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Zhang Chengyu commented:

The work is sincere and semantically comfortable. Words are vulgar and used, poems are shallow, and every sentence is out of the country.

02? Pearl river beach

Seven laws. Song of the stars (new rhyme)

The moonlight shines on the empty night, and Wan Li shines for thousands of years.

In ancient times, there was a magpie bridge going to the Galaxy Club, but now there is China coming to Beidou.

Fei Yu found an old dream and broke through the clouds to find a new name.

However, I'm sorry about the night, but I can't see the shape.

Comments on Chang' an elderly people

1. Today's homework, read from back to front, and you will see the sea at first sight. Read it from beginning to end, and you will feel that "Huangshan returns without looking at Yue".

2. Couplets can be "the last words".

3. Necklace not only quit his job, but also is full of philosophical thoughts, which is a rare combination.

The ending is good, but the words can be considered a little.

Generally speaking, this work is a rare masterpiece, and the kung fu and realm are worth chewing carefully.

04? age

Reflections on the Seven Laws/Stargazing

Zhu Xi turned to Hao Qiong, and Ye Suo flowed like a cloud.

Where the arrow goes through Tianfeng, Zhang Qi Avenue is Wang Jun.

The sand is full of prosperity, and the spark is burning in Sanqiu.

How witty is every word? Always introspect and argue less.

05? Jiang Ziya

Seven laws/I talk to the stars.

Tao is heartless and affectionate, and it is suspected that Beidou calls its name.

I missed the moon last night when I looked down at my idol.

The twinkling horizon is sad and lonely, and tears shine in dreams.

Poetry excites the longing for love, but love can't escape Yingying.

06? Zhong Tianci

Lv Qi Chen Xing

Cowherd and Weaver Girl sigh the wasted years, and the Arctic perseveres to lead the way.

Taibai East calls the rising sun, and Harley draws the Milky Way in the sky.

The moon is full, the stars are always missing, and I can't help it when people get together.

Who will grasp the fleeting time? And do it, cherish it and make a song.

07? Between water and clouds

Seven Laws _ Looking at the starry sky

Go upstairs and watch the night work.

Purple gas fluorescence impressively, Cowherd and Weaver Girl sigh.

All living beings are always virtuous, but ordinary people don't know the cold in the palace.

Looking back at the eyebrow in front of the window, I looked at each other's clear smile.

08? High point and scattered people

Seven laws. Look up at the starry sky and remember the lofty sentiments (new rhyme)

At night, savor the rhyme of spring snow in Qinyuan and look up at the starry sky to recall lofty sentiments.

The south spreads fire to punish evil, while the north whips and bullies.

Forcing three mountains to bury the old world, thinking of opening a new screen all the way.

Romance soars into the sky and love rushes into the cave.

09? Xiao shengqiu begonia

Seven laws ask the stars (new rhyme)

Love sunny nights alone, and the south building is hundreds of feet away from the pupil.

I once dreamed of beauty in Yaochi, but I especially cherish Beidou Ming.

In ancient times, thousands of lines were given to the moon, but today there are no words to admire the stars.

After years of silence, who will be with you forever?

10? Xishui

Seven laws? star

Black inventory points fine clouds, little jade flowers compose Kyushu.

Three or two pearls fly high and high, and a thousand butterflies fall into the ice.

Nalan spread hatred to Hehan, and Li Bai sang in the temple building.

Poets often invite the bright moon to drink, when will * * * leave the stars.

1 1? Junnuo

Seven laws? Weaver hates the emperor's family.

Along the way, Han Yin locked the incense dust, and then he saw the surprise of Jin Meng.

The stars in the sky move to the palace and the palace is cold, and everything in the world changes for the court.

According to the fate of the lower bound, I hate the newborn emperor and daughter.

Is whitehead Cowherd Anjian? Promise to be five thousand years old.

12? Xia Chaohui

Seven laws. look at the stars

The stars are thousands of miles away, and you know where the afterlife is.

Poverty is far away from the west and the mainland is near, and my humble abode is deep in spring.

Xu Long head * * * white, it's hard to pay this night dreaming.

In poor days, it is always a loss to see a surplus before going to bed.

13? candle light

Seven laws, the feeling of watching the stars and the moon at night (new rhyme)

Yesterday was the old days, and today is by no means the spring of the past.

Running water is ruthless, and falling flowers are deliberately sought.

The cold clouds disappeared, leaving the old, and the winter snow became new.

The creation of the world needs to know the long time of heaven and earth, and the cup of life talks about kindness and hatred.

14? princess

Seven laws of stars

There are several crystals in the vast sky, and the silent voice shines in the night.

Elegance and magnificence shine in the morning sun, and the beauty is like jathyapple Ying.

There is sorrow of light and turbidity, but no pity of candle.

For thousands of years, Shan Xinjian will always exist in spring, summer, autumn and winter.

15? Yajuan

Lv Qi Chen Xing

Looking at the lonely man in the autumn night, the big dipper languishes south.

Weaver Milky Way spreads splendid flowers, and Chang 'e Palace dances green yarn.

Please Mingyue doesn't need a glass of wine, but do come to my house.

And enjoy the street sheng music, the sky is full of flowers flying.

Note: The "Southern Decline of the Big Dipper" refers to the "Southern Decline of the Big Dipper" in Moonlit Night by Liu Tang Fang Ping.

Comment on this little day

The contrast of the first couplet has words and sentences. The Big Dipper is a star, but the tired eyes are blurred, which shows the exhaustion of hometown vividly. When water meets the bright moon, it worries about the stars and the sky. This kind of worry is also overwhelming. Thick clouds explain the meaning, but showers ignore it. The word Tao is very good and has a double meaning. It can be a verb or a road. The tail couplet is also wonderful. Why does the storm only bully guests? Because the guests have moved to the country.

The physical environment of the only neckline turned too abrupt, but suddenly there was a thick cloud and a shower. Of course, the author may have other plans. Let me read it again.

17? Dharma Zheng Hong

Seven laws, seeking truth from the stars

Are you mortal at the age of five thousand? Beidou didn't know the truth until he climbed into the sky.

Mozi climbed the clouds to heaven, and Chang 'e crossed the river with fire.

I often chant romantic songs and occasionally ask ghosts and gods in poetry books.

Let's shoot a gun into the sky. The dragon's destination is the stars.

18? Yansuo Hongqiao

The Seven Laws of Van Gogh of the Stars

The night in Saint Remy is like a flower, and the Big Dipper leans on the Rhone River.

Wandering in Leng Yue, sending crows to wheat fields independently.

People talk about ear cutting and mental illness, but I am a new dreamer.

I wonder if the sky is full of stars and the sea is boundless. You know you are more interested.

19? China Piaoxiang

Seven laws? Star? time

Looking up at the sky, the night is getting longer and longer, and the cowherd and the weaver girl are hiding.

For thousands of years, God and things have been contending for constellations, and Wan Li has made people sleep.

Beidou paved a jade road with love, but Qi Ming was speechless and golden.

The world of mortals is rolling, when is the idol!

20? every day

Seven laws? star

Whenever the night is hazy, I still miss the cosmology of the sky.

There was a saying in ancient times that there were only ghosts in the center of the earth. Today, flying in the sky makes the cold immortal.

Spring, summer, autumn and winter, summer songs are golden years old, and the sun, moon and stars are like earth pills.

Beidou navigation is precise in latitude and longitude, and Nanshan is full of sunset.

[Exhibition of works]

Lv Qi Chen Xing Ganhuai (Yun Xin)

The paper/knife is very scary

There are a few stars in my heart, and it is windy on many summer nights.

The cause of the world of mortals is middle-aged and black-eyed.

Beidou is still clear, and the bleak spring is hard to rely on.

Go deep into the universe to find a bosom friend, return to light years and miss half your life.