The strong wind startled the leaves and everything moved in autumn. The sunset drifted away from the boat and entered the painting screen. Flowing water still remembers pity, and fine grass covers aut

The strong wind startled the leaves and everything moved in autumn. The sunset drifted away from the boat and entered the painting screen. Flowing water still remembers pity, and fine grass covers autumn. When you are drunk, you will be sad. Personally, I think this is not so much a poem as two. The first four sentences describe a picture, but some colors are missing. For example, at sunrise, the river is redder than fire, and in spring, the river is as green as blue. Red and blue set each other off, and the picture suddenly appeared in front of you. Of course, there are also uncolored words, such as: the desert is lonely and straight, and the long river sets the yen. These concrete shapes form a circle, giving people an immersive feeling. The first four sentences can be polished.

The last four sentences suddenly change rhyme. Rhyme changes are not widely used in poetry, and one of the most important reasons is that they will break. Generally, in the place of passion, in order to take care of the change of rhythm and the sublimation of emotion, we will choose to change rhyme. Use with caution!

Generally speaking, this poem is well written, which shows that the poet has a deep foundation. Close your eyes and behave yourself. You can also jump out of metrical poems, try to write ancient poems and use words flexibly. The charm of poetry lies not in format, but in imagination and rhythm.

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