This composition is about suspense and horror. Does anyone have any materials? Must adopt!

Reading the full text (***2 pages) It is understood that the topic of Chinese composition in the college entrance examination this year is still material composition, and there is only one kind of material. The materials are as follows:

A shipowner asked a painter to paint the boat. After painting the boat, the painter repaired the leak on the boat by the way. Soon after, the master gave the painter a large sum of money. The painter said, "The salary has been paid." . The owner said, "This is the money for repairing the ship." The painter said, "That's by the way." The host said, "When I learned that my children were sailing, I knew they couldn't come back. Because there was a leak on the ship, now they have returned safely, so I thank you! .

Write a composition on this topic.

As soon as this composition was exposed, it was hotly debated by many post-80 s.

Among them, composition difficulty is the most difficult composition in the country after the debate.

Analysis:

1. According to the theme given in the topic, we can know that my children will not come back when they learn that they are sailing. The analysis shows that there are loopholes in this ship, and the owner knew it long before going to sea.

According to the painter, "that's by the way." It can be seen that the person responsible for repairing the hole in this ship is not a painter, but a security inspector and others.

3. From the analysis of the subject matter, if the person in charge of repairing the hole in this ship does not clearly point out who it is, and the owner knows that there is a loophole, then it can be seen that the biggest person in charge is the owner himself.

From the moment I learned that my children were sailing, I knew they couldn't come back. It can be seen from this sentence that it is a bit late for the shipowner to take remedial measures when repairing the hole. But from now on, they have returned safely. There is great doubt about the word "que" here. Why don't they return safely now? There is an incredible understanding of this fact in this tone. It can be said that the master means that they should all be dead, right? Why are they all alive?

First of all, if the shipowner knows that there is a leak but doesn't make it up immediately after the ship sails, it may be a major dereliction of duty in his work. In addition, according to his later sentence, now they have returned safely, and combined with the previous tone, it is inferred that the shipowner has the intention of deliberately not filling the hole. If the ship really sank, the murder was established. Finally, the master gave the painter a large sum of money. The painter said, "the salary has been paid." The owner said, "This is the money for repairing the ship." It can be understood that the shipowner fined him more for his negligence this time (whether it was originally intended to let these guys go to sea but was broken by a painter, I admire the painter for giving him money; Or did you forget to fill the hole when it was time to fill it, and punish yourself for this crime? )。 It can also be understood as letting the painter feel the reward of careful work and draw a satisfactory conclusion. Of course, we know that choosing the latter, writing, choosing the former, suspense and horror.