Looking for a model essay

1。 Metaphorical narrative and argumentative writing

1) Hometown River Bridge

A bridge across the river of my memory.

For many years, I often stood by the bridge, overlooking the rolling river and looking up at the towering peaks. Straw houses, fields, beaches, canals, shore willows, cock crowing in the morning glow, dog barking in the evening, eagle flying in the mountain wind, and sheep with smoke returning to the fence. Drawing a unique sketch by the bridge, hanging on the heart screen, also decorated my open mind.

It is an ordinary river, which passes through the open space between the village and the mountain bee, cuts off the connection between the village and the mountain bee, and becomes lonely with each other.

Bridges are also common bridges. Bridge wood is oak or willow cut by fathers from the top of Nanshan Mountain, and it is a pair of two. The big one is on the stone pile in the middle of the river, and the small one falls on the other side. Four pieces of wood are enough to make an ordinary bridge. The small bridge is simple and unpretentious, just like a button that my mother sewed on my inner skirt.

In this way, the small bridge sewed the hope of the small village with the mountain peak.

On the road from Caotan to Nanshan in front of the village, the river cut off the enterprising spirit of the path and sighed at the river. Xiaoqiao bravely lies on the river and connects the nerves and blood vessels in the broken road with his own body. He assumed the responsibility of connection with an unchanging attitude, and greeted and sent without any regrets. Bridge, Trinity. Seen from the top of the mountain, the bridge is two legs extending from the mountain to the village; From the village, the bridge is the arm that the village embraces the mountain peak.

And embracing the mountain bee is to embrace the day of ample food and clothing. Nanshan in my hometown, with a total area of more than 5,000 mu, starts from Lazi and LaoYuefu on the second floor in the east and reaches Fengou and Yangjiakan in the west. There are lush trees, exotic flowers and grasses, mountain products wild fruits, birds and animals.

There are thousands of acres of fertile land on hillsides and roots. If Nanshan is a cornucopia, then the small bridge is the way for villagers to get rich.

The fragrant Tatar flowers have withered and the lotus flowers have blossomed. The first batch of herbs in the mountains has matured. Fritillaria, ground keel, gentian and asarum are in full bloom, waiting for harvest. After the purchase notice was posted at the purchase station of supply and marketing cooperatives, people entered the mountains one after another. We children are also sandwiched between adults, running across the bridge with small hoes on our shoulders, climbing up the hillside full of medicinal incense, and harvesting naturally.

At night, people in the north of Qiaonan Bridge get together and sort out the results. The children ran home happily to accept the rewards of adults. The first fountain pen I used was bought with three catties of asarum, and the bright silver cap and light blue pen tube are still clearly remembered.

The bridge is also the pointer of the clock, which accurately records the sequence changes. One end of the bridge is spring, and the other end is autumn. The shoulder pole that just picked the seeds suddenly became a backpack to carry crops; The earthen basket filled with fertilizer was immediately filled with radish and cabbage. There are golden ears of grain, delicate pods and heavy red sorghum on the bridge. They bent the waist of the bridge.

The small bridge holds up the joy of harvest.

The small bridge also has its leisure. In the drizzle, about a few fishing friends' lines, Ling Bibo hooked hope and wandered leisurely. In late autumn, people always dig a few fish pits on the river under the bridge, or occasionally pick up a row of fish to dry, and hardworking villagers work together with the bridge to catch their own fish.

2) Still pity the bridge in my hometown

I used to walk at the bridge head of Nanjing Yangtze River Bridge, watching the surging river under the bridge and the traffic on the bridge. Listen to the whistle of a cruise ship in the river and the sound of cars passing by on the bridge alternately.

I used to miss Zhao Zhouqiao's wonderful feat, indulge in the gurgling water under the bridge, and watch the people on the bridge come and go leisurely.

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However, what kind of feelings is "still pity the hometown' bridge'"?

If the water in my hometown is as quiet and elegant as the water town in the south of the Yangtze River, the bridge in my hometown will firmly support the land on both sides of the strait, connect you and me who want to meet, and listen to the meditation of homesickness when the moonlight is sultry.

Perhaps, the water in my hometown is fast-flowing. If fierce waves rush up, you and I on the other side can't expect it. However, the bridge in my hometown has crossed the rapids, crossed the broad coast, and built a broad avenue with tough arms. Maybe the wind and frost of the years will swallow up all the bridges, maybe every big wave will try to crush them, but the bridges in my hometown will never collapse. It holds up the road of homesickness with tenacious belief.

Clouds have raindrops to connect them with the earth, crumbling dead leaves will return to their roots one day, and tired birds will return to their warm nests with wings and wind. However, because of the bridge in my hometown, I never feel lonely and helpless. "Tired! Just rest on my back! Do you still want to leave? Then I'll give you a ride. " The bridge in my hometown is always humming "Poison of Wanderers", which is said day after day and year after year. No matter where the prodigal son wanders, even at the end of the world, the ends of the earth. The pace of returning home has never stopped because of the bridge in my hometown.

"Come back! Come back! " Do you hear the bridge in your hometown calling? Whenever homesickness is aroused a little, the bridge of hometown will emerge in front of you. Perhaps, we are getting farther and farther away from the bridge in our hometown. But homesickness will always be heard by it, responding to the songs of the years and becoming a poem that knocks people's hearts. No matter how time goes by, the bridge in my hometown will extend to the distance indefinitely, forever and ever.

As a result, the feeling of "still pity the hometown bridge" gradually rises.

3) On the bridge side

In the dead of night, when there is no one, there is always a voice whispering: What is a bridge? Is it just an enlarged bench? I know this is the restless mind asking questions, and the imaginative brain is spinning at high speed. In this pluralistic world, everything is similar. After thinking for a long time, the gurgling water of the soul brings the answer: water is also a bridge.

Water is a bridge for homesickness. Apart from gold, silver and jewels, the most indispensable thing for the beautiful Zhaojun to get married is the Xiangxi stream, which gave her the face of a wild goose and the gentleness and persistence like water. Several times, with the moonlit night, she returned empty-handed and secretly shed tears in the distance. A long-married aunt can no longer go to the stream to wash gauze and wash her long hair like a cloud with her maid. "The desert is lonely, and the long river falls in yen." No maid in Xiangxi is as close as flesh and blood, and no maid in the Great Wall is a close partner. She was secretly sad at the bottle in the stream, lost her mind and shed tears on the homesick bridge built by the stream.

Water is a bridge of friendship. Is thousands of feet Peach Blossom Pond still the same? The friendship between Li Bai and Wang Lun has been deposited so far, and I can't forget the affectionate eyes of my friends who are still saying goodbye and the tacit understanding that can't be expressed in words. Is there anything unhappy? Raise a glass and have a drink with friends. Bring me my shadow and let's have three drinks alone, which makes people feel sad. The self-drinking of sad people in the distance makes people feel heartache. This bridge of friendship makes "However, as long as China keeps our friendship, heaven will remain our neighbor" a reality. Even if you are far away in Qian Shan, there are people who bless and pray for you. The pool remains the same, and the friendship is getting deeper and deeper. A page of white paper sends you homesickness, and a letter from Hong Fei reminds us of the deep feeling like a pool of water forever.

Water is the bridge of love. A few drops of nectar that Daiyu owed Baoyu in her last life became a bridge for their marriage in this life and interpreted a touching love story. It is this bridge that has created the love of lovers, making them go around the mountains and protect the water like water, ignoring the secular vision, walking out of the dream of heaven, going to hell and looking for a real home. They don't love Jinshan in the south, Yinshan in the west and Tongshan in the east, but prefer the lonely one in the north.

Standing on this little-known bridge, I feel like a long and touching history book, which makes me think deeply and deeply. ...

4) Bridge rhyme

What is a bridge?

Yeah! What is a bridge? Who will consider this question?

Mao Yisheng, a famous bridge scientist, once considered this question carefully. He said: "The bridge is just a bench, and there is a board on its two legs, which can bear the load. Enlarge this bench and' cross' a small river or valley to form a bridge. "

Don't! Bridge, it's not that simple No, not at all!

If so, what is a love bridge? What was the fuzzy rainbow bridge that day? So, it's not easy. There are two complicated bridges in my heart. They are-

Bridge of affection-Wannian Bridge

Time is like a filter, filtering away the dirt in memory and leaving glittering gold. I have enjoyed the simplicity and antiquity of Zhao Zhouqiao, and the vitality and grandeur of the Yangtze River Bridge. However, I always think of the small bridge in my hometown and the dream bridge in my childhood. As long as I have a holiday, constant concern always urges me to find that warm and sweet childhood memory.

This is an ancient stone arch bridge that spans Xin 'an River. The water is beautiful, the river is beautiful and the bridge is beautiful. The bluestone road on the bridge has been polished by the feet of pedestrians.

This bridge has added gorgeous colors to my interesting childhood. However, the wheel of life took away my childhood and innocence when I transferred, moved, moved to high school and lived in school. When I walked to the bridge again, the cheerful and calm feeling of the lake could not help but cause a melancholy ripple.

Listen, there is the sound of running water like a piano under the bridge. It is Taiping Bridge, a bridge full of my childhood and affection.

2。 A model essay emphasizing the process

1) Dare to try (argumentative)

From ancient times to the present, all success lies in brave attempts. The courage to try is the cornerstone of success. Madame Curie discovered radium because she dared to try; Newton discovered Newton's theorem because he dared to try; The students in our school are successful because they dare to try and invent many works that meet the needs of modern people, all because they dare to try.

There is a first time for everything, and not everyone can succeed once and achieve what they want. As long as you dare to try, everything will turn around. In a speech contest, the teacher asked me to give a speech on stage to represent the whole class. Because of psychological pressure, I said to the teacher, "I'll try." As a result, I won the first prize, which was great. As long as you can take the first step in some things, success is not far away.

On the road of life, there are many things that we have never heard of or seen. Some people dare not touch it, but some people can take the first step and try bravely. People who dare not try will never know how rich and interesting the philosophy contained in this matter is. Day after day, year after year, they don't try anything, so this person's life is dull. People are getting older every day. Looking back on the past, my life passed so flatly, as if I had seen all the delicious food on the table. It looked good, but I hadn't tasted it. This is a very regrettable thing in life. Isn't this life in vain?

For a person who dares to try, his life must be colorful and really interesting. Nowadays, new people and things happen every day, and many things are unexpected. Therefore, people who dare to try can get in touch with new things and discover new things every day, and his life experience will grow with his knowledge. When he is old, he still recalls what he tried in the past. Then he tasted every dish of life, the delicacy of life and the delicacy of mountains and seas. He really doesn't want to live this life.

Life is like this. Trying is the first step. If you can cross this step, you will find the fun. Man's life is like a bird, it must learn to fly, otherwise its life will be wasted. Before it learned to fly, it tried to fly into the sky in the bird's nest, but because of its limited ability, it fell down and stood up to continue learning to fly. They all learned to fly by daring to try. Isn't this our life?

2) Try (narrative)

People have to go through countless tests, setbacks and attempts to achieve great things and make money! A lot of things have to be tried by yourself to know success or failure. But do you have the courage?

I only have one moment, my first speech. I remember when I was a sophomore, my teacher sent me to give a speech at the school's Spring Festival cultural performance. In English, I'm surprised. My head is like thunder. Why did the teacher send me? I told the teacher about Tang again and again. I said, "I can't do it myself. I'm so scared in front of the whole school 1000 people. I make mistakes when I am nervous and let the audience make fun of me. " However, the teacher kindly said to me, "You can do it. The teacher believes you. What are you afraid of speaking English in one breath? " Have confidence in yourself. "

Seeing the teacher's support and encouragement, I can't push it. What are we doing? Read only! In my mind, I have been thinking about it for a long time, and there is still a week before the speech contest. I am determined to work hard and practice day and night by myself to read the article thoroughly. If you don't know the words you don't know, find a teacher and a dictionary to understand them.

In a blink of an eye, a week passed quickly, and finally it was time to make a speech. I walked to the center of the audience, and there were 2000 pairs of eyes staring at me below. At first, my hands were a little shaky, my feet were a little soft and my voice was very low. I thought, "What? Say to yourself, don't be nervous When the audience below is ants, look straight ahead and don't look at them. " Finally, I summoned up my courage, amplified my timidity and spoke out bravely. I read this article with great emotion. After about 20 minutes, the audience did not make fun, but applauded. I didn't expect that joy, my eyes were moist, and I did it. Finally, I won the first prize, which won honor for my class and classmates.

Therefore, nothing is impossible for everyone, as long as you try, success and failure, and victory belong to you.

Through this incident, I learned a lot, learned courage, courage and important words, and improved my English reading ability and grades!

Or, as long as you take the first step and bravely cross a wide trench, you can solve a very complicated equation. Give yourself a try!

3。 A model essay that highlights personality

1) responsibility

Is responsibility a confession of the past or a commitment to the future? I once asked myself this question, but a trip to Japan helped me find the answer.

It was my freshman year. Because some works of art were sent to Japan to participate in the competition, I also made a short visit to Hiroshima, Japan.

On the last day of my trip, I went to the Peace Memorial Hall. Maybe that day happened to be the 48th anniversary of the atomic bombing. There are many visitors in the museum. The wall of the memorial hall is covered with sad photos after the atomic bomb explosion, limbs burned by smoke and skin burned by heat wave, which is disgusting. A Japanese woman was telling her children about the tragic experience of that year, but she didn't mention who the real murderer was.

I didn't see any reports about the war in the whole memorial hall. I can't help but ask: "Who should bear the responsibility in those days, and who ruined his country?" No one will say that his country deserves it. However, why not even a little confession? It is not difficult to see from their exhibition that Japan has shifted the responsibility for the destruction of Hiroshima to others. 70,000 people died, but more than 770,000 people in China were trampled by boot fire. With all due respect, this stone tablet bears a grudge, but it is not engraved with a word of repentance and responsibility.

What about us? What should we do in the face of this tragic nation? For us, it is not hatred for the past, nor is it a responsibility for war. Our responsibility should have another meaning. We don't need to rely on temporary blood to pay off our blood debts, but should build a wall against foreign aggression with down-to-earth study, persistent work attitude and strong patriotism instead of building a hate museum.

I can answer this question. For those invaders who brought disaster to China, the "responsibility" should be to repent the past and warn the next generation not to have the same tragedy again. For our new generation of motherland builders, "responsibility" should be a commitment to the future, to provoke the burden of building the motherland, to develop productive forces, to speed up the pace of reform and opening up, to study hard, to create new achievements, so that those countries that attempt to dominate will no longer have the opportunity, so that our 5,000-year-old civilization country, which has experienced the baptism of war, will always stand strong, brave and brilliant in the east of the world!

2) From the moment our mother was born, responsibility is doomed to be inseparable from us.

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Since March this year, I have become a 15-year-old girl, and I am old enough to judge right or wrong by myself. I really hope that I will never grow up, but time always slips through my fingers, jumps over my pen and flies over my dreams like running water. People always have to grow up. With the passage of time, I grew up with endless troubles and sorrows besides joy. I really miss the carefree days when I was a child and I couldn't stand anything.

But now, I am a junior high school student who is about to graduate, and this state makes me afraid to relax all the time. It's the second semester of grade three, and junior high school life is coming to an end, but what have I learned? Looking back on yourself these years, what are you living for? I'm at a loss, I'm at a loss, I can't think I've passed 15 and 15, so what's the value of my existence?

It's been like this all my life 15 years old. How can we make it a year without regrets? What can I do to be worthy of myself and responsible for my life?

15 years old, the world becomes more complicated and there are more temptations. What should I do when beautiful temptations have bewitched people in this city again and again? When facing the crossroads of life, who can tell me which road is really suitable for me? /kloc-at the age of 0/5, you should learn to bid farewell to the roadside temptation that affects the future. After all, it's just a beautiful meteor passing by on the journey, just a passer-by in life. Going to Qiu Lai in spring, day after day, year after year, I have learned to say "no" to my parents who read our diaries privately; Say "no!" to a friend who knows it but is stubborn. To that excellent and considerate boy, he said, "If the true feelings are long-lasting, it will be sooner or later." 15 years old, we have our own thoughts and opinions, and we are no longer dolls at the mercy of our parents; Not a person who sells principles for the so-called "buddy loyalty"; Give up the whole world without being persuaded by a word or two, all the girls with ideals and impulses. After going through hardships again and again, we learned to grow up alone; After falling down again and again, I have learned to stand up strongly. Learn a lesson and start over. After encountering setbacks again and again, I have learned to tell myself that avoiding problems is the biggest problem, and escaping is worthless, because after escaping, problems still exist.

Now, I have gradually matured, carefully looking for the positioning of life. Of course, in this long journey, I may be full of holes and bleeding, but my heart is calm, and my life experience has gradually taught me to heal and stop bleeding.

We need to be responsible for ourselves and our lives! To be able to pay the price for our actions, after all, we are maturing step by step!

The test of responsibility

Every year, every month and every day, thousands of things happen to people. In the busy life, people are in a hurry and exhausted. Although it is so hard, I have been insisting. Because there is a heavy chain around us mercilessly-responsibility.

At school, we study hard, which is our responsibility. At home, we help our parents do housework, which is our responsibility. It is the responsibility to go out and do something for the society. In the world, grass has a responsibility, flowers have a responsibility, and trees have a responsibility. No matter what life is, you have your own unshirkable responsibilities.

Be responsible for yourself and others. There are thousands of traffic accidents in this country every year, and there are various reasons. It can be said that this is not irresponsible. If car drivers are responsible for themselves and others and act according to the rules, will so many people die in vain?

Responsibility is a commitment as heavy as Mount Tai. It promotes generations of people to devote themselves diligently in their respective posts. Under the attack of SARS this year, 6 million medical staff bravely rushed to the front line. They are brave. They are fearless. In the fight against SARS, no one is afraid and no one flinches. No matter how terrible SARS is, the strong sense of responsibility of medical staff can't be swallowed. When the patient came, everyone took care of him day and night. Some medical staff fell, and someone came to supplement them immediately. In this battle, which is more dangerous than bullets without smoke, they have lived up to the high hopes placed on them by the country and people. Finally, SARS was achieved, which was exchanged with the dedication and strong sense of responsibility of medical staff day and night. If they don't have a strong sense of responsibility, they don't know how long this storm will last and how many innocent lives will be taken.

The ancient Greeks said that people walked with heavy burdens on their backs. There are family, career, friendship, children in the baggage ... after suffering, I can't throw away any of them. Because it says two words: responsibility. In life, there are tests of responsibility everywhere. Inadvertently picking up a piece of waste paper is the responsibility to protect the environment; Helping the frail old people and children is the responsibility of respecting the old and loving the young; Solving difficulties for others is the responsibility of helping others. Responsibility is the foundation of society. Without it, tall buildings can easily shake in the breeze. Responsible for yourself, the responsibility is strict instructor; Paying responsibility to others, responsibility is the guarantee of life and property safety; Being responsible for the country is a condition for social progress. Abandoned it, I felt the temporary ease of standing, but lost the glory of my life. Responsibility is a mission that cannot be abandoned. It is shouldered by people. Let each of us have a sense of responsibility to overcome the sudden tests again and again!