of the May 4th spirit. (replace "outstanding" with "great" or "important")

The solid basic knowledge laid by middle school has created conditions for his further self-study. (Delete "knowledge", "laid" can only modify "foundation")

We should save unnecessary expenses and waste as much as possible. ("unnecessary" cannot modify "waste")

Improper collocation of four forms

1. Young people, in the face of the old, the weak and the sick, just lift a finger. (Add "Give them their seats" before "but")

People are deeply infected by the clear thinking and optimistic mood of the old people. (Delete "clear thinking")

I was so angry that I scolded Wang Qiang casually. (whatever)

After class, he went to the hillside alone and read English new words with great interest. (Change "enthusiastic" to "earnest")

People watch and listen to the speeches of veterans with cordial eyes. ("With kind eyes" matches "staring" instead of "listening")

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5. Improper collocation of complementary materials

1. Sorry, we didn't take good care of you this time. (Change "considerate" to "considerate")

2. Xiao Li's acting skills are very high and her feelings are full. ("plump" becomes "plump")

6 Improper collocation of subject and object

1. The beautiful Kunming in spring is a beautiful season.

2. Dunhuang Mogao Grottoes, which integrates murals, colored sculptures and architecture, is the largest existing grotto corridor and Buddhist art with the longest continuous construction time in the world. (add "palace" or "treasure house")

3. Yuelu Mountain in late autumn is a good time for people to appreciate the red leaves of Lushan Mountain and climb high and overlook.

Her rosy face is like a pear in full bloom.

His hometown is Qinggang County, Heilongjiang Province.

The population density in Beijing is the highest in China. (Inappropriate guests and guests)

7. Being a mother is a profession and a job. Being a mother is a profession and a job. )

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1 redundant subject;

② Predicate is redundant;

③ redundant objects;

4 attributes are redundant;

⑤ Adverbials are redundant;

6 complement is redundant;

7 redundant related words (abuse of related words)

1. will stabilize and improve the present real life. (Remove "reality")

Those old people, because of their weak constitution, can't compete with young people, so they can only stand in the carriage and stagger with the bumps of the vehicles. (Delete "old man")

3. In order to prevent the SARS epidemic from rebounding, city leaders require all units to further strengthen management and formulate strict preventive measures.

4. It's like thinking of your traveling companions and comrades on the battlefield.

5. All over the mountains, there are fruits everywhere.

6. He works very hard.

I firmly believe that the future belongs to us.

8. The reporter witnessed the touching work scene of medical staff fighting SARS in Xiaotangshan Hospital. (witness with one's own eyes)

9. The cicada is very light in the dim morning light, far and near, far and near, but it seems that there is no cicada. (Repeat "very" and "very")

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1 redundant subject;

② Predicate is redundant;

③ redundant objects;

4 attributes are redundant;

⑤ Adverbials are redundant;

6 complement is redundant;

7 redundant related words (abuse of related words)

10,03 National College Entrance Examination. Before taking part in the expedition, he had written a will, and if anything happened during the expedition, all four children would get a fixed monthly living allowance from his huge inheritance. ("If" and "If" are repeated. )

1 1. After reading Zhao Benshan's sketches, people often can't help laughing. (repeat)

12. This afternoon, we listened to teacher Li Hua's special report and lecture on how to adapt to the needs of the times and be a qualified middle school student. (repeat)

13. In recent 200 years, about one third of the forests on the earth have been cut down and destroyed.

14, you'd better write for our "Young Forest Literature Society" to welcome the upcoming school celebration. (There is repetition)

15. Once a woman becomes a mother, she devotes herself wholeheartedly. (without exception, devote yourself wholeheartedly)

16, during the summer vacation, everyone must pay attention to safety when going swimming to prevent accidents. (repeat)

17, we middle school students, in class, generally speaking, we can all listen carefully. (Delete a "we")

The deeds of many revolutionaries of the older generation are good examples for us to learn. ("The deeds of" are superfluous)

19, you sent exercises and are printing. ("execution" is redundant)

20. Before Tomb-Sweeping Day, all students of Hongwei Middle School presented flowers to the Martyrs Cemetery. ("hold" is redundant)

2 1, the weather is cool in early autumn, and the sun is not as hot as in summer. ("Hanging in the sky" is redundant)

22. I feel happy and satisfied after listening to my mother's words. ("mood" is redundant)

23. The experience of past dynasties, ancient times, Chinese and foreign countries proves that useful talents cannot be cultivated in greenhouses. ("Ancient and Modern" and "Past Dynasties" are repeated)

What a rich and silent subtext this sentence contains! ("subtext" contains "silence")

24. The Anshi Rebellion led to the ruin of people's lives, and Du Fu's family was also displaced and drifted to the southwest. ("creature" means "person")

He and Xiao Wang discussed many times how to prove this geometric problem. ("Repetition" and "repetition" have the same meaning)

26. I sincerely thank my math teacher. ("In my heart" is redundant)

28. Li Ming is very careful in any work. ("very" and "very" are repeated)

29. In order to simplify the number of words, it has to be slightly reduced. ("Slightly added" and "somewhat" are repeated)

30. The heavy schoolwork burden of primary and middle school students is a chronic disease that puzzles our basic education. ("stubborn disease" and "disease" repeat)