Write a composition with the sentiment of the poem "Stars"

1. Write a poem on "Stars". How brilliant the stars are tonight.

The breeze rippled.

In the starlight of the shadow of mountains and rivers

People in the distance, do you hear?

How quiet the night in the village is tonight.

Moonlight from the treetops at the top of the mountain

Scattered in bits and pieces on the mossy stone steps.

Smell everything around you.

The mountain village tonight is as bleak as the night you walked out.

Why are azaleas sandwiched?

The smell of earth can give off fragrance.

However, the silver spring stopped flowing tonight.

The feeling of leaves in microwave

Can people far away see it?

How brilliant the stars are tonight

But I can't hear the cuckoo singing.

Maybe the cuckoo is conveying my affection tonight.

Can you come to my side again?

Let the cuckoo sing for us again.

2. Composition (poem) of stars (120 words) You see, how beautiful the stars are all over the sky! One by one, like a broken diamond on a dark blue cloth, glittering and translucent. How interesting the stars are! The dense stars, like nets cast by fishermen, are swayed by the waves; It is also like a tadpole note on the staff, flashing and swaying, playing cheerful music and swaying happily in the sky. It is also like a huge fireball in the sky. How lovely the stars are! Little star, blink and say hello to me! The big stars, on the other hand, put on their "big ears" to listen to my songs; The bright star _ is, of course, a cordial conversation with its mother, the moon; The dark star told me its sad past! How spectacular these stars are! Astronomers who explore the stars have given them many lovely names according to their patterns: Swan, Andromeda and Pegasus. Although the stars are far away from us, they always try their best to throw bits and pieces of light into this world, which can't help but remind people of those people who contribute light and heat to mankind as unknown as stars.

3. Write the first poem in the words of the stars:

When you see the stars in the sky

Will you think of me?

Do you remember my face?

I used to laugh for you more than the stars.

When you think about the past,

What will happen to you?

Can you sigh softly and sadly?

Miss me shining in your heart.

I'm like the star of the galaxy.

Let you love silently

Let that softness shine more.

Relieve your pain

When you see the bright stars

Please think of me.

When you see the bright milky way

Please remember me in your heart.

The second song:

The words of the stars

Close the curtains!

Turn off your desk lamp!

Let me dream, let me dream!

Go and have your sweet dreams.

I hold the bright moonlight,

I carry the fragrance of epiphyllum,

I brought lanterns and warmth,

I sprayed crystal dew.

Go to sleep, go to sleep,

Get into the warm bed,

Close your black eyes,

Let your dreams fill my light.

Let your dreams be like a cabin in the mountains,

Close the curtains after a hard day's work.

Let me put moonlight, fragrance, lanterns,

Warm and humid places are full of your dreams.

4. Write a composition about the feelings of poetry (be sure to adopt mine): A good poem must be breakthrough, discovery, innovative, innovative, inspiring and uplifting, so that readers can enjoy a fresh and unique aesthetic feeling. The success or failure of a poem has many factors, such as whether the creator of the poem has a living foundation and whether he has been captured. But I think whether the creator of a poem can get a unique artistic feeling from life is an important condition for whether a poem is unique. It is precisely because artistic feeling is a skill of poetry creation that real poets are always good at mastering this golden key to open the door to myth. Luna Charles Key, a famous literary theorist, praised Heine, saying that he has all three basic characteristics of any artist. The first feature is "particularly sensitive to the surrounding environment, particularly sensitive." Wordsworth also stressed that "all valuable poems, no matter how different the subject matter, are due to the author's high sensitivity and long-term thinking." Artistic feeling is a basic skill of a poet and the key to the success or failure of a poem, so it is very important to understand the definition and essence of artistic feeling. However, it is higher than life. However, it does not necessarily mean that he will be able to write poetry when he is alive. Poetry is not a photo copy of real life. It is an emotional wave aroused by real life in the hearts of poetry creators. It needs the creator to build a bridge between life and art in order to reach the other shore-the other shore of poetry. The sense of art is this bridge. Poets can accept the realistic impression in the form of poetry and make use of fantasy activities. Copy this impression into this poem. Clever poetry creators are always good at absorbing the elements of poetry in life through their unique artistic feelings, mobilizing their association and imagination, fermenting and chemically treating those elements, and then brewing poetry. From the perspective of poetry creators themselves, artistic feeling is a function that the soul should have in poetry creation. Judging from the creative process, artistic feeling is the conception process of the author's artistic understanding, artistic experience and artistic discovery of life. In this way, I think the definition of artistic feeling should be: the author experiences life with his own heart, so as to discover the conceptual process of visualized and emotional thoughts by himself. Extending this definition is the essence of artistic feeling.

5. What are the five poems in "Stars in Spring Water"? (1) Excerpt: Fragrant flowers and branches; Birds fly away and the ground is red ―― Is life just a glimpse? Comments: Lao Bingxin compares life to a scene where birds fly in a hurry and fall red all over the ground. She doubts that life will come and go as quickly as she sees it in this world. Old Bing Xin may be sighing for someone that her (his) life is so embarrassing. Have pity on her (him)! Excerpt from "Spring Stars" ②: A successful flower, people only marvel at her present brilliance! However, at the beginning, her bud was soaked with tears of struggle and splashed with blood and rain of sacrifice. Comments: As the saying goes, "All that glitters is not gold." Although the flowers displayed in front of everyone are so exquisite and beautiful, who knows that there are endless efforts behind the beauty, and some people will shrink back in the face of difficulties and then go back to poetry to see the brilliant flowers. Should we learn from their fighting spirit and bumpy past? Pale flowers, and the young man said, "contribute yourself!" " The crimson fruit said to the young man, "sacrifice yourself!" "Comments: From the" confessions "of Yael, Wahl and Guoer to the youth, we can not only see Yael, Wahl and Guoer's expectation and longing for the youth; From the words of Ya Er, Hua Er and Guo Er, we can also see from the side what their usual life is like. Usually it is silent dedication. Excerpt from "The Spring of the Stars" (IV): The sunlight enters the crack of the stone, and the little thorn fruit says, "Use my strength to stick out your head and free yourself from imprisonment!" The trunk was exposed and the hard rock split in two. Comments: In the second sentence, the author (Mr. Bing Xin) takes the tiny thorn fruit as the protagonist, and later the thorn fruit liberates his prisoner with the help of sunshine and his confidence; Because with the help of the power of the sun and the belief of firm victory, the thorn fruit finally came out, and the solid rock (rock) was split in two. This poem expresses the firm belief that it is positive and good to defeat evil. Spring water 174: young people! Care description, time is turning pages, please write! [Appreciation] This is a very philosophical exhortation poem. The beginning of the poem encourages young people to study hard and "cherish and describe" their own life poems by calling and using inverted sentences. Then use an anthropomorphic metaphor to point out the reasons and encourage people to make progress. Because "time is turning pages, please write"! Poetry is similar to Yue Fei's "Don't wait for leisure, a teenager's head is white, and he is sad". After reading this, we will hear the ancient philosopher's shocking warning: "The deceased is like a husband, and he will not give up day and night", thus encouraging Ma to strive to show his brilliant life.