It is required to write a composition of about 600 words, commenting on scenery, things and things.

Sunrise and sunrise

It's dawn! The sky in the east is a fish-belly white color. Gradually, the fish-belly white turned pale red, as if people had drunk a little wine and turned red in the face. Then, slowly from light red to deep red, and then from deep red to golden yellow. At this point, the surrounding white clouds seem to be painted with gorgeous colors. Ah! What a gorgeous morning glow! I wish I were a painter, painting this beautiful scenery in the early morning.

I climbed to the top of the mountain and stared at the distant sky. Colorful clouds are constantly changing: for a while, they look like golden apples, for a while, they look like purple grapes, for a while, they seem to become sapphires, pearls and colorful emeralds ... the magnificent sunrise is unpredictable.

Before long, the red sun rose slowly from the eastern horizon like a fireball. In an instant, the trees far and near, the flowers and plants on the ground, the green mountains and green waters are all covered with the glow and full of vitality; Especially the dew on the branches and leaves of vegetation, like the angular Jin Gangzuan, crystal clear and beautiful. The first time I climbed a mountain, I didn't expect the sunrise to be so beautiful!

A breeze is blowing slowly in Yuan Ye. I try to breathe fresh air and enjoy the beautiful scenery in the morning. I can't help mumbling: "Nature, you are so beautiful!" " Suddenly thought of the word "full of vigor and vitality", which can only be realized in nature in the early morning! So I think: Young people, everyone should be full of vigor and vitality!

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Sunrise and sunrise are two kinds of scenery that we can often see. They are related but cannot be confused. With vivid brushstrokes, the article vividly depicts the gorgeous scenery and vibrant weather that is made at sunrise and stopped at sunset, and shows the colorful world of the morning light, giving people a feeling of being immersive and natural. From watching the sunrise and enjoying the beautiful scenery, it is logical to think that young people should be full of vigor and vitality.

The young author can describe natural phenomena such as sunrise and sunrise so vividly, which shows his meticulous observation and rich imagination.

Beautiful starry sky

How beautiful the starry sky is on a summer night! Those twinkling stars are so calm and serene, like bright eyes and shining silver lamps, looking at me and shining on me, which makes me have many fantasies. ...

The Milky Way lies quietly in the blue sky, and bright stars twinkle in the Milky Way, floating on the river like countless navigation lights.

You see, those stars leaning against the Milky Way are more like a swan spreading its wings in the Milky Way, that is "Cygnus". The star at the southern end of the Milky Way is more like a big scorpion with a double tail. It is the famous "Scorpio". The star on the left side of the Milky Way is more like a delicate grand piano. The star on the right side of the Milky Way is more like an eagle that only needs to take off; How dazzling the Altair is, as if looking at Vega on the other side, it reminds us of the beautiful legend of "Cowherd and Weaver Girl". The sky is really a mythical world.

There are stars all over the sky, and they try their best to fuse the bits and pieces of light together. Although they are not as bright as the sun and as clear as the moon, their fantastic light also shines on the earth, turning the earth into a strange world and inducing people's desire to explore.

Ah, I love the starry sky on a summer night, because it is so colorful, so beautiful and so mysterious!

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With beautiful writing style, the little author painted a calm, serene, gorgeous and mysterious summer sky map for readers.

When writing the starry sky, the author first writes the whole scene: "Like bright eyes", "Like shining silver lights" and "Like countless navigation lights floating on the river". Then, grasping the characteristics of the starry sky, the constellations such as Cygnus, Scorpio and Cowherd and Weaver Girl are described in detail. Finally, I expressed my love for the starry sky and nature.

This article is well worded, figurative and rich in associations, and it is worth reading.

Write people

The teacher in my eyes

Not to mention the heart-to-heart communication with the author when reading, only the laughter and laughter of the teacher in class; Not to mention the pleasure of playing the piano, only that the teacher took me through time and space and communicated with celebrity face to face in class with her humorous language; Don't say that strangers help me, just that teachers help me overcome difficulties. Not to mention what I saw and heard on the trip, but the truth and thinking that the teacher gave me in dealing with people.

The teacher in my eyes is very beautiful "Beauty" stays on the surface, and "beauty" goes deep into the heart. Teachers love to wear simple and generous clothes, which at first glance gives people a refreshing feeling.

My teacher is very fashionable. I remember that parent-teacher meeting ... I was sitting at my desk, and the alarm clock on the desk was ticking. I wonder: will the teacher sue me this time? I was just thinking about it when suddenly there was a sound of opening the door. I immediately became "on high alert" and walked softly to the door. The door opened and my mother came in and saw me. She said with a straight face, "Hey, you give me a welcome ceremony!" " "Hearing this, my heart suddenly stopped beating and kept saying," Oh, my God, the world war is about to break out again! ""My mother couldn't help laughing when she saw my face ready to suffer. She excitedly said to me, "Your teacher is really interesting. At the parent-teacher meeting, she showed us an electronic courseware with big photos of your class and' heroic deeds'! Why didn't you tell me when you usually help your classmates study? " My heart finally fell to the ground, and then I was very excited: I usually did a few hours, all of which were recorded by teacher Xixin. It's not that the teacher didn't see my advantages! Thinking about it, I saw a scene of a parent-teacher conference: with beautiful music playing, a photo and a paragraph of text appeared on the screen. Take a closer look. Oh, it turned out to be my activity photo and award-winning composition when I planted trees. When the children's slides appeared, the parents in the seats were smiling. At this moment, a familiar figure appeared in front of my eyes. She is making courseware. It's dark, but the office is still brightly lit. Teacher, I know you have always cared about us. Teacher, you are really a thoughtful and fashionable teacher!

The teacher in my eyes is "a computer" and knows everything. In class, the teacher can always use her humorous and intangible language to make my classmates and me feel high, so that our class is no longer boring and depressed. Masterpieces, epigrams and quips are readily available to teachers and used flexibly. Just after class, the teacher was surrounded by people on the third floor outside. We all like to chat with teachers all over the world. Nowadays, students think that adults are backward, and teachers are a special case. She knows our favorite video games, the latest clothes and the most popular songs.

The teacher in my eyes is a complete bookworm. Whenever I pass by the teacher's office after class, I can always see the teacher reading tirelessly. I think the teacher's erudition has a lot to do with Kan Kan's speech and usual reading accumulation! Every holiday, the teacher will recommend some good books to me and my classmates. After the holiday, when we meet again, we will all go up a storey still higher. Under the influence and edification of teachers, our class was also rated as "scholarly class"!

The teacher in my eyes is like a big sister who cares about us all the time. I remember when I was in the second grade ... I was listening attentively to the teacher's lecture, and when I was in a good mood, my deskmate suddenly pointed at me and shouted, "Ah, why is your mouth bleeding!" ? "I looked at her strangely, but my hand touched my mouth unconsciously. When I saw it, I was bleeding. When I was a child, I was shocked by this situation and began to cry. Hearing this, the teacher quickly came to help me wipe off the blood and check the situation, and comforted me softly: "Don't cry …" Then, the teacher carefully helped me to the infirmary and helped me stop the bleeding with cotton wool.

The teacher's talking and laughing in class made me fly higher and farther like a big bird with wings spread. The teacher used her humorous language to take me to communicate with celebrity face to face through time and space, which made me no longer afraid of writing, and my writing level was even higher. The teacher helped me overcome the difficulties together, let me know gratitude and the beautiful true feelings in the world. The teacher gave me the truth and thinking about life, which made me suddenly enlightened and became a happy and chic girl!

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The opening parallelism sentence shows the author's profound writing skills, and the language is in place and profound, which makes people unforgettable. The following description of the teacher's appearance is concise and powerful. A large number of language and psychological descriptions in the article endow the chapter with soul, and the flexible use of various rhetorical methods also adds a lot of color to the article. The description at the end makes readers deeply feel how kind and excellent the teacher is in the eyes of the little author.

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The sound of the piano touched my heart.

The red sun sets in the west, spreading lonely oranges all over the sky. Under the setting sun, the ancient road in Cang Sang is full of blurred amorous feelings, which is particularly quiet. Everything in the world seems to be intoxicated in this frozen but very short-lived Miri, Malaysia, and all voices are stopped.

I am dragging a long shadow and strolling on a quiet ancient road. My mind is full of thoughts and I am sad for the setbacks and bumps these days. Suddenly, a melodious piano sound mixed with a gentle breeze gently reached my ears. The wonderful piano sound seems far away, unattainable and close, lingering in my ears. I stopped, let this string of smart jumping notes gently slide through my heart and dance happily.

The sound of the piano is still hovering on the path in the pale twilight, but like a clear spring, it washes away the dirt and tired dust of the soul for everyone passing by. My thoughts gradually merged with this clever and wonderful piano sound, and I felt detached from the world of mortals, "concentrating and relaxing, blending with everything."

I followed the trace of the sound and came to a shabby hut. This melodious piano sound is coming from inside. I was just about to hold my breath and play, when the piano suddenly stopped. A childish voice came into my ear: "Grandpa, I'm tired. Playing the piano is really interesting. Although I can't see it, I can feel it with my heart, right? "

An old voice said, "Yes, smiles send us light, you play beautifully. I see how flexible your fingers are, just like dancing on those keys. " My heart suddenly felt like an electric shock, and many question marks rose in my mind. Really ... Really ... I sneaked through the dusty glass window and saw a little girl of seven or eight years old gesticulating with her hands and talking to an old man. It's just that the little girl's eyes have lost their luster, but they show a sense of happy self-confidence. She is blind! The old man sitting there is deaf! My heart was deeply moved again, and two lines of warm tears rolled down quietly. These tears are sweet!

The sunset put away the last ray of sunshine. At the moment when I turned away, the wonderful piano sounded again, which moved me inexplicably again. The ancient road echoed with the laughter of grandparents and grandchildren and the touching sound of the piano. My step forward has become firm, because in this dark night, the moving piano sound is my beacon.

[Comment] The greatest feature of this candidate's article is sincere feelings, delicate and true description, and embodies the writing concept of "writing my heart by hand". Although the story of this article is fictional, it is not melodramatic, melodramatic or melodramatic. The article is sincere and vivid. The rendering of the scenery blends with the wonderful sound of the piano, the dialogue of true feelings and the touch of the heart are touching, and the graceful language and beautiful artistic conception are unforgettable. What we appreciate is that the candidate is writing an article with his sincere heart and his true feelings. American articles have their own merits and styles: literary talent, punchline, or sentimental ... but no matter what kind of articles can arouse readers' thoughts and feelings, they all have one thing in common: articles must be sincere, natural and touching. The examinee's work in this examination room just puts this point into practice, and it is a masterpiece with both virtual and real examination rooms.

Write something

Mini electric fan

I have a mini electric fan, which is very beautiful.

About the size of a mobile phone. It is wearing a beautiful orange coat. There is a fan in the center of it, and there is a small box with seven holes above the fan, which contains fragrant tablets. There is a beautiful pattern composed of English letters below, just like a beautiful flowered skirt, which is tied obliquely at the waist. There is a battery box at the bottom of its back, and the motor is hidden above the box. She is like a naughty little girl who loves beauty.

If you want to turn on the phone, press and hold the left and right buttons, and it will slide up flexibly like a slide phone. Just listen to "click" and the fan will turn on, and there will be a soft and sweet wind blowing to you immediately ... At this time, you just need to close your eyes slightly and enjoy the coolness and comfort it brings you: it's like coming to the depths of the forest in midsummer, sitting by the stream and drawing water with your feet.

I like my small electric fan. I tied a rope to it and hung it on my chest.

Comments: Through careful observation and personification, the author compares the static and boring toy fan to a beautiful and naughty little girl, wearing a beautiful skirt and hiding a motor, which makes people interesting to read. What is especially rare is the use of fans: writing your own feelings, using rich imagination, supplemented by accurate verbs, turning abstraction into concrete and turning general into magic. At the end of the paragraph, after reading the beginning, a "tie" and a "hang" love is beyond words.