The second volume of Chinese in senior one is Dayanhe-my nanny teaching plan.

Teaching objectives

First, the teaching objectives

1. Knowledge and ability

Understand the characteristics of this poem to express feelings with vivid images; Understand the characteristics of this poem in describing details, shaping images and expressing feelings; Learn to grasp the emotion in poetry by reading aloud.

2. Process and method

Try to figure out the language of poetry and cultivate the ability of poetry appreciation; Read repeatedly and experience the expressive effect of rhetorical devices such as circulation and repetition.

3. Emotional attitudes and values

Experience the poet's deep affection for Dayan River, feel maternal affection and learn to be grateful.

Second, the focus of teaching

Try to figure out the language, understand the images in the poem, and understand the author's affection.

Third, the main methods

Group competition and cooperative exploration.

Fourth, the teaching process

(A) stimulate the introduction of interest

A few days ago, Xiaofeng came to our school to give a report. One of the contents is to learn to be grateful. I think this topic is too good. Yes, you should learn to be grateful! Because people grow up in the sunshine and rain of grace. Learning to be grateful is the starting point of being a man. Only by learning to be grateful can we feel the beauty of life, and only by learning to be grateful can we create a beautiful life. In the last century, there was a grateful poet. He dedicated his sincere gratitude to the nanny who raised him-he is the poet Ai Qing.

(B) clear the learning objectives of this lesson

1. Read repeatedly and experience the poet's deep affection for Dayan River.

2. Try to figure out the language of poetry and cultivate the ability to appreciate poetry.

3. Feel maternal love and learn to be grateful.

(3) Group competition and cooperation discussion

1. The first round of competition: reading.

General process: (1) announce the rules of the game. Two groups read the text together, the first and third groups read 1~7, and the second and fourth groups read 8 ~13; Recommend delegates to read; No one reads abstention.

(2) Prepare for two minutes.

(3) Each group read aloud in turn.

(4) Collective appraisal and award five-pointed stars to the winning groups.

2. The second round: Each group takes turns to ask questions and answer freely.

Announce rules:

(1) time 15 minutes

(2) One group asks questions and the other groups answer freely.

(3) Every time a question is raised or a correct answer is given, a five-pointed star is added to the group.

(4) No one can answer the questions, and the question group is added with a five-pointed star.

Two minutes to prepare-start asking questions-to judge the winner of this round.

3. Third round competition: The teacher asks questions and the students answer first.

This round of competition depends on the last round of questions. If students have a deeper understanding of the text, they should ask fewer questions. If the students' understanding is still very shallow, then the teacher will lead the students to the depths of the text through certain questions. Arrange the time for about 5 minutes. Answer one correctly and add a five-pointed star to its group. For example:

(1) What is the image of Dayan River?

(2) How did the author create this image?

(3) How to understand the last three sentences of paragraph 12? Can you see the author's feelings?

(4) Is this poem a narrative poem or a lyric poem?

4. Calculate the total number of five-pointed stars obtained by each group in three rounds, determine the winning group and praise it.

(4) Expand thinking and discussion, and speak freely.

1. Question: Do you know your parents, especially your mother? How do you think you should thank your parents?

Step 2 speak freely

Verb (abbreviation of verb) course summary

Only by learning to be grateful can you become a real person, an admirable person with noble cultivation. Learn to be grateful, starting with thanking your parents.

Attachment: blackboard writing

Teaching plan (2)

Teaching objectives

I. Knowledge and ability

1, understand the lyrical characteristics of poetry, and understand that poetry often expresses feelings with vivid images.

2. Clarify the lyric structure of the poem and grasp the image of the nanny.

3. Understand the application and function of parallelism, repeated rhetoric and comparative writing in poetry.

Second, the process and method:

1. Understand the image of Dayan River through the analysis of typical details.

2. Read aloud repeatedly and realize the function of rhetorical methods (contrast, repetition and parallelism).

Third, emotional attitudes and values:

Through the thoughts of the whole poem, we can understand the poet's praise and nostalgia for the Dayan River, which is essentially a tribute to the working women in old China.

Teaching focus

1. Learn the application and function of rhetorical devices such as parallelism, repetition and contrast in poetry.

2. Understand and learn the lyric methods used in poetry.

Difficulties in teaching: Perceive the true feelings contained in the author's poems, and experience the methods and importance of the author's poems with emotion.

Teaching methods include reading aloud and reading inquiry.

Teaching aid preparation reading tape

The teaching time is 3 hours.

teaching process

first kind

First, create situations and introduce new lessons.

Second, solve the problem.

Author Ai Qing, formerly known as Jiang Haicheng, 19 10, is from Guitianjiang Village, Jinhua County, Zhejiang Province. It was difficult for his mother to give birth to Ai Qing, and it took him 48 hours to give birth. His father was superstitious and thought it was an unknown omen, so he found a fortune teller and said it was born to his parents. Ai Qing was born an unwelcome person in this family. So Ai Qing was sent to a foster family in the village, and later to Dayanhe's home, where he became his treasure. Ai Qing lived an unforgettable life for five years in the nanny's arms. Ai Qing's flesh-and-blood relationship with the working people has a lot to do with this experience. Simplicity, kindness, hard work, and the feelings and virtues of working farmers have left a deep imprint on Ai Qing's young mind. Ai Qing often said that all he felt in the landlord's house was "discrimination and indifference", and "only in Dayanhe's house did I feel warmth and love".

Ai Qing was arrested and imprisoned for taking an active part in some patriotic movements. 1932. 193365438+1October 14 in the morning, the poet stood in front of the prison, his thoughts fluctuated, and he could not help but have a wide range of associations. He remembered his hometown and Dayan River, a farmer's nanny who had given him maternal love. From the cold snow, think of the warmth given by the wet nurse, from the prison where you were imprisoned to the cemetery where the deceased died. Poetry is surging, and I can't help myself. Therefore, the poet leaned his head against the wall with the help of the snowflake reflected by the iron grating and wrote the well-known poem "Dayan River-My Nanny".

Third, overall perception.

1, play the recording.

2. Pay attention to pronunciation.

Yan Yan, big weir eaves, Yan Wafei fēi furnace, Yao fire thorn, J ī ngji strangled qiā fire bowl, B not crushed niěn ice crumbs, xiè ball dustpan, J ī ngé ng.

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3. Read freely and accurately grasp emotions.

4. What do you know after reading this poem? How do you feel? What thoughts and feelings did the author express?

Students discuss clearly:

After reading this poem, I know Dayanhe is my nanny, and I grew up eating her milk. She has a kind heart and worked hard all her life. She loves me as much as her own son. She lived only forty years before she died.

Sentiment: This poem not only reveals the poet's inner anguish, but also sets up a simple and solemn statue for our rural women in China. That kind of repression first comes from those unfair things in real life and from his concern for the fate of farmers.

With deep and sincere feelings, the author eulogized the industrious and kind quality of poor peasant woman Dayanhe and described her tragic fate. And cursed and exposed the dark society that led to her tragic fate.

5. Clear the structure level.

The first part (1─2) describes the reason why Dayan River got its name and the relationship between Dayan River and itself.

The second part (section 3-8) focuses on the industrious and kind quality of Dayan River, and expresses the poet's nostalgia and respect for Dayan River.

The third part (section 9- 10) describes the desolation of Dayan and his family after his death.

The fourth part (12─ 13) is the elegy and poem dedicated by the poet to Dayan River.

Step 6 experience feelings

Poetry is the carrier of the poet's feelings. What emotion does this poem express?

The whole poem consists of 13 sections, which summarizes the thoughts and feelings expressed in each part.

Part 1: Memories and Mourning

Part II: Attachment and gratitude

Part III: Sympathy and Complaining

Part 4: Acura and Praise

Fourth, class summary.

Today, we learned this poem together. Through the memory and remembrance of her wet nurse, the author expressed her nostalgia, gratitude and praise for the poor peasant woman Dayan River, which aroused people's sympathy for the tragic fate of working women in old China and strong hatred for this "unfair world". The lyric structure of the poet from reality to memory to reality is clarified, and the ups and downs of the poet's emotional melody are understood.

In Shanghai in the late 1930s, a poet saw Ai Qing and said excitedly that Germany has the Rhine, France has the Seine and Egypt has the Nile. Therefore, I can proudly say that China has the Wild Goose River. Yes, if the poet's half-century creation is regarded as a huge river, then Dayan River is his inexhaustible source.

Verb (short for verb) Task:

Second lesson

First, review, consolidate and introduce new lessons.

Second, reading appreciation.

The first part of the study

1, recite by roll call

2. Look at the first two poems. Three of the ten lines are repeated. What's the use of writing like this? Ask students to express their opinions.

Clarity: Repeatedly, it highlights the poet's unforgettable kindness in raising Dayan River, showing a deep homesickness.

3. What kind of person is Da Yanhe in these three paragraphs? Let the students talk.

Clear: not even a first name and a last name. In the name of her village, Dayanhe was also a child bride, and later a nanny of the landlord's son, supporting herself on the premise of supporting the landlord's son. She is a typical rural woman living at the bottom of society. )

4. In poetry, sometimes "she" and sometimes "you" are used as the address. How to understand this? Try to change it.

Clarity: using "she" is an objective explanation, and using "you" is an expression of cordial affection.

Teacher's summary: The first part explains the tragic life experience of Dayanhe and his relationship with me, showing the poet's nostalgia for the wet nurse.

(B) Study the second part

1, how many shots are there in the third quarter? What impression do these shots give you? What rhetorical devices are used? Students try to answer.

Qing: When the poet saw the snow, he thought of Nanny Dayan River. Through imagination and association, it depicts a set of desolate pictures: desolate graves, deserted former residences, pawn gardens and mossy stone chairs. Through a series of comparisons, in the rendering of a thick sad atmosphere, the poet deeply expressed his thoughts and condolences to the nanny Dayan River, which naturally led to the second part of Dayan River's tragic life memories.

2. Q: How did the poet think of Dayan River? Why did Ai Qing say, "I saw the snow, which reminds me of you"? I didn't see the spring rain, but I heard the bleak voice of the autumn wind, which reminded me of you.

Qing: The pure and selfless inner world of Dayan River is as white as snow, and the solemn scene of snow covering the earth just expresses the poet's deep condolences. For many reasons, Ai Qing remembered Dayan River, which gave him infinite warmth, her tragic life experience (her name was the name of the village where she was born), her low social status (she was a child bride and raised her to raise me), her grassy grave after her death, her dead Wafi and her mossy stone chair, all of which constituted the desolation, decline and desolation in our hearts.

3. When reading these poems, what kind of tone should you read aloud?

Clear: deep and soothing.

4. The poet summed up Da Yanhe's life experience with poems. Da Yan and his life have done two kinds of work. When he was a poet, he was a wet nurse. After the poet was five years old, she became a domestic helper. Which section highlights her "wet nurse career" and which section highlights her "helper career"?

Clear: 4 paragraphs, 7 paragraphs.

Ai Qing gave birth to him because of his mother's dystocia, and later he was sent to Dayanhe's house for five years because a fortune teller said he was jealous of his parents. If the author is standing in a real prison on the first floor, then since the fourth season, the author has turned to the affectionate memories of Dayan River. The poet recalled several scenes of his life in Dayanhe. What is the main picture?

Clear: Eight shots, the main picture is "Touch me in your arms".

6. What qualities do poets use to stand out?

Clear: hardworking and caring.

7. What are the functions of these parallelism sentences?

Clear: On the one hand, these parallelism sentences describe the extreme poverty and heavy housework of Dayan River, on the other hand, they show that Dayan River always cares for the nursing baby, always gives him warmth and caresses him everywhere, which fully shows the diligence and selfless love of Dayan River for the baby. We feel that despite poverty and rudeness, there is a mother's love hug and touch here.

8. When the seventh section describes the life of Dayanhe servant, why does every sentence begin with "She is smiling"? Why is Dayanhe laughing? What does this tell us about her personality?

Qing: Six comparative sentences are used to describe Dayan River, which bears such heavy labor year after year, regardless of winter and summer: washing clothes, cooking, feeding pigs, cooking soup, harvesting wheat and drying beans ... but she always smiles, which highlights her diligence, simplicity, generosity, kindness and responsibility, and also permeates the poet's sympathy for her tragic fate. She exchanged her hands for the minimum living needs of herself and her family, and she was very satisfied-her requirements for life were so low!

The repetition of the beginning and the end shows Da Yan's sacrifice for "me" and my family by using all her milk first and then her hands, and shows the greatness of a working woman at the bottom of society.

9. On the one hand, the author shows Dayanhe's diligence, simplicity and generosity, on the other hand, he also shows Dayanhe's love for sucklings. In the poem, Dayanhe's love for sucklings is expressed in many ways. In the fourth season, if Dayanhe's wet nurse career is full of colorful words, what methods are used to express Dayanhe's love? What about the sixth paragraph?

Clear: The fifth section is light pen dyeing and side contrast. Use rhetorical question "Dayanhe, why are you crying?" Indirectly shows her reluctance to the baby and her love for the baby. The sixth section is in sharp contrast with the fourth section: the fourth section says that Dayanhe family is deeply loved although its material conditions are poor. The sixth section says that although the material conditions are abundant, it is extremely painful mentally. In Grandpa He's home, during the nearly five years of foster care, he endured the love of the wet nurse beyond his biological mother, felt the warmth like a relative, and left the wet nurse and his maternal love, which was the most painful thing for children. Although the new home is hung with a plaque, in fact, the child has lost his family. In contrast, the Dayanhe family is poor, but full of joy and love.

10, the eighth section, once again written in front of Dayan and his sincere love for the baby. During the festival, Dayan and his baby's "busy cutting the candy of winter rice" posted Guan Yunchang painted by the baby on the wall beside the fire, praising the baby to the neighbors. These descriptions have been exhausted, but the author digs deeper and shows the deep affection of Dayan River bottom:

Dayanhe once had an unspeakable dream.

In the dream, she was eating a baby's wedding wine.

Sitting in the hall of the glorious celebration

Her beautiful daughter-in-law affectionately calls her "mother-in-law"

1 1. What's the use of this writing?

Clarity: Dayan and her love for the baby turned out to be so profound and sincere that they couldn't even dream of it! Her baby's happiness is her satisfaction! This dream promoted the research and love for the baby, and devoted her loving mother's love. But this dream can't be said, because this dream is right or wrong for Dayanhe, and it is an unattainable but unforgettable persistent expectation.

Third, the teacher summary

Fourth, homework

The third category

1. Read section 9- 13 together and introduce the new lesson.

2. Learn and appreciate poetry

(1) Learn the third part.

1. However, it is such a person that fate has given her poverty and suffering. She lived, worked selflessly for the world, and gave everything to her without reservation-from blood and sweat, milk to sincere heart, until her death, what did the world give her? (Read aloud)

Dayanhe left in tears,

* Who has lived in this world for more than forty years,

The misery of countless slaves,

With a four-dollar coffin and some straws,

There are only a few feet of land to bury the coffin,

With the ashes of a handful of paper money,

Wild goose river, she went crying!

2. Q: What did Dayan get after his death? (meager funeral)

How much she paid before her death and how much she got after her death. The poet's heart ached at this thought, and his heart was filled with deep sympathy for her tragic fate.

3. Q: What is the significance of using a series of quantifiers here?

Clarity: The sharp contrast between the quantitative phrases "over forty years old", "countless", "four dollars", "several feet long", "several bundles" and "one hand" highlights the poet's exposure and accusation of "unfair world": Dayanhe lived only over forty years old, but suffered from "countless" torture, and only a "four dollars" was given to her funeral. The poet's strong indignation is contained in the comparison of these quantitative phrases.

After her death, her husband died, and her son could only be a slave to the waiter except as cannon fodder. The real brushwork contains the voice of accusation. The poet himself finally completely betrayed the class where he was born and became real brothers with the class who raised him. Therefore, Dayan River not only nourishes the poet's body, but also nourishes the poet's spirit.

4. Q: What caused her tragedy? What feelings does the poet have for this society? Read 1 1 the poet's hatred together.

5. The fourth part is the end of the poem, and the author returns to the present reality from the past memory, echoing the beginning. The poet compares, repeats and dips * with six "Dedicated to You" and two "Gifts", praises the soul of Dayan River, and even touches his hands, lips, cheeks and breasts, with unrestrained emotions and unobstructed feelings. The last section responds to the beginning and reproduces the theme of the poem. The whole poem is rigorous in structure and clear in organization.

Thinking: How to understand "Purple Soul"?

Clarification: One view holds that purple is a symbol of nobility and sacredness, and "purple gas comes from the east" and "Forbidden City". Although Dayanhe has a humble position, she is kind, kind and hardworking, which concentrates the virtues of human beings. Her soul is expensive and the greatest.

Another view is that purple is the color of scars, the color of blood coagulation, and the color of people who suffocate. It stands for misfortune, pain, pain and death. Dayanhe suffered all his life and had a tragic ending, so he was called "Purple Soul". )

6. Teacher's summary: In this section, the poet's feelings did not stop at Dayan River. Ai Qing portrayed Dayanhe as hardworking, kind, generous and simple, and wrote the tragic fate of farmers in old China, didn't he? It is these nannies in the human society like the Wild Goose River who created the world with their hard-working hands, created material wealth for the ruling class and the exploiting class, and warmed people with their generous and kind hearts. It is thousands of working people in Qian Qian who milked, bled and sweated, fed others, but had nothing and lived a miserable life. Therefore, the poet presented this poem to everything on the earth, and my nanny is like Dayanhe and their son, which makes the theme of this poem have a deeper and broader social significance.

Thirdly, the image of Dayan River is discussed and analyzed.

Students discuss and answer, and the teacher makes it clear:

1, by describing in detail how the Dayan River silently carries out endless kinds of labor in a hellish environment; After work, he showed his maternal love for the poet. After drinking the milk, he went to the landlord's house to undertake all kinds of heavy work. Parallelism is like a close-up, showing her diligence, simplicity and kindness. She smiles at work, which shows that she lives for her family, regardless of fatigue and hard work, and loves her breasts deeply. A generous character stands out. While showing her hazy, kind and generous personality, she is also filled with deep sympathy for her own destiny. )

2. Not only that, but also describes her rich and beautiful inner world: baby-friendly, devoted (the author also narrates with emotion) and studying.

3. The poet's praise of Dayan River is also a praise of the moral quality of thousands of laborers and sisters-in-law in old China, revealing their tragic fate (section 12).

4. The theme to be expressed through this image.

This lyric poem eulogizes the hard work and kindness of the poor peasant woman with deep and sincere feelings, describes her tragic fate, and curses and exposes the dark society that caused her tragic life.

Fourth, analyze poetic expression.

1 is a lyric poem, but it expresses strong feelings in narrative: for example, the narrative in verses 4, 7 and 8, 1 1 expresses sympathy, nostalgia, praise and love.

2. Rhetoric:

Wonderful contrast: the contrast of two family lives shows that the social system is unreasonable; The contrast of different treatment between the two schools shows the poet's love and hate; Labor before death is miserable after death; The contrast between beautiful dreams and tragic death profoundly shows the theme of the article.

A lot of repetition: express unique feelings, make poetry sigh and enhance the expression effect.

Multiple parallelism: even if the content is concise and the form is neat, it helps to express strong feelings.

In short, repetition and parallelism are more conducive to expressing strong feelings.

3. Poetic style

A notable feature of Ai Qing's poetry in form is the free and unrestrained poetic style. Some people call it "prose culture" and accuse it. However, it should be said that this is not a defect. Ai Qing has also tried various forms, and it turns out that this kind of free poetry with the tendency of "prose culture" is more handy for him, and he has written successful poems in this form. His poems shed the shell of metrical and strict laws, but did not abandon the core of poetry. In this poem, the poem has not lost its poeticity because of dispersion, but is more poetic, free and full of expression. The application of parallelism and repetition to embody metrical rules has achieved good results. A large number of parallelism and progressive layers not only show a variety of pictures, but also enhance the lyrical momentum and internal melody of the poem.

Finally, we might as well look at the poet Lu Li's evaluation of Ai Qing's artistic style:

Think of Ai Qing's poems.

Think about the beauty of prose.

His poems spread like wildfire.

Not a neat rhythm.

His poems fly softly like clouds,

Take its inner beauty as wings.

His poem is a girl on a green stream.

Not a slutty woman

You don't need a gold bracelet or a jade necklace.

What is needed is a breeze and morning dew. ...